Thank you everyone for your review of the last chapter and I'm sorry for all of you who wanted a full fight between Sakura, Tsunade, Naruto, and Jiraya. I promise to put one in eventually but that was mainly a way for me to introduce my o.c's' to everyone. I'm going to put a poll at the end of this so please give me your opinions I really need them.
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"Hey there" normal speech
"Hey there" normal thoughts
"Leave me alone" demon speech
"I mean it!" demon thoughts
Kage bunshin jutsu
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I don't own naruto or any of its characters, but the o.c's are mine so ask if you want to use them I would like to read the story they're in.
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Four figures could be seen leaping through the trees in the direction of a tower that could be seen in the distance. These four figures were taking part in the second stage of the chunnin exams which took place in the forest of death as it was called; their objective was to obtain a heaven scroll and an earth scroll. They had started out with the heaven scroll and had quickly knocked out a team from the village hidden in the mist and taken their earth scroll so they were practically done they just had to make it to the tower in one piece. The shinobi in the front of the group had long black hair and eyes that were almost pale white, his name was Neji Hyuuga, the shinobi following him had black hair as well but he had it in a bowl cut, he was wearing a green jumpsuit, his name was Rock Lee. Following them were two others who were leaping side by side, one girl and one boy. Said girl had brown hair that was up in two buns that gave her a mouse looking appearance when looked at from a distance, her name was Tenten Hiroshi. The boy had blonde hair and blue eyes; he was wearing a black shirt with a blood red fox on the front, whose tails wrapped around to the back. He had black cargo pants on that had two swirls of red on the front two pockets, this boy was Uzumaki Naruto and he was waiting in anticipation to finish this stage of the exams. A few minutes of running and they had arrived at a field near the tower, said field was occupied by two teams. One was a team from the rain nation and they were not that unique to look at but the leader was very different, he was holding an umbrella for no apparent reason. The other team was from sand, In front was a boy with spiky red hair, he had a huge gourd made of sand strapped to his back and the kanji for love was tattooed above his left eye, his name was Sabaku no Gaara. The boy to the red-heads left was wearing a black suit that almost gave him cat ears, he had something wrapped up in bandages strapped to his back that was big enough for a body, he also had purple face markings, Sabaku no Kankuro was his name and he wasn't happy to see the rain nin in front of them but he wasn't worried either. The final member was a girl with blonde hair that was put up into four short pigtails, she also had a large fan strapped to her back, she was Sabaku no Temari. The group was too far to hear what Gaara and the Nin with the umbrella were talking about but they got the point when the rain Nin threw a bunch of spinning umbrellas into the air that released thousands of needles that the Nin controlled perfectly. The Nin smirked confidently at Gaara then made all the needles fly down at Gaara leaving no room for Gaara to escape, when they hit there was a huge cloud of smoke. When it cleared the rain nin were shocked to see Gaara surrounded by sand that had blocked all the needles, then Gaara raised his hand making the sand shoot out and surround all three nin lifting them into the air. Sand coffin was heard as Gaara closed his hand into a fist causing his sand to crush all three Nin killing them instantly. Naruto jumped down near the sand team "now was killing all three of them really necessary Gaara?" he asked as he walked up waving at all three.
"Not really but they annoyed the hell out of me" Gaara replied as Temari finally noticing that it was naruto ran over and jumped on him giving him a big hug. In the background you could see a furious Tenten being held back by a stunned Lee.
"So did you guys get your two scrolls" they nodded "well then lets get out of this damn forest" he said as they all headed towards the tower. They arrived a few minutes later and were told they had passed the second stage.
(Meanwhile, in a different part of the forest of death)
Emechna was getting really annoyed, her team had bumped into a team from Iwa and they were good a blocking and dodging everything she threw at them although with her teammates help she had taken down two of them without activating her bloodline, but this last one was a hell of a lot better than the others and both her teammates were almost out of chakra. She was running low herself when some mud from the ground shot out and trapped her in one spot as the rock nin started walking towards her smirking "so what are you going to do know you can't move and your friends can't help you little girl" he said arrogantly as he stopped a few feet away and pulled the katana off his back.
