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will Melanie have enough power to defeat Jared?

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Now for Jared

It was now April. Two months had past without a sign or appearance of Jared. During the months of February and March Melanie had more horrifying experiences than joyous ones; she kept having graphic dreams about killings, on in particular freaked her out. She had killed Corynne for no good reason and in cold blood. She woke in a fright, sweat pouring down her face, hands shaking, and tears streaming down her already wet face. When February fourteenth came around, Kyle treated Melanie like the princess until Melanie fell ill and landed herself in the hospital wing for three straight weeks. The next three weeks, Jared haunted her every thought and dream which almost drove Melanie to the point of suicide, but by the time she got out Kyle talked her out of it. By the time March came around, things started to change for the better; Will had proposed to Corynne, along with their parents' permission since they were minors, Melanie became pregnant, and Melanie, Kyle, Will, and Corynne were inducted into the school's trophy case. March was the greatest month that they all experienced, but one problem loomed over them: who was going to kill Jared?

"No you're too weak!" Kyle protested against Melanie's idea to go up and defeat Jared.

"Who else will do it if not me?" Melanie argued, "You? Corynne? Will? I'm stronger than all three of you."

"Not right now you're not!" Kyle said as Deryck Whitehouse came strolling down the common room stairs.

"I'll do it," Deryck said as everyone looked at each other in horror.

"Absolutely NOT!" Melanie said as Deryck merely smiled.

"You really think you can do it?" Deryck asked almost with a chuckle, "Melanie's too weak and the rest of you aren't nearly as strong as Melanie is..."

"And you are?" Kyle interjected, "You're a third year. How can a third year possess as much power as a sixth year?" Deryck snapped his fingers and produced a long lasting flame. He shut the flame off his fingers and Kyle was not even amused until Deryck produced a gigantic fireball in his hand and shot fire through the entire common room carefully lighting every candle. Kyle, Melanie, Will, and Corynne just stared at him in wonder, awe, and amazement.

"How do you have such power?" Melanie asked.

"I've been practicing," Deryck said as Melanie stood up, brought Kyle, Will, and Corynne into a corner and discussed their situation.

"I say we let him do it," Melanie said as Kyle automatically protested.

"No, he's just a kid."

"So are the rest of us," Melanie said softly, "That's not a reason why he can't do it. He matches my power. I'm letting him do it. Who agrees?" Will and Corynne agreed to it. "Sorry three against one."

"Alright, Deryck, we have an accord," Melanie said reaching out a hand to shake his, but got an unusual shock when their hands touched.

"What was that?" Deryck asked looked at his hand. There was steam being ejected from his entire hand and the same happened to Melanie. Corynne, suddenly paying attention, said, "Do that again." So Deryck and Melanie held hands, but after a few seconds they let go and held their in pain.

"I knew it," Corynne said grabbing one of her books and opened to a chapter near the end of the book, "Deryck you possess an ancient power of erif and Melanie possesses the power of eci or fire and ice spelled backwards. The fire god, Alsester, and the ice goddess, Sibhca, were once lovers, but once Alsester accidentally killed all his twenty children Sibhca killed him and found another husband. This is why fire and ice are not comparable."

"So what does this mean?" Kyle asked.

"It says here that anyone who possesses these powers should never battle," Corynne said reading further, "if they do, the world is end."

"Perfect," Melanie said frustrated until she thought of an idea, "What if we teamed up?"

"I don't follow," Corynne said.

"I know fire and ice don't get along that's obvious," Melanie said going further, "If we worked together, freezing and heating, we could break anyone. How about it?"

"I don't know," Corynne said, "Are you strong enough?"

"I'm not sure," Melanie said as a painful sensation came over and she doubled over. She saw a vivid picture of a battle between Deryck and Jared. The outcome was good, Deryck had won, but everyone was dead. Melanie came back to reality breathing heavily and head searing.

"Are you alright?" Kyle asked helping Melanie to her feet.

"Yea," Melanie said trying to breathe, "What was that?"

"A vision," Corynne said with her arms folded, "What did you see?"

"Deryck fought Jared and won," Melanie explained, but Kyle knew there was a catch.

"What else happened?" Kyle asked.

"We all died," Melanie said, "Deryck was the only one alive."

Days past and Melanie had no idea when her vision was going to come true so just as a precaution gathered fifth, sixth, and seventh years and trained them to possess power beyond the use of a wand. Week after week, the students practiced their powers as Melanie practiced her magic . April was now over and the weather changed drastically to summer like weather. May had approached rapidly and Melanie still did not know what to do about Jared, but that soon changed that night at dinner.

"What's wrong with you?" Kyle asked Melanie who was turning her food, utensils, and goblet into solid ice blocks.

"I can't pick up anything," Melanie said frustrated touching Kyle's goblet and turning it, and the pumpkin juice, to solid ice.

"Hey I didn't even drink that yet!"

"Focus your energy," Deryck said, "I lit all my clothes on fire before. You're stressed. Focus your energy into one particular region of your body and force it to stay there until it is needed." Melanie closed her eyes and tried to focus; she put everything out of her mind and focused on keeping her new powers at bay. She could feel all the ice particles in her blood form one huge block and settle near her heart. She opened her eyes and noticed that she had turned herself into a human icicle. She could not move any of her body parts and at the worst possible time. Jared had attacked the school and her friends were out there fighting without her. She decided to do something she never attempted before. She closed her eyes again and tried to turn her cold blood to boiling, her cold heart to red burning wuth passion. She drew up enough rage towards Jared, enough love and passion towards Kyle, and love for her unborn child and friends she felt her body heat and the ice around her staretd to melt. She took a deep breath and melted away the rest of the ice. She got up, stumbled a bit, and looked around. JAred was picking off students left and right, several people were already dead, otehrs were severely injured including Kyle and Corynne.

