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Day Four – Daughters and Dinner
Wednesday – June 6th 2007
1:55 am
Lorelai eye's opened wide, it was still dark but she thought she heard something. Nudging Luke.
LORELAI "Wake up."
LUKE "What." Half asleep. "What is it now?"
LORELAI "There was an scary noise outside again."
LUKE "There's an annoying noise in here!"
LORELAI "Shut up and go see." Luke slowly got up, he was sleeping behind Lorelai so stumbled over her. "That was graceful." Lorelai giggled.
LUKE "Yeah well it's like 2 in the morning.
LORELAI "Hear take the flash light."
Luke "Why, it's bright moonlight and my eyes have adjusted, I can see just fine."
LORELAI "You can whack what ever it is."
LUKE "I'm not whacking anything tonight, besides It's probably just a bear so I think the flash light would just make it mad.
LORELAI "What, you bring me here and now I'm gonna get eaten by a bear."
LUKE "Didn't you see the signs, and let me remind you it was you who drove in here! And who insisted on staying near the waterfall."
LORELAI "Don't leave me."
LUKE "Well I can't be in two places at once, I'll be right back."
Lorelai pouted as Luke went out to check, he didn't see anything, but it looked like some Raccoons might have gotten into the trash. Luke decided to leave it for morning, when he could see better. Making is way back inside the tent he saw a cheeky smile on Lorelai's face in the bright moonlight.
LORELAI "So did you whack it?"
LUKE "There was nothing out there, maybe some Raccoons got into the trash, but they are gone now, so I didn't whack anything tonight."
LORELAI "Dirty! … by the way the nights not over yet"
She opened the sleeping bag to revile she was now completely naked.
LUKE "What did you do?"
LORELAI "Nothing yet, I can't sleep."
LUKE "It's 2am, try." Making his way back in the sleeping bag.
LORELAI "I've got other plans."
With that Lorelai reached into Luke's track pants to feel him growing by the second in her hand. Luke moaned at the touch of her cold hand on his length. She proceeded to stroke him as they started to kiss. Lorelai stopped a second to help Luke off with his t-shirt, then moved to his lower half chucking the clothes outside the sleeping bag. Rolling him on to his back, facing his she straddled Luke, he was now ready but Lorelai teased by rubbing her centre along his length, while leaning back to give Luke one of the best views in his life.
Luke who had been out of action for the best part of a year could still no believe his luck to have this beautiful woman back in his life. He could feel her wetness as it dripped on him, it was killing him.
LUKE "Lorelai, please." He begged as she again took matters into her won hands, so to speak.
She turned around and was now kneeing over his face, he was almost knocked out by her aroma, not to mention the sight just inches from is face. He could now see how wet she was, it was glistening in the moonlight. Lorelai started to kiss his tip as she stroked his length and played with his balls. She notices he was becoming a little unkempt down there and decided she would have to do something about that later.
She finally took him in and slowly glided her teeth over his length, driving Luke crazy. Luke meantime was getting busy, freeing his hands he put them on her butt to help pull himself up to her centre. This made Lorelai flinch for a moment, almost biting Luke, which was not, good give the position she was in. She decided to just kiss him for now while she began to moan with his contact between her legs.
Feeling they were both almost ready to burst Lorelai looked down between her legs signaling to Luke for a change in position. Moving on to her back, Luke turned around to position himself over her entrance. With little effort he slid inside and slowly built up the pace, kissing her breasts he propped himself up on his right arm while lifting Lorelai with his left to bring her closer for the climax. Before they knew it they are both upright with Lorelai sitting in Luke's lap. Their combined orgasms his hard and they fell in to a pile in the middle of the tent. Luke snuggled up close behind Lorelai as he pulled the sleeping back over them. She had no problem falling to sleep now.
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Lorelai woke and felt alone in the big sleeping bag, she reached for Luke but felt nothing. Then she smelt it, the faint scent of life, Luke's coffee. But how, they were far from home then as she breather in the sweet sent she remembered where she was. Opening her eyes it was still hard to believe she spent the night in a tent, camping. Lorelai Gilmore had not been camping since she was a young teen and was sent to camp. Even then they were in wooden cabins with 4 solid walls and indoor plumbing. But here she was waking up on the ground with just a few layers of canvas and bedding between her naked body and mother earth.