"Shit! I'm going to have to use it" she thought but just as she was summoning up the chakra to do her technique, a voice cried out Ice Fox Fist! A second later a giant chunk of ice that was in the shape of a fox head came down right on the rock nin killing him instantly. She looked to where the ice had come from and saw three people there in the shadows "Who are you and why did you save us?" she asked them. The one in front stepped out first "Well I couldn't let a beautiful girl like you die could I?" He asked causing her to blush. He had short brown hair that went everywhere because he didn't care (he secretly thought it looked cool), he had brown eyes that flashed blue as a rose made of ice appeared in his hand, he was wearing a dark black shirt with yellow lettering asking would you like to play with my kunai, he also had dark blue pants on that had almost an infinite number of pockets on them everywhere you looked.
"Flirting with cute girls again are we?" said the figure on the left as he stepped into the light "My name is Kyo Honda it's nice to meet you". He had orange hair that spiked almost exactly like Narutos with hazel eyes. He was wearing a blue shirt with an orange cat on it with the kanji for dam cat written above it.
"Introduce yourself first before speaking to a stranger next time Kyo" said the third figure as he stepped forward he had black hair the was smoothed back over his head down to his shoulders, he wore a dark black shirt similar to the one Kyo wore except that instead of a cat he had a dragon and the kanji for it. "My name is Hatori Honda, please forgive my brothers rudeness" he said as he bowed in front of her.
"No need to apologize my name is Emechna Trine it's nice to meet you, and thank you for saving me with the ice fox, that was awesome who did it?" she asked.
"That would be me" the first one who had spoken said.
"Thank you again but I didn't get your name?" he ignored her question asking if this was the scroll they need when he took it from one of the rock nin bodies, when she nodded he handed it to her and his team headed off towards the tower.
"Dammit answer my question!" she thought as her team took off after them catching up to them when they reached the tower "Tell me your name please so I can remember who saved me" she yelled at him. He stopped in his tracks turned to look at her and gave her a foxy grin "My name is Shigure Uzumaki please remember it" he said as his team entered the tower leaving a very shocked and blushing grass kunoichi outside. She came to her senses a few seconds later and her team entered the tower.
(Few hours later in an arena in the middle of the tower)
All the shinobi who had passed the second stage were lined up by their respective villages with konoha having four teams, sand having one, sound one, grass one, and Ice had one team which was the three Emechna had met before. The hokage walked in front of them all and congratulated them for making past the second stage, but just as he was about to say something else a shinobi appeared in front of him and apologized but said he would take it from here.
"It seems we had too many pass the first two stages so we have to have some preliminary fights before we go on to the finals" the jonin said as he coughed into his hand. The thought of fighting each other got some nervous while others were excited, including one Sasuke Uchia who had a rough time in the forest he had bumped into a man named Orochimaru who just as he was leaving stretched his neck to unbelievable lengths and bit Sasuke on the neck leaving a very painful curse mark that bothered him continuously.
"The wall with two empty slots behind you will reveal who fights who in the prelims" the sickly looking jonin stated as they all turned to look at the wall with the two blank screens. Suddenly two names appeared in the black spaces.
Shino Aburame vs. Zaku
"Will all others please move out of the arena" the jonin asked as everyone but the two fighters left the floor to watch from the balconies that were lining the room. Back in the arena the two combatants were staring each other down. Zaku had both his arms in a sling when he removed the left one; he had both his arms seemingly broken by Sasuke when they bumped into him in the forest. "I think this arm will be enough to beat you" he said to shino who didn't reply and just stared at him waiting for the proctor to start the match.
"First match begin" jonin said as he jumped to the side of the arena.
Zaku moved first he lifted his left arm and shouted Zankuha: the blast that slices air! As a huge blast of sound slammed into shino, creating a huge cloud of smoke. When it cleared they saw shino brushing himself off, he had a few holes in his face that you could see bugs squirming under his skin healing his wounds. He simply looked at Zaku and pointed behind him. When Zaku looked back he saw an army of bugs squirming behind him "Those are Kikai beetle, the feast on a person's chakra. If you use your hand to blast me they will swarm you from behind, if you attack them then I will get you from here the smart shinobi saves his trump card for last" Shino stated calmly. Zaku just started laughing "You want a trump card you got one!" he shouted as he pulled his other arm out of the sling aiming one arm at shino and one at the mass of bugs he did Zankuha again, but the same result didn't happen this time. Instead both of his arms exploded, as he stared at his arms laying on the ground with a confused expression clearly on his face shino explained "When you were busy gloating over that first hit on me I had my bugs go over and plug the holes in your hand so you couldn't hit me with that again" he stated to calmly as he walked up to the balcony.
