This is not a chapter. I just want to write a response to this persons flame.
Oh my fucking god! How the hell you can call this piece of dog crap a story is beyond me. In fact it is beyond any normal human! Please note, you would not be included in the category of normal human beings, as normal human beings do not mangle the English language as badly as this and then post it for others to read. Maybe, just maybe, some complete idiot out there enjoyed this, but that is just the point, they would be a complete idiot to enjoy this fucked up shit you call a story!
-GTW
Also, if you do not plan on finishing a story don't bother posting it in the first place!
I would like to say who the fuck do you think you are to say I'm not classed as a normal human being. I apologise if my english sucks, but frankly I don't care. I think that you should go get a bloody like, since my writting in that prolouge wasn't that bad.
Also I do plan on finishig the story, and I have given no inclination as to not finishing it.