Okay well this is my first fanfic so please don't be too mean. I want constructive criticism but nice comments make me happy and update faster. Well that only counts if you like the story and would want it to continue, but whatever. Oh I know my last chapter was really short but it looked longer on Word… sorry about that. But I've seen shorter.
Oh I forgot to stick this in before so here it is now
Disclaimer: Maximum Ride is not mine… tear. Max and the rest of the flock belong to James Patterson. If it was mine then Max and Fang would already be married and have a bunch of little birdies (not really, they are only fourteen) besides I am certainly not even 1/1000000 as good a writer as James Patterson. He is like gods gift to the world and I'm just a teenage girl who has fallen in love with a book series. Yup, I have no life. Okay so I do not claim Maximum Ride. (Oh I read the whole "I do not claim" thing on someone else's fanfic so if you came up with it don't hate me. I admit that is not my line but I liked it too much not to use it.) Okay on with the story.
Max's POV:
"Ewwwwwwww Gazzy that is so gross. Did you have to do that right here next to me? Gosh!" This is what I woke up to this morning. Nudge and Gazzy having a screaming contest. Oh joy of joys. I love my flock. I honestly do. They are great, but they can drive me nuts sometimes. It's pretty hard being the leader, but I accept my role and I guess I sort of embrace it. I untangled myself from my blankets and stretched. I looked around camp. Iggy was making breakfast. Thank god, I love that kid. Angel and Total were having a heated discussion about Barbie and Ken (LOL sorry, but I just felt like saying that for no reason at all) Nudge and Gazzy were still arguing, and Fang was…. Hey where is fang??? Oh there he is, he just walked out of the forest and went to talk to Iggy. I guess he needed to go to the bathroom. Well I guess I better go and make sure Gazzy and Nudge don't kill each other.
Fang POV:
I just walked back into camp after taking a bathroom break. Oh it seems Max is awake; she has circles under her eyes though. I'm guessing that she didn't get enough sleep and that she didn't wake up on her own. That's when I noticed Gasman and Nudge fighting. Oh okay, so that's what woke her up. Even after spending the night in a forest and just waking up Max looked really pretty. Whoa Fang where did that come from? Okay I better not turn all mushy, because I hate guys like that. Max doesn't really like me that way. Deal with it and move on. I don't want things to be all weird between us. They are already awkward and I don't want things to get worse. So I just walked up to Iggy and we started discussing where on earth were we going to go next. When total runs up to me saying "Don't you think that Ken is the boss and that Barbie has to listen to him at all times?" What the heck is up with that dog? I think that Angel brainwashed him… he is just not normal. I just ignored Total and he trotted back to Angel. I'm really glad to see the flock back together again and happy. Sure we argue a lot. But the important thing is that we are always there for each other at all times. Except when we split up but I hope that never happens again. The flock is my family and I love them. No, that is not all mushy. You are supposed to love your family. When we were split up it felt like we weren't whole anymore. I know that I was personally miserable and that I missed Max like crazy. Man I even missed Nudge's talking. And that is really saying something. I know that the guys were pretty bummed too. That's when Max walked over to where Iggy and I were sitting. "Hey Max where are we going?" I asked once she said down and grabbed some breakfast for herself. "Umm…. Just a sec." She then got really quiet and looked like she was listening to someone. I'm guessing that she is talking with her voice… or Jeb.
Max's POV:
"Hey Jeb you there?"
"Yes Max".
"Umm well where are we going?"
"To Utah, (Just a random state) there is a small branch of the school there. It is one of the lesser branches of the school but it's been around for a while and I think that some experiments would be happy to escape... Also they are trying some to create more bird kids that are even more advanced than you and your flock. It shouldn't be too complicated though. Yes they are working on an important project but their security isn't that good. No one really cares about that branch and ignores it. That's why they are trying this new experiment. To gain some respect from the rest of the Itex branches. Besides I don't want to send you to go destroy a huge branch of Itex so soon after your fight in Germany. We will get there too soon anyways. Don't forget that you haven't finished your job yet."
"Yeah, yeah save the world. I know okay. Besides what up with you? You sure are chatty this morning aren't you? A little out of character aren't you?"
Jeb didn't reply to that. Oh well I really didn't expect him to "To Utah," is all I said in reply to Fang's earlier question. At that Fang just raised one of his eyebrows. It was his way of asking why without actually saying it aloud. "There is a small school there that we should destroy. Oh and let out some experiments." Okay that should have answered his question. That's when I heard a slight rustling sound. It really shouldn't have stood out that much, since Angel and Total were still discussing Barbie and Nudge and Gazzy were playing cards after making peace. So a small rustle isn't really going to stick out much. Yet somehow that sound made me freeze. I slowly turned towards where I heard the sound. That's when I saw sunlight hit something metal. What the heck? I saw a bird with a metal ring around its neck. It hobbled into camp and looked at me. "Are you Maximum Ride?" Wait just a sec. Did a little bird just talk to me? Please tell me I'm dreaming. "Umm yea…" was all that I could manage to say. "I have a message for you."
So what's going to happen now? IDK either. Okay so what do you think? Sorry I know its super short but I just wrote this at 1:50 in the morning. So please excuse any grammatical or spelling mistakes. Besides I don't know what to do now… I just came up with a talking bird out of nowhere…I just felt like sticking a talking animal in there for no apparent reason. I have no plot remember. So if you have any ideas they are welcome. Though I did include Fang's POV. Because even know JP is like the best writer ever. I wish he would stick more of the flock's POV in the books. I know that in the 3rd book he stuck Fang's POV right after the kiss and when they split up. But mostly it's Max. Don't get me wrong, I love Max. But I want to know what Fang is thinking too. Oh and sorry that there is more of my weirdo ramblings than story but it's late at night, I can't sleep, and I ran out of material. So sorry people. Oh please review. And remember. This is my first fanfic so don't rip my story apart. Just give constructive criticism if you see the need to. Oh and thanks for reading!