Then her other senses kicked in and she heard talking, it was Luke but who was the other person, then she remembered the voice, it was the Trooper. Why had she come back! Lorelai listened and heard Luke laugh, but she was no longer jealous. The redhead was clearly chatting up Luke, but Luke was being Luke and playing along. How he had done with her for too many years to count. It was still strange to hear him flirt with someone else.
Lorelai got up, put on her track pants, one of Luke's flannel shirts and slipped on her sneakers. Opened the tent she went out into the bright morning sun. She saw Luke who was already full dressed in his usual flannel and jeans, but his caps was still in the tent she noted.
LORELAI "Hi there." Lorelai said to the trooper.
TROOPER "Morning ma'am."
Lorelai didn't like being called that, she hated it, but smiled as she walked to Luke and kissed him on the lips.
LORELAI "Morning Hun."
LUKE "Here you go." Handing Lorelai her coffee.
LORELAI "Smells great, I think it's what woke me. You really know how to treat this girl." Looking back at the Trooper.
The Trooper watched on as the display of affection continued, clearing her throat.
TROOPER "Well I just thought I'd check up on the camp grounds on my morning patrol. Something I do every morning, things look fine. So I'll leave you to your breakfast. Here you go Luke." Handing Luke back the coffee cup she drove off through the trees and out of sight.
LORELAI "So when did your girlfriend turn up." She teased.
LUKE "She's not my girlfriend, and about 15 minutes ago." He joked as he kissed her.
LORELAI "So where did you hide the coffee?"
LUKE "Air tight bag in the toolbox."
LORELAI "Bert was hiding my coffee! I hate Bert."
Ignoring her comments.
LUKE "I have breakfast cooking, it's almost done."
LORELAI "Okay so what do we have for?"
LUKE "Just some bread, bacon and the remaining eggs you didn't eat last night. Well get something more on the road."
LORELAI "Yeah road kill. I can't wait."
LUKE "You know what I mean."
Since there was not much food left, Luke put it all on one plate, which they shared. Luke was getting used to eating differently with Lorelai back in his life, as she was feed him some of the bacon with little resistance, what was a guy to do?
After they finished Luke washed up and started to pack the camp site as Lorelai went to the waters edge to freshen up and change. There were still no other campers so she decided to stripped off and take a quick dip before getting out and drying off. The day was cooler so she decided to put on some tight jeans, knee-high boots and a blue V-neck cashmere top. She knew Luke would like as she watched him packing but in reality packing process had stopped, as Luke couldn't keep his eyes off her. He noticed she didn't seam to take any underwear with her to change in to.
When dressed she helped Luke pack up the tent and they set off with Luke driving. They stopped for gas and some more breakfast about half an hour later before getting back on the road. It was a long days travel, they stopped for a quick lunch at a truck stop, Lorelai getting loads of attention front he truckers. Luke was a little jealous but didn't show it.
They had made good time and Luke was please he was getting closer to see his daughter again. Lorelai took pictures when not driving and sung to all her songs. They played "I Spy" and other road trip games. Lorelai even read a little to kill some time. At about 3 Luke pulled into the main entrance of the Madison Hotel. Lorelai was surprised, turning to Luke.
LORELAI "What did you do?"
LUKE "I called ahead."
LORELAI "Wow." Was all she said as the parking attendant opened her door.
LUKE "I figured after the tent this might be more to your liking."
LORELAI "Oh it is, but when did you call?"
LUKE "Lunch time when you went to get the third coffee and flirting with those truckers."
LORELAI "You're my hero." Embracing Luke with a kiss.
They got their bags out of the Jeep and gave them to the attendant to take to the room. Luke gave him a 20. And the valet the same to parked the car.
LORELAI "Luke Danes your never cease to amaze me."
LUKE "Well they look like they work hard."
After signing in, they were taken to their room. It was a beautiful suite, a large bathroom, balcony with a view, large LCD TV on the wall and even a fireplace.
