Here's the second (proper) chapter. Sorry it took so long – I've lost my second beta, so now I need a new one. I can understand where she's coming from, 'cos she's just going into Year 12, and she's got her own stories too, but it would have helped if she could have at least gone over this one before she told me. Meh, my own fault, I suppose, for taking so long. If you want to take on this story as beta, PM me with your email address, and I'll send you a practice piece. Go over it and send it back along with your modifications in a different colour. You have to be able to give decent criticism and suggest possible idea replacements when required. If you can be prompt about returning checked chapters that's even better.
When you read this chapter, you'll probably notice that Sakura pulls her head out of the clouds fairly quickly. I did this because I'm going to focus on other characters more, making her something of a minor character. Therefore I did not want to deal with her much. I don't have any real patience with Fangirls of any type. Ino I'll put up with 'cause she at least has some innate sensibility. Sakura has none, so I want her straightened out and out of the way as soon as possible. And what's up with Kishimoto? He seems to have lost the plot, from shortly after Sasuke's defection. I mean, Naruto's been training with a Sannin, granted he's the laziest of the three, but still. You'd think Naruto would have far more in his arsenal and would've calmed down some, instead he's just a roughly adult-bodied version of his 12 year old self. Not cool Kishimoto, not cool.
The
night was quiet. Moonlight gilded everything with a palette of
whites, greys and blacks, giving an eerie feeling to the
mist-enshrouded Land of Wave. Kakashi's visible eye opened.
Where…? Ah. Tazuna's home. They'd
gotten there in the late afternoon, shortly after which he'd fallen
asleep. How long…?
"'Bout
time you woke up." Kakashi twisted to peer into a shadowed corner.
Clothing shifted as their newest acquaintance moved into a patch of
moonlight shed from the window. "You've slept for thirty-two
hours straight."
"Naruto-san." Thirty-two
hours? So it must be some time after midnight.
"Aa."
"…What
are you still doing up?"
"I never slept."
"What?"
"I
need less sleep than most people. It means I can go for longer
periods with little or no sleep, and still function at a hundred
percent." Is it a bloodlimit?
Kakashi wondered. He voiced this thought.
"What's a
bloodlimit?"
"You mean you don't know?" If
he doesn't know, then probably not.
"A bloodlimit is something peculiar to your blood-related family.
It's generally an enhanced ability like sight or strength. Some
families have stranger abilities like being able to manipulate
certain elements with fewer handseals or completely sealless."
"Never
heard of anything like that."
Stopping in the middle of shifting
to a sitting position, Kakashi looked at him suspiciously. "Where
have you
come from? Most people in the Elemental Countries know about
bloodlimits and handseals."
Naruto grinned sheepishly, rubbing
the back of his head. "Ah, sorry. I forgot. I come from a land
quite far from here. I'm not sure I can go back."
"Really?
What's it like there?"
"It's very different. For one
thing, it seems quite peaceful here in these lands. For another, your
fighting methods are very interesting. I know weaponry and words, but
I've never seen someone use energy quite the way you do."
"So
you've never seen Jutsu? I find that hard to believe."
"Oh,
I've seen spells, demonic and holy, even been trained in them, but
never the combination of chi and ki."
"Chi? Ki? What are
they?" By now Kakashi was sitting fully upright and alert.
"Chi
is the energy of the body, of life. Ki is the energy of the
soul."
"So chi would be physical energy and ki is spiritual
energy."
"Yeah, suppose so."
The conversation fell into a
lull. They sat in silence, Kakashi contemplating the answers he'd
received.
"Kakashi-san."
"Mm?"
"Why have you not
trained them equally? Doesn't it interfere with your
ethics?"
Kakashi glanced at him sharply. "How do you know?"
"I
can see auras if I want. Duck-butt-cut's has quite a few overtones
of yours, whereas the other two don't." Kakashi glanced at the
walls. "Don't worry. I've soundproofed the room from the other
side." Naruto pointed to a half-hidden ofuda on each wall with a
final one above the door. "Nobody but us will know what is said in
this room this night."