"Winner Shino Aburame"
There were scattered claps heard around the room as everyone was still shocked about what happened as they watched a medic team come and pick Zaku up, the screens changed again to show the next fighters.
Sasuke Uchia vs. Kin
"This will be over in no time" Sasuke said confidently as he jumped to the floor below while kin just walked down the stairs. They both stood there smirking confidently at each other.
"Match begin"
Kin took off throwing a few senbon needles with bells attached to them at Sasuke who dodged them and threw a few shruiken which she dodged in return by leaping to the left. He then threw some kunai which she dodged by jumping back to the right, Sasuke smirked as he threw a windmill shuriken at her just as she dodged it Sasuke pulled on the strings he had attached to all his weapons causing them to change direction and come at kin from behind, she had nowhere to go so she just braced herself for the impact. They hit her arms and back causing her to fall to the ground; Sasuke confidently turned his back on her and started walking towards the edges of the arena thinking the match was won already. Suddenly he heard a wail-like screaming fill the arena as he was blasted face first into the wall, turning around he saw kin still standing with a kunai still in her back "What was that?" he asked her.
"That was the Banshee wail a technique that only I can do" she said confidently. Sasuke took this moment to run forward and kick her high into the air, Lee in the sidelines saw this "That's my lotus technique how could you Sasuke" he said as Gai and naruto shook their heads in shame at what Sasuke had done. Meanwhile in the air "From here on its all original" he said as he kicked with his right leg which was blocked, the punched with his left arm which was also blocked. Kin smirked "not good enough" she said, Sasuke smiled right at her as his left leg hit her gut sending her flying back towards the ground while Sasuke finished with an axe kick to her gut when they landed effectively knocking kin unconscious.
"Winner Sasuke Uchia"
Everyone started clapping with the notable exception of Naruto, Gai, Lee, Neji, and Tenten. They all then watched in anticipation as the boards when blank again, meanwhile kakashi had taken Sasuke away to have his curse mark sealed until Jiraya could get a look at it. The boards finally revealed the next names.
Shikamaru Nara vs. Kyo Honda
"So troublesome" was heard as Shikamaru made his way to the floor while Kyo stepped into a shadow portal and walked out another on the arena floor.
"Next match start"
Neither combatant moved staring each other down as they tried to figure a good starting move, unknown to either of them they both had similar I.Q. scores and abilities. Kyo started of first as he flew through a few seals and shouted Shadow Dragons Flame! As a dragon composed of shadows rose from the ground and breathed black flames in the direction of Shikamaru, who barely dodged to the side as he sent out his tendril of shadow. Kyo just stood there as the shadow latched to his feet "Shadow possession jutsu complete" Shikamaru said as he was sure that his opponent couldn't move when he heard Kyo shout out Shadow tsunami as a huge wave of darkness crashed into Shikamaru smashing him into the same wall that Sasuke had been smashed against last match. "How were you still able to move when my possession jutsu had you?" he asked.
Kyo laughed "You call that a shadow jutsu? I'm a master of shadow jutsus' your pathetic attempts don't affect me at all so I guess I'm immune to your shadow techniques" he replied.
"This is too troublesome I forfeit the match" Shikamaru said as he started walking back onto the balcony. The boards had gone blank again, and then two more names appeared.
Emechna Trine vs. Sakura Haruno
Both females jumped from the balcony and stood there waiting to be told to begin the match.
"Match begin"
Sakura started off by creating two clones and running right at Emechna. Emechna just stood there as sakura charged, when sakura threw at punched she bent from side to side, forward and backwards, every which way like she was a tree in the wind "So you are the Haruno I heard so much from Naruto about, can't say I'm impressed." Emechna said while still dodging and not throwing a single attack in return. "So what did he talk your ear off about how beautiful and great I am, I would never go out with that dead last even if my life depended on it" said Sakura derisively, this was stopped when a fist hit her face dead on sending her flying back she saw a violet eyed Emechna glaring at her. "You never tried to see who he really was did you? You never cared, that whole time he was talking to you, asking you out everyday, if you had really thought of him as your comrade then you would've noticed that it was a mask hiding his pain and his hurt that he was feeling you cold hearted bitch!" Emechna screamed at her as a fireball appeared out of nowhere slamming head on into sakura, and then grass grew out of the ground and became sharp as knives slicing into sakura. "H-how are you doing this?" She stammered out as she watched a very pissed off Emechna stalking towards her "It's my bloodline, The Ranmyaku it's called" she said as sakura found herself frozen to the wall "Now say you give up" Emechna demanded as the ice inched it's way up Sakura neck. "I give up" shouted sakura. The ice then broke apart as Emechna walked up to Naruto on the balcony and gave him a hug which pissed of Temari and Tenten, it also pissed of Shigure "Why does he get the cute ones" he thought then his attention was caught up when the boards revealed the next two names.
