Maximum Ride

What Happens Next- Chapter 20

Wow 20 chapters! Cool! I'm so sad right now. Do you want to know why? If you don't, too bad because I'm going to tell you anyways.

You guys didn't review enough! I got zero reviews on my last chapter! ZERO! That makes me very sad. Your reviews brighten up my whole day. I screamed when I got my very first review.

And I'm updating way faster than I usually do. I'm even neglecting my homework and project for you all! I know this is short but I'm posting again tomorrow. Oh and since I only have next week and then its winter break you all can expect a lot of updates. Since it is like a two week break. So I'll try to update a lot. But that will only happen if you all review!!! Reviews make me happy. And I like how you all keep telling me to update, but I would like a little bit of constructive criticism on how to make my writing better. Thank you!

Fang POV:

I rolled over in bed as sunlight streamed in through the curtains. I groaned and pulled the pillow over my head. Noooooo morning came too fast. I yawned and pulled the pillow off my face. I looked around the bright room and sighed. The party last night was surprisingly fun. It was umm to say the least an eventful evening. I rolled out of bed and lazily walked across the room to the closet to get some clothes out. Hey did I ever mention that Nudge went on a shopping spree for everyone? Well she did and ummm… she had a lot of fun. My closet was pretty darn full. Clothes were almost falling out. Most of it was black. Did you notice I said most instead of ALL??? Yea well she got me some colors… I don't know why. But today I'm in a pretty cheery mood and now I'm going to wear a dark navy shirt with khaki cargo pants. I know big difference. But I'm just so happy suddenly. Don't think that I forgot about Ari being in Max's head or that we are trying to save the world. I didn't forget that. But Max is sooo…. Oh wow. Okay well I need to get going. Today is the day we save those avian members of MAI (I accidently sometimes say MIA but it really is MAI so please correct it in your own heads) I better get a move on.

Later that afternoon

Max POV:

"Fang duck," I managed to scream out before a flyboy hit me right in the jaw. Ouch! This battle was almost over thank god. Most of the flyboys were destroyed. Did I ever tell you how many of us there were? Well there are 95 experiments counting the Leader of MAI but not including us. There are 5 avian members we are saving so that makes 100 of us. Yea that's a lot of mutant freaks. Plus us makes 107. You know if we count Total. Total is home by the way. He skipped the whole party and just chilled in Angel and Nudge's room. So he skipped todays little escapade today too.

Yea so back to the present. I smashed in an flyboy's side.

Angel honey is Iggy ready?

"Yes Max he said you have 5 mintues" I heard Angel in my head. Okay that meant we had to finish off these flyboys in a minute. All of them, get everyone out of here quickly and blow up the school. I shot up into the sky and threw up a teeny Iggy bomb that made a loud bomb that caught everyone's attention. That was our five minute signal. I saw everyone go into overdrive and all of the flyboys were gone in 20 seconds. Okay everyone started to run. The flock shot into the sky and so did the other five avian experiments. The rest of the experiments ran toward their leader. Did I mention that he could transport himself and extra baggage. Well he can. Everyone joined hands and held onto Twitch who was holding the baby. Within a second everyone was gone. The flock plus 5 shot up into the sky. I looked over at Iggy and he was practically bursting with joy.

I looked down at the school. Well not our school but a school. Five, four, three, two, BOOM! The ground shook and I was in the sky but I could still tell.

Okay guys, back to headquarters.

Good job honey. I'm glad that it was a success but now they know you are coming after them. They will be prepared. But the main thing is that…I want you to know that I'm very proud of you Maximum.

I smiled, 'thanks dad!'

The End! They live happily ever after! JOKING! Hey I'm heading to bed. I'm sleepy. Sorry it's short but I felt like writing. If it sucks account it to the fact that I'm sick plus it's late.