Melanie spotted Jared, formed a huge fire ball covered in ice, and threw it at Jared. He ricasheyed backwards and hit a large pilar.

"Was that fire and ice?" Deryck asked.

"Yes it was," Melanie said walking over to her friends, "Are you guys alright?"

"No major injuries," Kyle said as Melanie healed his broken arm.

"What about the students?" Melanie asked healing Corynne's broken wrist, "How many are dead?"

"Will counted ten," Deryck said putting his wand in his back pocket.

"My dear Melanie," Jared said getting up and healing his bloody head, "How was hibernation?"

"Refreshing," Melanie siad smiling, "Leave my friends alone. I'm the one you want."

Jared laughed. "I don't want you." Sudden rumbling began to occur under their feet and from under the ground came the most feared wizard that ever lived with his snake like eyes, his nonexistent nose, and his glare of death.

"He does!"

"Voldemort," Melanie said under her breath. Her heart was pounding so hard she could hear it.

"Melanie Potter," Voldemort said lifting Melanie into the air without touching her neck, "I've waited a long time for this."

"Kepp waiting!" Deryck said taking out his wand, but Voldemort had already sent him flying across thhe room with a bright green light.

"Too bad," Voldemort said turning back to Melanie's frightened face, "Don't be afraid, I'm not going to kill you."

"Of course you won't," Melanie siad cocky, "You don't have the guts to kill me."

"Melanie? What are you doing?" Kyle asked, "He will kill you."

"This piece of shit couldn't hit the broad side of a barn!" Melanie said. Voldemort smiled and threw his arm sideways causing Melanie to fly across the room and land ontop of Deryck and on a wooden table leg that had been broken off of the staff table. Kyle ran over to her and began to cry.

"Don't worry," Melanie said coughing up blood, "I'll be fine. Go and fight."

"I won't leave you," Kyle said holding her hand.

"Go and fight," Melanie said pushing him away, "I'll be there soon." Kyle and Melanie shared a kiss and he ran off. Melanie propped her legs up as well as her arms and slowly liefted herself off of the wooden table leg. She stood, looked at her now nonexistent wound, and searched for the power she had a while ago. Flames filled her left palm and ice filled her right palm. She fired fire at Voldemort which sent him soaring through the air, but he stopped himself and made his way toward Melanie who was now fighting other people.

She crashed to the ground with Voldemort ontop of her choking her.

"You know you're going to die," Melanie said as she tried to get Voldemort off of her.

"When?" Voldemort asked with a chuckle.

"Right now!" Melanie said as Voldemort saw fire in her eyes. Flames englufed his head and body as he ran off, but he only got about five feet before he collapsed and turned to ash. Jared saw that happened to his master and attempted to run, Melanie was too quick and turned him to ice. She walked over to him and looked into his frozen eyes.

"Goodbye!" she said kicking the sculpture to small pieces which turned to water and evaporated. She exhaled a breath of relief and turned around to see the aftermath. Ten were dead, several were injured, and a couple were severely injured. Kyle ran over to Melanie and hugged and kissed her several times.

"Thank god you're alive."

"Put Deryck over with dead," Melanie said wiping a tear from her face, "I have to heal some students."

"Is it over?" Corynne asked. it was June. Two months had passed since the massacre and everyone was getting ready to leave.

"Is what over?" Melanie asked packing her clothes.

"The war," Corynne said as Melanie smiled.

"For you."

"What do you mean?" Corynne asked as Will and Kyle entered the room.

"I'm going away," Melanie said as disappointment fell upon everyone's face.

"Where?" Kyle asked.

"I'm training new Aurors in the East," Melanie siad closing her suicase, "Dumbledore offered it to me and I took it."

"What about us?" Will asked.

"What about you guys?" Melanie asked.

"Don't we get to come along?" Will asked as Kyle and Corynne folded their arms.

"Not this time," Melanie said picking up her suitcases and moving toward the door, but Kyle blocked her.

"We're not letting you leave," Kyle said smiling, "until you agree to let us come with you."

Melanie sighed and looked into Kyle's eyes, "Pack your things." Corynne and Will smiled and quickly packed their things, but Kyle stayed put.

"You're not packing?" Melanie asked as Kyle smiled.

"I've already packed," Kyle said as Melanie looked at him curiously, "I knew if we asked you you'd say yes so I packed already." Ten minutes later Corynne and Will and smiles upon their faces and smiles upon their faces.

"Where are we we going?" Corynne asked trying to keep her excitement to herself.

"Transylvania," Melanie said holding them holy water, stakes, and crosses.

"What are these for?" Corynne asked as Melanie smiled.

"Just incase."

"Of what?" she asked.

"Vampires you dunce," Will said rolling his eyes as he followed Kyle and Melanie down the stairs.

Corynne looked petrified. "But I don't want to meet a vampire. Melanie you can't be serious. I can't believe I'm doing this."