LORELAI "This is perfect, come look at the view."
Walking up behind Lorelai he embraced her, holding her waist.
LUKE "I didn't know we'd be able to see the river."
LORELAI "Yep the mighty Mississippi! Thanks Luke." Lorelai leaned back and they kissed.
LUKE "There's more."
LORELAI "What, what?" Turning around, starting the jump and giggling like a school girl.
LUKE "How would you like to go on a music tour?"
LORELAI "Where, when, how, do we have time."
LUKE "Yep, the 'Memphis Soulsville Music Tour' will be picking us up at 3.30 out front."
LORELAI "Lucas you're too good for me."
She put her arms around his neck and pulled herself us to kiss him, it started slow but built quickly when Luke opened his mouth, and their tongues teased each other. Luke reluctantly pulled away first as the swelling in his pants began to grow uncomfortable.
LUKE "We have to go, don't want to miss the tour." Holding her hand, leading her back into the room.
LORELAI "What will I wear?"
LUKE "You're fine as you are."
LORELAI "Just fine?" Showing her pouting face.
LUKE "I mean great, you're always look great."
LORELAI "Okay that's better, but I just need to change my top. I'll be just a minute." She said while heading to the bedroom with Luke in toe. "And you need a new shirt also."
LUKE "I'm fine, were fine, we'll be late."
LORELAI "Not if we hurry. Besides I need to put on a bra."
She said as she pulled the top over her head showing off her bare back, then turning around. Luke was silence but not surprised given what he had seen at the camp site.
LORELAI "Don't get any ideas mister, or we'll miss that bus."
They managed to keep their hands off each other long enough change their clothes. Luke put on some fresh deodorant and Lorelai checked her make-up, not that she was wearing much. It was only just after 3.30 when they got to the lobby almost missing the bus.
The tour took in a number of sites, Lorelai was ecstatic and Luke even had a smile from time to time. That might have been more about them making out, in the back of the bus, then being on the buss with 20 other crazy people. Lorelai took dozens of photos and got Luke to video some of the tour with a new camera they picked up in the mall. It was Lorelai's idea to video the trip and April for Luke to take home to Stars Hollow.
Later while Luke was taking a shower Lorelai took the opportunity to call Rory for the first time since they left Stars Hollow.
RORY "You're where!"
LORELAI "The Madison Hotel in Memphis, it's fantastic. We have a great view of the Mississippi, it's very romantic and intimate and the musical history. Luke went on a music bus tour!
RORY "Now you're just making things up."
LORELAI "No I have pictures, I'm sending to you right now. I'm telling you I didn't even see it coming."
RORY "Wow Luke's too go for you, maybe grandma was right." She teased.
LORELAI "Enough you, now tell me how it's going, did you meet him yet?"
RORY "Who, Barack?"
LORELAI "So you're on a first name basis now!"
Ignoring her mother.
RORY "I've only been here a few weeks, it's great but I'm getting a little board, like I want to do more, you know?"
LORELAI "It will get better. So are you writing much?"
RORY "A bit, you should have links in some emails I've sent. But I hope to write more soon…"
Luke opened the door and came out of the bathroom wearing just a loosely tied hotel robe, as he finished drying his hair, Lorelai was distracted by the sight.
RORY "Oh the email is here. Mum, hello, are you there."
LORELAI "Sorry Hun."
RORY "What happened. Is Luke there, is he naked?"
LORELAI "Yes Luke is here, not quite naked, but a great sight, I can see right down main street."
LUKE "Aw, Geez! Don't tell her that." Tightening the robe while Lorelai giggled.
RORY "I don't need to hear that. Oh my God, you too look so great, thanks for the photos."
Lorelai was still distracted.
LORELAI "Well um, hun I gotta go. I have a hot date with this great sexy guy. I'll call you next week or in the next few days, which ever is sooner."
RORY "Bye Mum, love you."
LORELAI "Love you too. Bye."
Lorelai hung up the hotels phone and closed her laptop.
LUKE "So Rory's doing good."
LORELAI "Yep, Barack and her are on first names now."
LUKE "That's good, okay your turn, hurry up."
