Thank you everyone for your reviews. This is my first fanfic ever and to tell the truth I really doubted that I could right one at all. When I get some more I will start to thank my avid readers personally but for now you guys gave me the confidence boost to continue on. THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!
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Disclaimer: "Don't make me say it again please" lawyers just stare evilly "fine I'll say it" sticks tongue out at lawyers "I don't own naruto or any of its character, but all the o.c's are mine"!
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"Chapter one" normal speech
"Are you sure?" normal thoughts
"I'm still in here" demon/inner being speech
"Damn seal…" demon/inner being thoughts
"Grand fireball Jutsu" ninja techniques
Ok everybody here we go on to chapter one!
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(13 years later)
Four figures arrive at the gates of konoha. They look worn out like they had been running a marathon all week with no breaks or water. The figures were all easily recognizable with their very different looks and clothing styles. The adult wore all black with a tan or light green vest with a blue face mask covering most of his lower face with his headband pulled down covering his left eye, his hair was grey and shooting up at and angle that seemed to defy gravity. This man was kakashi Hatake, who was now a jonin (1). The only girl on the team had bright pink hair that matched her red dress she was wearing with her headband atop her head holding her hair down into a style she thought was cute, and kept flashing glances at the dark haired boy of the group. This boy was Sasuke Uchiha; he was wearing grey cargo shorts with a dark blue shirt that had a red and white fan symbol on his back representing his clan. He had black hair that was neat but looked like he put no effort into it, he kept a brooding face on showing no emotion besides annoyance at the pink haired kunoichi (2) and his blond haired companion that was loudly talking to himself about how much ramen he was going to eat when they arrived. The blond haired boy was Naruto Uzumaki; He had blond hair that was spiked no matter how much he tried to make it lie down. (Which wasn't very hard he thought it looked cool) He was wearing a bright orange jumpsuit with red swirls on the shoulders, which was his personal choice for a clan symbol.
"Hey Sasuke when we get back you want to go on a date I know this great barbeque restaurant?" the kunoichi asked.
"No" was Sasuke reply
"I'll go with you Sakura-Chan" said naruto
"No way naruto!" she said as she socked him in the stomach and stomped away after Sasuke, who was already walking back towards his clan house while Kakashi stated that he had to go see the hokage and warped away. Now that naruto was alone again he took off the mask he always had which showed him to be a idiot with no skill what so ever, he really was extremely intelligent and had great chakra (3) control but if he showed that earlier on in his life the villagers would've just tried harder to kill him. As he walked past them most of the villagers gave him cold glares and said things like "Kyubii spawn, demon brat you should just curl up and die", but he was used to that by now. He had found out about Kyubii almost a year ago right after he failed the genin (1) exam for the third time. A teacher who he thought he could trust tricked him into stealing a forbidden scroll (5) and then when he was found by this teacher the truth about Kyubii sealed inside him was revealed. He would've left the village right then but then something happened he never thought would.
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(Flashback)
Naruto was sitting there panting after working so hard to master the Kage bunshin when Mizuki, who had told him about the scroll, appeared in a tree over head while his other teacher Iruka appeared besides naruto.
"Naruto give me the scroll, Mizuki used you to get the scroll it contains forbidden skills that would endanger the entire village" Iruka told Naruto.
"Don't think he cares about you naruto no one does, but he puts up a good act doesn't he?" Mizuki stated too calmly.
"Wh-what do you mean, why do they hate me so much what did I ever do to them?"
"you did nothing wrong naruto I don't hat-"
"shut up Iruka, you know you hate him he killed you parents that night 13 years ago, so don't act like you don't hate his guts" turning to naruto " you want to know why they hate you so much naruto? It's because the nine-tailed fox that almost destroyed the village and killed Iuka's parents is sealed in you! You are the nine-tailed fox!"
Naruto was silent, and then he turned to a sobbing Iruka "Is-Is that true Iruka sensei am I the Kyubii?"