Kakashi gazed at Naruto with dead eyes.
"Ethics have no place in a shinobi's life."
Naruto moved to
stand in front of the window, staring out across the road towards a
nightmare forest. "Are you sure?"
"In a profession which
demands you lie, steal, kill and impersonate people as the job
description, you cannot have morals."
"Morals? I thought you
said ethics
had no place in your life."
"Same thing."
Naruto turned
away from the window, looking at Kakashi from the corner of his
eye.
"But it's not, is it? Ethics and morals, I mean."
Kakashi
looked away.
"Think, man, think! Do you say "a chicken is a
bird" or "a bird is a chicken"? One does not
mean the other! So you can have ethics and not morals. Are you
really, truly
without any
guidelines?"
"I-"
"Will you kill another for sport? Do
you rape or pillage on assignment? Do you go out of your way to cause
damage or harm without due cause?"
Kakashi exploded. "NO!
Never! I have never- I could never-"
"So you do have ethics,
however skewed they may be. And you're in conflict as to what to
do."
"No I am not." he said tightly.
"But you are,
Kakashi-san,
you are. How can you not be? You've been asked, told
to do something which goes against your ethics, and you can't do
anything about it, or so you think. So you're in conflict with
yourself, over whether to follow orders and get two innocents
undeservedly killed, or whether to disobey, and make sure they can
take care of themselves."
The silver-haired man gaped at this
stranger, this unknown, who had him figured out far more quickly than
he'd ever thought possible.
"You forget, I can read auras if I
want. I do it as a standard response whenever I meet someone new that
I will be in company with for an undetermined amount of time. Not
more than a flash, but it's enough to tell me important things
about whoever I'm with. And this conflict within you is as clear as
day to me."
Team Seven's sensei slumped. "But how can I help
them? How, when if I disobey I stand to lose so much?" he said
brokenly.
"If you cannot help them yourself, find someone who
can. Surely you have those that you can prevail upon to help you,
help them?"
"But- "
"But nothing. If you can see a way
clear to do as your ethics demand, without incurring penalty, take
it!"
The light came back to darkened eyes. His visage firmed as
he resolved to do whatever required to ensure that his team did not
die for petty reasons, Kakashi nodded in gratitude to the man who had
set him straight. "I will."
"That's all I need to hear."
Naruto said. He clapped Kakashi on the shoulder and moved to the
door. Taking down the ofuda, he said "I'll take the other's
down after breakfast."
"Naruto-san." The blonde turned.
"Thank you."
The young man smiled. "Your welcome."
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Meanwhile,
in a hut deep in a forested
middle-of-nowhere somewhere in wave, the hunter-nin was tending to
Zabuza.
"Zabuza-san." No answer. "I should really pull out
the senbon. But first- " He reached into his kit, withdrawing a
small pair of cutters, the type used for removing sutures. Reaching
for the bandages about Zabuza's face intending to cut them, his
hand was grabbed.
"Haku."
"Au, Zabuza-san, you are awake
after all."
"So poorly aimed." Pulling the senbon from his
neck, Zabuza lurched upwards.
"Zabuza-san! If you're not
careful you will injure yourself most severely! Please desist, allow
me to take care of them-" Alarmed, the hunter-nin made as if to
force him supine again.
"Enough." The masked one stopped. "You
were taking too long. Now, remove that damned mask!" Removing the
mask revealed an androgynous face, with large eyes, making it
difficult to tell if Haku was male or female.
Feeling the injured
area, Zabuza complained "Couldn't you have chosen another place
to hit me? You could have killed me for real."
"But the neck
has the easiest points to hit to cause a death-state."
"So
cruel, you are."
"Sou desu ne."
"…"
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The
next morning after breakfast Team Seven
followed Kakashi outside. He led them to a clearing in the nearby
forest, where he stopped, letting his weight fall on his
crutches.
"Right. Today you learn the tree-climbing
exercise"
"Ano, Sensei? How will that help us?" Sakura
asked. Sasuke scowled at his teacher and Kiba hmphed, before throwing
his two bits in.
