hi i'm updating and thanks for reviewing
disclaimer: just read the first two chapters and you'll get it
some reviewers asked me to write the story in a new format, so thats what i'm doing :P
(Next Day)
The warriors were sitting down at lunch, and of coarse Clay had a mountain of food and Rai was just sleeping and not eating. After the experience from yesterday Raimundo didn't act the same at all. He was quite, out of the way, and didn't care for anything. He didn't even make fun of Omi once. Then the song Soulja Boy came from Raimundo's pocket. Rai looked at it and the called ID said Sid.
"Go away Sid," Raimundo said in monotone.
"Why? I need to tell you something important," said Sidney "and I'm board."
"Then find something to do," said Raimundo annoyed.
"Fine."
At that Rai hung up on Sid and Master Fung came into the the room saying " Young monks we need to start training."
"Joy," replayed Raimundo sarcastically.
They walked outside and today they were going to test Raimundo's shoku abilities, so in other words it's everyone against Rai. The three wudai warriors charged at him screaming and Raimundo just stood there not paying attention. When they came into arm length Raimundo jumped out of the way, this made Kimiko and Clay crash into the wall, but not Omi. Omi stopped and jumped up to counter Rai but instead, Omi got kicked in the stomach and flew into a tree. At that time Kimiko and Clay were charging at him again. Rai just stood there and then ducked when they tried to kick at him and he caught they're legs in the air, slammed them into each other, and sent them flying into the tree with Omi. they got out of the tree and ran forward shouting,"Wudai Mars-Fire, Wudai Crater-Earth, or Wudai Neptune-Water!". Raimundo just said "Wind" and with a sweep of his arm diminished their attacks and sent them flying, again.
Then out of nowhere someone came from behind him and attacked Rai and him stranger ducked and dodged so fast it's as if they knew what each other was thinking. This kept up for about 30 minutes straight. when Raimundo started to get fed up with this he shouted "Wind" blowing the stranger against a wall.
"Well Rai, I guess you haven't lost your touch," said the stranger.
Rai took a closer look at the girl he was just fighting and shock struck him "Sidney! What the heck are you doing here!"
"I told you I needed to tell you something, but you didn't listen" she said,"and thanks to you, now I have a bloody shoulder."
She was right it was pretty bad, her arm was almost covered in blood.
"Sorry," said Rai.
"Whatever."
"Rai, what's going on?" asked Kimiko.
"Oh, yea, right, um, this is my sister Sidney," said Rai.
"Twin sis," said Sid.
"Yea, yea, whatever, no one cares," said Rai.
"I do not understand, what is a twin sister?" said Omi.
"It means that we were born on the same day by the same mom," said Sid.
"Hey Rai, you ain't never told us you had a sister," said Clay.
"Yea, Sid this is Clay, Kimiko,and Omi" said Raimundo avioding the question"Sid I need to talk to you...alone."
haza!(sp?) the second chapter is done and sorry it wasn't exciting
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tell me if you like the new format