LORELAI "Okay." With a cheeky smile.
Lorelai slowly unzipped her left boot and lifted her leg in the air as she leant back on the bed to slip it off, repeating it with the other. She then took off her shirt and bra. Getting up slowly she unbuttoned her jeans and slipped them off. Luke was stunned, she was not wearing panties she had gone commando all day. Sitting next to him in the Jeep. Flirting with those truckers at lunch. Making out on the bus tour. He was getting hard just thinking about it. Luke enjoyed the little striptease as he was trying to dress. When completely naked Lorelai collects her robe.
LORELAI "We're gonna have to buy one of these for you to take home."
She then goes in to the bathroom leaving the door open for Luke to watch as she reaches to turn on the water and slowly starts soaping down.
Luke knows he needs to make a phone call and can't be distracted so takes his clothes into the main room he finishes dressing and calls his daughter.
LUKE "Hello Anna, it's me."
ANNA "Hello Luke." Sounding a little cold.
LUKE "Is April there?"
ANNA "Yes I'll get here."
LUKE "Anna, can we talk first."
ANNA "Okay."
LUKE "I don't want to fight with you, I'm with Lorelai again as you know. This time we will get married."
ANNA "I don't want to fight either Luke. I just don't want April to be hurt."
LUKE "I understand and I don't want to hurt her either. I just want to see her for a few days before her camp trip. So I thought if she can't come to Stars Hollow they we'd come to her. We'll be there at your house Saturday morning, okay."
ANNA "Okay, I just needed to tell you. Here's April."
Handing her the cordless phone.
APRIL "Dad, it's so great to hear your voice, where are you?"
LUKE "We're in Memphis, so about 2 days away. We'll probably get in late so I figured we'd come around first thing Saturday."
APRIL "Please call when you get in town."
LUKE "Okay I'll call you before your bedtime Friday."
APRIL "Thanks dad, and I'm glad Lorelai is coming."
LUKE "Me too." He blushed.
APRIL "So how is Lorelai, can I talk to her?"
LUKE "She's taking a show but I'll tell her hello from you. She's looking forward to seeing you again. Speaking of, and I feel kind of stupid not telling you before but we're back together again, me and Lorelai."
APRIL "I figured as much."
Luke chuckled.
LUKE "She said you might know figure it out. So are you okay with this, with Lorelai."
APRIL "Yes it's great, I don't know what happened last year but I'm glad she's back, she made you happy dad.
LUKE "I know, and I think it's better than ever." Clearing his throat. "So enough of me, are you getting ready for the trip to camp."
APRIL "All finished, packed and ready to go. Leaving this week to have fun with you and Lorelai. I wish you could have stayed here in the house with me, but I understand why you're not."
LUKE "Don't worry about your mothers. I think she'll be fine with Lorelai now." Hearing the shower stop. "Okay Lorelai has just finished her shower so I've got to go, I'll see you in 2 days, love you April."
APRIL "Love you too dad, drive safe."
About an hour later Luke was still waiting for Lorelai to finish getting dressed, he was patient and was making use of the time to by TV and catching up on some sports news. Lorelai finally came into the room.
LUKE "Fina…" Luke was left speechless by what she was wearing.
She had on a dark blue, full-length halter-top dress, with a very low neckline, a long slit up her right thigh and her back was exposed right down to just above her beautifully shaped bottom. Lorelai spun around to show the dress off to Luke, her hair was up in a twist, with a few curls over her face. Luke's mouth was open, he could not talk and he could feel himself becoming hard, which didn't go unnoticed but Lorelai. He fleet under dressed in his slacks, dress shirt, no tie and jacket. Lorelai knew the power she held over Luke when it came to dressing just right for the occasion.
LORELAI "So was it worth the wait?" Luke just nodded, as Lorelai bent down to kiss him. "Come on big boy or we'll be late for dinner."
They were seated in a secluded corner of the restaurant with a view out the window to the gardens. Luke was more interested in his company than the view outside. They talked about the tour and the hotel but Luke was mesmerized. Even though he had seen her completely naked many a times he could not get over how good she looked it that dress, he also notice the simple necklace she had chosen. They way it moved in the valley between he breasts as she laughed remembering Luke singing along on the tour bus. Luke just had to ask.
