K Here's it is (Mate ideas please and thank you)
Wishpaw's P.O.V.
"Blizzardfur! Blizzardfur!" Called the cats around me. I looked at him to see his eyes full of joy but in there very depths saddness cause his best friend wasn't there to see him become a warrior. I glanced over at Stealthpaw, the blue grey tom had recovered from the loss of Shadowstep and was now suffering from the shock of the missing Tinypaw. I padded over to the newly named Blizzardfur.
"Congradulations Blizzardfur!" I said to him.
"Thank you." He said.
"Wow Blizzardfur! Now we're warriors together!" Said Wildstep as she bounced over to him.
"Yeah its great." He said happly. She purred and rubbed her head with his.
I padded ove to where Stealthpaw was sitting and sat with him," Hey Stealthpaw." I said to him.
"Hi there Wishpaw." He said with false joy, I could tell he was sad he was the last apprentice in the den now and he hated to be alone he's always said so.
"Are you gonna be ok?" I asked worried him.
"I don't know," He told me,"theres only some much weight shoulders can carry before the legs beneith them claps Shadowstep used to tell me." Stealthpaw said. I looked at him he was looking up at the starry sky.
"Shadowstep was a great cat." I murmured. Stealthpaw turned his grey eyes on me and purr softly.
"It's late I should probably get some sleep." he murmured turning to walk away.
"Hey Stealthpaw if you want I can stay in the apprentice den tonight." I said to him. He turned his head and nodded.
Moonpaw's P.O.V.
I let my mind wander as Lunarclaw letured me about a need to improve my stealth. As he whenn on my thoughts settled on Banepaw,"Where is he?" I thought to my self,"Will he come back? Why isn't he hear right now? Is he still even alive?" questions came to me unanswered,"Wiat why is this bothering me so much we're just rivals right?" I thought.
"Moonpaw! Are you even lisyening to me?" Lunarclaw meowed. I looked at him for a few seconds not registering what he said. Lunarclaw sighed,"Moonpaw you need to pay attention or you won't ever become a warrior." He said.
I looked down at my paws,"I'm sorry Lunarclaw I justhave alot on my mind." I said shuffling my paws in the dirt.
"He flicke his whiskers its ok you go back to camp and rest up Icefall wants to cheak you skills tomarrow if all goes well you'll be a warrior soon." He said I nodded my head and went back to camp Banepaw stuck in my head.
Sabrial's P.O.V.
I opened my eyes to see sun light fludding into the abandonded set. As quickly as I opene4d my eyes I buryed my face in Basilleafs fur to block the light,"Sabriel can you not put awhole through me with your nose please?" Basilleaf asked sleeply.
"Sorry Basilleaf." I said and rested my head on his flank and closed my eyes once more.
Banepaw's P.O.V.
I crouched low as I spotted a mouse and was about to pounce on it when a dark blur pounced on it first. I watched as a dark brown she cat with golden flecks crouched down to eat before stepping into the open. She looked up,"Hello who are you?" she asked.
"My name is Banepaw." I said stunned by her amazing light blue eyes.
She nodded looking me strait in the eye,"My name is Amberglass," Sha told me,"What brings you here not many cats ever come here." she said tilting her head slightly.
I shook my head trying to break the trance over me,"Three other cats and me were sent out to look for something." I said not looking her in the eye.
"I see where are you heading?" She asked me.
"We were told to follow the moon." I said looking at the sky.
"Banepaw" She said.
"Yeah?"
"Please look at me." She said. I turned my head to look at her,"If you follow the moon then you'll have to go through a forest and the a theres a mountainy area you'll need a guid." Amberglass said to me,"I'll guid you if you want."
I nodded,"Ok." I said.
k sorry it took so long.