"No, you are naruto Uzumaki of the village of konoha you are not the Kyubii, but yes it is sealed in you that's why all the villagers hate you so much but I don't hate you naruto, you try hard and get back up after a –"He was cut off by a kick to the face when he landed he smacked into a tree and went unconscious. Naruto just stared at the one man who had acknowledge him when no one else would and began to feel a cold hatred well up inside him that burst forth at Mizuki next words "heh he what a weakling now I get to kill the fox and take the scroll guess it's two for one night eh naruto?" he said while pulling out a kunai (6). Multi shadow clone jutsu was heard loudly throughout the area a smoke billowed out when it cleared there were thousands of clone in every tree of the area. Mizuki just stared as the clones swarmed him and beat the crap out of him.
(End flashback)
Naruto sighed as he remembered that shortly after that Iruka gave naruto his own headband to symbolize that he had graduated and that was when naruto found his first precious person. He had just arrived at his destination, his favorite ramen shop and was just about to order when a shinobi from the hokage office arrived and informed him that he needed to go there as soon as possible because the hokage had some thing important to tell him. "Ok I'll be right there" he replied as he canceled his order and got up to see the hokage.
(At hokage tower)
Sarutobi was just beginning to make some progress through the pile of paperwork when a loud knock was heard at his door "come in, oh naruto just the person I wanted to see" "before you begin old man I want to ask again do you know who my parents were and don't lie to me I know you know this so either tell me or come up with a good reason why I shouldn't know who my mom and dad were." "All right I'll tell you but you have to promise that you won't do anything rash when you find out cause it will be a shock." Naruto just nodded "all right I don't know much about your mother other than she was strong and kind, I don't know what her clan name was or where she came from because she refused to talk about her past to anyone but the fourth….your father." He waited while he watched naruto face to from shock to rage and then he barely calmed himself down enough to listen to the rest "the reason I didn't tell you this before is the fact that your dad had many enemies who would love to act out their revenge on his son and I figured you had enough troubles in your life to deal with anyway."
"So now that we got that out of the way what did you want to talk to me about?" naruto was storming on the inside he wanted to yell and scream but he was a man of his word and he had promised so he kept it locked away to think about later.
"You're not going to like this I'm disbanding your team as of now you Sakura and Sasuke will all have private sensei's"
"What! Why I like my team?"
"Naruto don't lie to me I know Sakura treats you like trash, Sasuke hates your guts with a passion, and kakashi favors Sasuke over the rest of you so I'm doing this so you will become strong enough to achieve your dream whatever that will be in years to come."
"Ok old man then who's going to be my sensei?" naruto asked eagerly
"Well Sakura's getting the sannin Tsunade to train her, Sasuke's staying with kakashi."
"Who cares who they get old man who's going to be teaching me?"
"Well, you get to be trained by……….."
"WHHHATTTTT!!!!!!!!" was head all over konoha.
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Meanwhile at the front gate three people walked up to gate wearing cloaks stating that they were here to participate in the chunnin (1) exams. When they passed the guard the one in the lead spoke up "finally the home town of the Uchiha, time to gets some payback by doing to them what they did to me!"
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Well there we go another chapter down hope you all liked it please give me ideas for who should teach naruto, and when it comes to the exam team seven will be temporarily put back together so don't worry it will still happen basically the same as in the show except team seven will be different in their styles. Please RxR for me thanks.
Chapter vocabulary
Genin, Chunnin, Jonin: these are different ranks in the shinobi world with genin being the lowest and jonin being the highest besides hokage
Kunoichi: translated to female ninja
Chakra: energy all shinobi use to perform techniques that include blowing fire to many other techniques
Scroll: shinobi versions of books
Kunai: Basic weapon for shinobi, basically a knife that can be used for many different purposes
Chapter jutsu guide
Multi shadow clone jutsu: naruto creates hundreds of copies of himself that are at his beck and call the only difference between him and his clones is if they get hit once they disappear in a poof of smoke, the can do damage to others though unlike normal clones.