Shigure Uzumaki vs. Ino Yamanaka
Said fighters jumped to the arena floor, though Shigure came down on a slide made of ice he had made. When they both stood facing each other Shigure grinned "well looks like I get to face the feared Mind transfer technique of the Yamanaka clan, huh?" he said confidently while bouncing from foot to foot. Ino didn't reply she just stared at the boy who shared the same name as Naruto, speaking of Naruto she looked up at him to see a stunned expression. He finally came to his senses enough to shout out "Who are you and why do you have the same last name as me?" Shigure looked up at him and smiled "Because I'm your long lost brother, and I'll tell the rest after the fight so you enjoy the show, and you to my beautiful ice rose" he said those last word to Emechna causing her to blush.
"Match begin"
"Ice Surf Jutsu" Shigure shouted as he jumped on a chunk of ice and started to slide around the arena at extreme speeds. Ino jumped into the middle of the circle he was making to dodge getting run over when another jutsu was heard. "Time to have some fun and end this Crushing ice dome" he shouted out as the trail he had made while surfing rose up, anyone who looked closely at his eyes at this point would notice they were as blue as narutos when the dome was complete the eyes changed back to brown. The dome then started to shrink; they could hear Ino slamming into the walls trying everything she could to get out but nothing was working. Finally when she couldn't move considering that the shield had shrunk that much a shout was heard from inside "I give up, just let me out of this damn thing my butt is freezing off!" The dome collapsed showing a shivering Ino standing there looking very disappointed with how her match had gone.
"Winner Shigure Uzumaki"
Shigure turned back to where Naruto was and spoke "I've come to try and convince you to come home with me to see the rest of your family" he said.
"Where is home? And I still have family alive?" Naruto asked nervously.
"Yes, you have a whole clan waiting for you in the village hidden in the Glacier where I'm from so will you come with me?" he said holding his hand out in the direction of Naruto.
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Wow that was a long chapter now I need everyone's help so please R & R and take part in the poll.
Naruto paired with whom?
Tenten
Temari
Emechna
If Emechna is not paired with naruto who should she pair with?
Shigure
Neji
Lee
Should I make a character bio chapter or should I just ignore that information and keep going? Please give your opinions I really would like to hear them.
Chapter Jutsu
Sand Coffin: A signature technique of Gaara where he causes his sand to wrap up his victim then crushes them to death.
Ice Fox Fist: a signature technique of the ice village Uzumaki clan where a solid chunk of ice shoots of their fist and take the shape of a fox head as it crushes the opponent.
Zankuha: A technique that only Zaku can do where he shoots a blast of sound out of the holes in the palms of his hands with massive force.
Banshee Wail: the user sucks up air and chakra into their mouth then combines the released air and chakra from her mouth with a scream that does widespread damage.
Shadow Dragons Flame: A technique that only half of the Honda clan can perform where a shadow dragon head forms in front of the user and breathes black flames at the opponent.
Shadow possession: a Nara clan Jutsu where the users shadow connects to the opponents making them copy the users' movements.
Shadow Tsunami: Another technique that only half of the Honda clan can use where a tidal wave of darkness crashes down on the opponent.
Ranmyaku: A bloodline ability of the trine clan that was almost completely destroyed by the Uchia clan in their fear of another bloodline more powerful than the sharingan. It allows the user to use any jutsu without hand signs and blocks the sharingan from copying any jutsu while active.
Mind Transfer: A technique of the Yamanaka clan where the user transfers their mind into their opponents' body gaining complete control over it.
Ice surf: a technique where the user creates a chunk of ice that continuously replenishes itself at the rate it melts allowing the user to hop on and ride around at speeds no shinobi could run at.
Crushing Ice Dome: Used in conjunction with the Ice surf, the trail the ice surf makes raises up forming a dome over the opponent that continuously gets smaller eventually crushing the opponent to death.
Thanks for any reviews.
