Heres the first chapter and I know my spelling and grammer are off so yeah this is me saying sorry ahead of time.

Cometpaw's P.O.V.

I padded through the forest coming back with my mentor from a late hunting patrol my mentor Mapleheart said that it would be ok if we were a little late as we walked I let my mine wander but was snapped out of it by a bright light passing in the sky, "Mapleheart what is that?" I asked dropping the prey I was carrying.

Mapleheart turned to me and set down her prey, "That's what you got your name from that's a comet."" She told me and then we both watched it pass

I turned to her, "I got my name from something that beautiful and amazing?" I asked, "Was that really a comet?"

Mapleheart purred in amusement, "Don't under estimate your self and yes that was a comet" she said to me, "now let's get back to camp or else Lynxstar will have our pelts!" Mapleheart said and with that we set off.

Basilleaf's P.O.V.

"You did really good at battle train today you'll make a fine warrior some day Butterflypaw." I said to the white flecked she cat padding next to me her I was asked by her mentor Metalstain to take her training while shes doing patrols today.

Butterflypaw beamed at this praise, "Thanks Basilleaf " Butterflypaw said to me.

"But really you are a great fighter" I told her she twiched her whiskers then something flashed through the sky I glanced up to see a coment flying across the sky.

"Wow! Basilleaf isn't that a comet?" Butterflypaw asked as she saw it fly across the sky I nodded, "Cool! I got to see a comet I bet you not many cats get to see one." Butterflypaw said to me.

I nodded in agreement "Yeah most likely not" I said to her, "Not lets get back to camp or Metalstain will rip my pelt off for keeping you out all night." I said to her and we set off back to camp.

Banepaw's P.O.V.

I padded with Moonpaw looking for moss for the elder's den we had gotten into trouble because we were arguing and not listening to orders so now we had to find moss for the elders and it was late now that we were heading back. We were walking past the training area which was a small open grass field as I glanced at it I got the sudden want to do some battle ttraining so I turned to Moonpaw and set down the moss he was carrying she paused and looked at me I smirked, "Hey Moonpaw how about some battle training?" I asked knowing she wouldn't be able to pass up a chance to try and show me up.

Moonpaw twitched her whiskers and set down the moss she was carrying, "Banepaw we have to get back to camp or else Spiralstar will rip our pelts off and wear them to the next gathering." She said to me.

I twiched my ear, "Come on Moonpaw you know you want to this could be your chance to show me up come on, please?" I asked choosing my word carefully.

Moonpaw rolled her eyes, "Any other time when you don't want something you act like you're greater the starclan its self," she stated.

I pounced on her and pinned her, she looked a bit taken back by this I smirked "That's because it's true," I said in a low voice just then I saw something reflect in Moonpaw's eye and I looked up to see a comet fly over head,

I watched it until I felt Moonpaw flip over switching her position with mine, "Greater then starclan?" She asked, "Now let's get back to camp.

Tinypaw's P.O.V.

I padded over to where Blizzardpaw sat a mouse clamped in my jaws I nudged his shoulder with my nose signaling that I was asking if he wanted to share the mouse with me and he turned to me, "Yeah sure I'll share if you want me too." He said I sat down next to him and dropped the mouse down and we both ate it together after I finished I licked his ear a little he purrd, "Your my best friend to" he said to me. Thats what I liked about Blizzardpaw he always under stood what I was trying to say, "Hey look Tinypaw" Blizzardpaw signaled towards the sky I looked up to see a comet fly over head I watched it, "Yeah its beautiful isn't i?" Blizzardpaw commented I nodded.

Shade's P.O.V.

"Hey there Shade" I heard a voice greet me and turned to see Sleek he looked around, "No Frost?" He asked.

"Hey Sleek and no she's sleeping." I said to him he nodded his head as I spoke as she a few cats heading over towards us I ulerted Sleek buty pointing with my muzzle He turned I scented the air, "Clan cats" I warned Sleek nodded and we waited for them to catch up with us.

"You two there who are you and why are you on flameclan territory?" Asked a dark grey she cat with black eyes on one side of her there was a Black tom with yellow eyes and on her other side there was a Grey tome with green eyes next to him was a smaller orange tom.

"When one asked some elses name its only polite to give yours first." I said with a smirk.

"Hey you can't just-" The smaller ginger tom started but was cut off by the Dark grey she cat

"Foxpaw silence." She comanded, "Fine I am Metalstain this is Duskwhispers" she signaled the the black tom, "Sootface" She signaled to the grey tom, "and Foxpaw" the smaller ginger tom, "now who are you?" She asked.

I dipped my head "I and Shade an this is Sleek." I said signaling to Sleek.

"You're rouges?" She asked

"Rouge is a harsh lable I perfer cat whom enjoys a lawless life." I said to her that was it she lost it and pouced at me I stepped back and she missed me, "Sleek I say we take are leave" and with that we ran off.

I sat with Sleek looking at the stars then I saw a comet fly by "well would you look at the." Sleek commented

I nodded, "Yeah not something you see every day

The end I know it was kind boring and yes the comet is important you'll find out later...Review if you wish I'm not going to beg you