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Moonpaw's P.O.V.
I padded through the forest crouching low when I spotted a mouse and crept closer,"Moonpaw!" whaled Echopaw as she ran over to me and in a heart beat the mouse was gone.
"Echopaw what's so important that woy made my lose that mouse?" I said turning to her.
"Sorry but Banepaw and Shadowpaw haven't come back yet! What if he left the clan!" She said distress in her eyes.
"With Shadowpaw?" I asked knowing Banepaw had no intrest in she cats at the moment he was more focesed on things like breaking every rule posible, being the best at every thing, ruening his back right leg, not listening to Willowfrost, getting every cat posible angry at him and hurting Starryhope.
"Yes!" She wailed,"I new he didn't like me!" She wailed.
"Stop wailing like a kit before you scare off ever bit of prey there is!" I said putting my tail over her mouth,"he'll come back." I told her know he would.
"Will I?" Came a voice behind me and whipped around to see Banepaw Shadowpaw next to him.
"Banepaw, Shadowpaw where in Starclan's name have you been?" I asked the to. Shadowpaw looked down at her paws and Banepaw shruged.
"Does it matter I'm here now aren't I?" He said. I hated that. I hated how Banepaw could just brush off anything that happens like it was dust on his pelt.
"Yes it matters Spiralstar sent out four seach patrol for the two of you!" I said.
"Banepaw!" Snapped a voice as Spialstar stepped out of the shadows,"where have you been?" She asked in an eerie calm voice.
"Banepaw shruged "Away from camp blowing off steam." He said simply.
"Are you awear that you had the would clan worried looking for you?" She said her voice stedy.
"Are you awear that I really couldn't care less?" Banepaw retorted. A smug look on his face.
"Banepaw you-" Banepaw stopped her.
"I what? am confided to camp? Theres one more thing I could care less about." he snapped. Spiralstar had had it.
"You're nothing like your father." she said in a low voice.
"Good cause I'll never be him." Banepaw retorted in a low voice as well. Spiralstars eyes flashed with breif was it pain? Before she whipped around and left. Banepaw turned
"Banepaw what in Starclan's name were you thinking?" I asked him.
Banepaw rounded on me," I'm sick of her always compairing me to Reddust!" he snapped,"I can't stand it, its not fair just because I'm the leader's son every one expects me to be perfect but I'm not and I'm far from it I'll never be Reddust no matter how much I look like him not matter how much I try I won't." He said. I was shocked Banepaw never sounded do upset before.
"Banepaw I-" he cut me off.
"Don't say your sorry I don't need sympthy." he snapped. I was shocked for a second but it quickle turned to anger.
"You act like you're the only one with problems my whole family's dead at least you have a family!" I snapped at him. Shock was easy to see in his eyes. I had never talked about my family being dead ever.
"Moonpaw..." he trailed off. I couldn't take it anymore I ran off.
"Moonpaw!" Echopaw called. I ran I ran as fast as my lg would carry me. Then I heard paw steps behind me and the next thing I knew I was tackled to the ground with Banepaw pinning me there.
"Let go!" I snapped.
"Not if your life depended on it. Now stop wiggling." He said to me. I did know that he'd stay in this position until I did. He sighed, "Moonpaw I'm sorry I'm not quite sure why you got mad at me but I'm sorry." he said in a low voice.
"Are you seriose you never apoligize." I said to him.
"Yeah but I decided if I wanted a place in Starclan I should probably do somthing right." He said.
I rolled me eyes,"Banepaw please get off." I said. even though he was small he weight more then did.
"What ever you say." Banepaw said careful stepping off of me.
I stood and shook grass from me pelt Banepaw smirked,"Maybe you warrior name couldbe Grass-and-dirtpelt." he said in a teasing voice.
"Banepaw!" I snapped he ran off I chased after him.
Basilleaf's P.O.V.
"So Sabriel do you kne where we are?" I asked her.
"Not really." She said to me,"but we should probably follow the river in the oposit direction that it flowing in." she commented.
"Makes sense." I said,"Shall we?" I asked.
"Of corse." Se said and with that we both padded up river.
Sabriel's P.O.V.
"I can't believe that this is real I was half drowned and padding up river with a Flameclan cat what's wrong with that picture?" I aske my self,"How far down stream do you think we went?" I asked him. The silenct was killing me.
"Not to far I hope." He said.
"Why do you seem so different form other Flameclan cat?" I asked him metaly.
Kay now that we're getting into the story more I need to decide on pairing let me know if you have any ideas...