"Yeah, how does climbing a tree help? We
already know how to climb trees." Kakashi smiled.
"You will be
climbing trees without using your hands." They stared at him. "By
learning to climb the tree, you will learn greater chakra control,
theoretically enabling you to master any jutsu." Sasuke smirked.
This will make it easier for me to kill
HIM.
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Sakura
finished quickly.
"Well done."
Kakashi eye-smiled at her.
She blushed, and glanced sidelong at
Sasuke to see if he had noticed her achievement. He didn't even
glance at her. She looked down, crushed. Why
didn't Sasuke-kun notice me? Is it because I beat him? ... No, I'm
sure it's because he's trying hard too.
Cha! That's it, that's it! We'll prove our love to him yet!
Yeah! She looked up and smiled happily,
before glancing at Sasuke again.
Naruto observed the group from
his position in the crook of a tree. Seeing the changing expressions
of Sakura, and remembering the conversations of last night, he came
to a decision.
"Kakashi-san."
"Mm?"
"I need to
speak with the girl."
"All right then. Sakura!" She looked
up. "Naruto-san wishes to speak with you."
Sakura was puzzled.
Why would a person she hardly knew want to talk to her? He beckoned
and she followed him to another clearing. She looked at him
expectantly.
"Girl,
you SUCK!" Sakura stared at him, shocked.
"I honestly can't see how you even got to this level. Simply put,
you. Are. Weak."
"B-but how can you say such a thing? I was
the top kunoichi in the class!" she spluttered. He looked at her
calculatingly. Casting about he spotted something that would do.
"You
see that rock over there? I want you to lift it." She looked in the
direction he was indicating and her jaw hit the ground. He wanted her
to lift that
monstrosity?
"Not that one, the one next to it." Oh.
The rock was about six inches high and a foot across, far more
reasonable than the half-ton cliff next to it. Moving over to it, she
grasped it and heaved. Reaching a foot off the ground, it became too
heavy for her and she dropped it.
"See, this is what I mean. A
true ninja of your level should be able to lift a rock of that size
above their heads, no problem." Naruto glanced towards where her
team was training. "Admittedly your teacher doesn't seem to have
trained you much, maybe from some misguided attempt to protect you
from life's hardships. But that's no excuse for your level of
pathetic strength."
Is he saying
that I'm that weak? "B-but
Sasuke-kun- !
He looked sternly at her. "Is the duck-butt-cut
more important than your life? Because if you don't start getting
serious and become the trained killer your rank says you are, you'll
lose it before the moon is out."
Is
it? Is it really worth losing my life in favour of chasing after
someone who's given no sign of returning my devotion? What
are you saying? Of course it's worth it; Sasuke-kun's just
repressing his emotions! Cha! Is
it that? Or is it that he never had feelings for me… no, anyone, in
the first place?
He started to walk
back to the clearing where her team was. As he passed her he said
"Think about it. Is your fussing over beauty and obsession over the
boy really worth the probability of your death and the wasting of
your potential?"
She stood there for quite a while after he left.
A/N: I probably should have another chapter before this one, but I want to move on from the Wave arc. The Chuunin Exam arc will have far more interaction, I just want to get this bit over with. The only reason it's important is because it's where Naruto arrives. Once he meets with the rest of the Rookie Nine and Team Gai, the story will be fleshed out more.
The conversation with Kakashi may seem a little out-of-the-blue, but I needed him to actually be of use leading up to the Chuunin Exam. This was the only way I could think of to do it. Sorry if it seems too soon. I may eventually go back and add another chapter before/modify this one, but not right now.
Chi
– body/physical energy
Jutsu – technique
Ki –
spiritual/soul energy
Ofuda – mostly used by houshi/miko, they
are conduits for spiritual energy. Can be used for seals, barriers,
to exorcise spirits and demons etc.
Senbon – foot long needles
often used by medic- and hunter-nin. Excellent for hitting a specific
point on the body, as seen with the death-state Zabuza was placed
in.
Sensei – teacher
"Sou desu ne" – literally "it is
so". Basically Haku is agreeing with Zabuza.
