Okay heres the next chapter!!!!
But people i warn you if i dont get alot more reveiws i wont write the next chapter
dundunduuuuuunnnnnnn
ive giot lots of fave story adds n alerts and stuff bt 50 of those people havnt reveiwed :[
REVEIW OR NO M9ORE CHAPTERS BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAA
---------------------------------------
I cried out when I awoke as the burning pain consumed my body. My vision was blurred and I could see figures leaning over me but I couldn't make out what they were saying.
I drifted in and out of consciousness and each time the pain got worse.
I pleaded for death just so the pain would stop but no one would let me die.
The endless cycle of pain and unconsciousness seemed to go on for a lifetime.
I opened my eyes and braced myself for the pain as my consciousness returned but there was none.
I lifted my arm and placed it on my chest to feel my heartbeat. There was none.
I blinked and my vision sharpened. Jasper was leaning over me and frowning as he scrutinized me.
I sat up and braced myself for the pain of broken bones I had felt last time I tried but there was none. Jasper carried on staring at me.
"Jasper, what are you doing?" I asked and I blinked in surprise at how musical my voice sounded. He shook his head.
"You look really pretty." He said still staring at me. He left the room and I sat there in the bed in a daze. Sam and Carlisle walked into the room and I saw Sam do a double take and even Carlisle's eyes widened briefly.
"Bella how are you feeling?" Carlisle asked me.
I frowned. "A bit weird to be honest." Carlisle nodded. "Erm Carlisle can I have a mirror or something?" Carlisle nodded and pointed to the wall length mirror on the far wall of the bedroom that definitely hadn't been there last time I looked. Sam and Carlisle left the room and I was alone once more.
I slowly stood up and felt myself wobble a bit. I walked over to the mirror and took a deep breath as I stood in front of it. I froze as I stood in front of it.
My plain face had transformed. My chin was pointier; my jaw line more defined my nose thinner and straighter, my eyes bigger and scarlet red in colour, my cheek bones higher and my lips more shapely. I still looked like myself, there was definitely no mistaking me for anyone else but the change was overwhelming.
I then noticed my skin tone was the same as all the other vampires that perfect alabaster with slight purple shadows underneath my eyes. My dark hair seemed silkier and more perfect and as I ran my hands through it my ears felt wrong.
I pushed my hair back and realised that my ears were pointed like a cat or more likely a dog.
I seemed to have grown a few inches and my muscles felt firm and toned.
I was finally a vampire.
"Bella…" Someone breathed at the door to the room. I turned and saw Edward staring at me. His jaw dropped as he looked at my face and shock was written all over his face.
Before I could say anything he walked forward and pulled me into a kiss. I parted my lips and ran my fingers through his hair and he kissed me more deeply. He pulled away and looked into my eyes.
"Bella you look beautiful." He said with a smile but it didn't reach his eyes. I tilted my head to one side but before I could say anything, Emmet and Alice burst into the room.
Emmet tackled me into a huge bear hug. "Bella you look so beautiful!" Alice said excitedly. I grinned and looked to the door as Esme walked in.
She put her hands to her mouth. "Bella dear… Welcome to the family!" She said. If vampires could cry she would be crying.
Rosalie came in after Esme. Instead of saying anything she just smiled at me and nodded and I knew that she might finally start accepting me. Carlisle came into the room and I could tell something was wrong.
"Carlisle, what's wrong?" I said, pulling away from the circle of people.
He shook his head. "It's Jane. She's here. And she knows you're part werewolf."
-------------------------------------------------------
Remember to reveiiiiiiiiwwwwwwwwwww
Kai x