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SKYE:c'mon, itachi...say it...

Itachi: I. Hate. you.

SKYE: AND I LOVE YOU TOO!!!

Itachi: I wont say it.

SKYE: fine. Be that way. Kisame?

Kisame: sits in corner, slowly rocking back and fourth, singing: "hush little baby dont you cry, mama's gonna by you an ice-cream pie."(yes, I made that part up-i love ice-cream!lol)

SKYE:(sighs) c'mon guy's!! that last chapteri wasnt even that severe!...fine!like I care you guy's are weak...just like sasuke..right itachi?

Itachi: Grrrr...SKYE does not own naruto!!!!!!

SKYE: but I own haru, and this plot.thank you, itachi.

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Haru needed some time away from home and work with her friends, and agreed to go camping with them, including a few other people and one guy she had a crush on. His name was Tony, and he had lite brown hair, and green eyes. He was quite tall aswell and also did karate- thats how haru met him.

(Flashback)

it was her first day at the martial arts school and haru was a little nervous. When her mother asked what kind of sport she wanted to do, she was in for a surprise when her little daughter said karate. But it would be good for her daughter to make new friends, since she didnt have any, now that they moved. Haru had been bullied so bad they had to leave the school, since the teachers couldnt do much about it. It was the only school in the area so they had to leave town aswell. Haru was 10 and was very mixed up inside about her feelings-she was sad to leave her only friends behind, but happy to leave the bullies too. So doing karate, made haru feel she was in control.

Haru walked in throught the door, to come to a huge hall, filled with kids her age and up. Her mother spoke to haru's martial art's teacher and kissed haru goodbye. Haru felt tears welling up in her eyes.

"dammit!i told mummy I wouldnt cry!" haru thought as she wipped the small tears away from her eyes with her sleeve.

"y'know, you're gonna ruin your uniform if you use it as a hanky." a boys voice spoke.

Haru turned around to met eye to eye with a young boy, a year older than her. He was holding out a tissue.

"thanks." haru spoke shyly. "whats your name?"

"Tony! nice to meet ya!"

The rest of the lesson went by quickly, haru enjoying her time with this new boy. When it was time to go, haru was quite sad, but brightened up when Tony reminded her that they would see each other again next week. And so he left, haru waving goodbye, as all the other kids parents picked their kids up too, and the next kid...and the next...

"Haru?" .A womans voice spoke.

haru had been waiting an hour and turned turned hoping to see her mummy. Instead she was dissapointed but curious to see a strange lady, along with her teacher, and a police officer.

"haru... There's been an accident...your mother's not going to pick you up..."the lady began.

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Haru examened the waters surface-her friends owned a boat, enough for at least 10 people. There were 8, so there was a lot of room. They were camping out at a lake - in a secret and secluded area one of her friends found, so nobody else was around, which to haru was nice, she liked quiet. But she wished her friends would pipe down and enjoy the scenery for just 5 minutes? They were yelling at the top of their lungs, already drunk from all the beer every one brought.

"Oi! Haru! Come and have a bloody beer!" one girl yelled holding out a can.

"OK,hold on..." said haru as she got up, and walked over. She noticed some other people gigling and knew immediately what they were up to. Haru looked at the can and grimaced.

"thanks" haru spoke and took it out the girls hand.

As everyone looked away, trying not to laugh, Haru swapped it wih the girls can.

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Itachi was furious. So was kisame after he recovered from the "shock". because when they went to the girls small apartment the next day, she wasnt there. They only had one more day left before the portal closed or else they would be in big trouble. Itachi reluctantly whipped out the chakra searching scroll and they began their search again. They were surprised to find her quite a distance away but got there in no time.

"Thats her right?"kisame asked.

"Hn." Itachi replied. He couldnt wait to beat the shit out of this girl. He was so pissed after he recovered from the shock properly from the picture incident.

Without a word kisame jumped down from the tree they were sitting in and silently landed on the muddy bank. Preforming some hand signs created two water clones and slipped silently into the water, not making a ripple.

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After hearing a very surprised scream, haru turned back to the side of the boat, trying hard to not to show her smile from the sopping wet girl. Haru lent over the side, dipping her fingertips into the water. Haru turned slightly when someone sat down next to her.

It was Tony.

"h-hey..."haru stammered, blushing slightly.

"hi ya. That was some amazin stunt ya pulled back there! I didnt even see you swapping the can! But she deserved it, she a real bitch ya know-i hate her."

"mm..me too."

"Hey...uh..haru?"

"yeah?" haru turned to face him, fingers still in the water. Oh thoses eyes...those beautiful green eyes..

"I..."

"Yeah...?"haru eyes never left his.

"I..."

"C'mon!out with it!"-haru said, she knew what was coming...she felt it...she knew it...this is it! haru thought.

"I...I...like taco's..

haru stared at him.

"w-what?"

"I like taco's!-do you like taco's?"

haru continued to stare at him, mouth open.

"well do you?"

"um..yeah?"

"great!do you wanna go out to taco bell some time?"

"like a d-date?"

Tony nodded enthusiastically.

"OK!"Haru yelled, just before a hand shot out of the water and pulled her into the freezing liquid.

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Authors note: wow!thats the longer chapter ive ever done!i took some advised from reviews and tried to make it better, so I hope you like it!