LUKE "So when did you pack the dress and necklace, I remember the fashion parade you put on in your bedroom, don't remember seeing them."
LORELAI "Actually I got the dress at the mall, they necklace was a 'I'm free' gift to my self I got a few months back, I just never had the right occasion to wear it in public until tonight."
LUKE "When did you have time in the mall, I was with you the whole time."
LORELAI "Not when you went to the bathroom. I ran back to a shop we had just passed. Where I saw it in the window, I didn't even try it on."
LUKE "You bought a dress, and I'm not even gonna ask what it cost. In a place well likely never see again, not knowing if it would even fit.
LORELAI "I have a 6th sense about these things. I know when clothes will fit. How did I do?" Smiling with a cheeky grin.
LUKE "Looks great from where I'm sitting, and worth every cent no matter how much you paid. And great necklace also, it brings out your eyes."
Lorelai blushed, Luke knew exactly what to say. They ordered the lobster, which was normally their special occasions meal since the time Luke first tried it on that trip to Matha's Vineyard. Luke even ordered a bottle of Champagne.
LUKE "To us and the rest of our lives together."
LORELAI "Here, here." They toasted.
LUKE "Yep I still hate this stuff."
LORELAI "So why drink it then."
LUKE "Maybe I'll getting used to it before we marry."
There it was again, the "M" word, although it had only been a few days since they talked about the possibility it felt longer.
LORELAI "So what are we doing."
LUKE "About?"
LORELAI "Marriage, I mean I know it's only been a few weeks and I don't want to rush or push you but I feel like we need to talk about this, work out a few things."
Luke was silent for a moment before he spoke.
LUKE "I don't want to lose you again."
LORELAI "Me neither, the past year was a mistake, like a badly written TV drama. I needed something, I lost you and I thought it was my last chance to be happy. But I was confused and lost in a world I didn't want in the end." She babbled.
LUKE "You never lost me, well maybe for a second when you told be what happened that night. But I never stopped loving you, you need to know that."
Lorelai leaned across table and they kissed. Just on the lips at first then Lorelai's tongue made it's way into Luke mouth, the kiss deepened but their hands stayed on the table. Luke pulled away first.
LORELAI "I didn't really stop loving you either."
LUKE "I think we need to decide to do this together. I know it's normally the guy who proposes, don't get me wrong I loved your proposal but I think we both want this and yes I want to do this right so I will ask it officially but if you like we can just agree for now that it's what we both want. I just need time to do it right. Do you know what I mean?"
LORELAI "I think I do and yes I still want it, I always wanted you even before I proposed."
LUKE "Okay."
LORELAI "Okay. So will it be on one knee."
LUKE "What?"
LORELAI "The proposal."
LUKE "Maybe. I do know you like me being on my knees in front of you." Giving Lorelai a cheeky wink.
LORELAI "Dirty!"
The lobsters were perfect, Luke ordered a beer while Lorelai finished off the Champagne they ended with dessert Lorelai had a chocolate Moose while Luke had a fruit salad with cream. Lorelai managed to feed Luke a couple a spoons of her dessert in exchange for some apple, which she liked.
Luke even asked Lorelai to dance but just one, a waltz.
In the elevator on the way back to the suite they were alone and started to make out, they couldn't wait to get back to that room. They held each other close. Lorelai's hand when into Luke's pants and she slowly stroked his length. Luke in turned put his arm around Lorelai's back and running his hand up her side touching the side of her breast, as they continued to kiss deeply.
The door opened and they froze for a second as they realized they were being watched, they pulled apart like they weren't doing anything wrong, seeing a young family of four. Exited the elevator and walked up the hall, hand in hand. After a few steps they giggled and ran off to their suite.
Once at the suite Lorelai struggled to get the key card to open the door as Luke kissed her. Finally inside Luke pushed Lorelai against the wall just inside the entrance pushing the door closed with his foot. Lorelai tilted and lifted her head allowing Luke to get better access to her neck. He moved down to the opening in the front of her dress, putting his right had under the thin fabric to caress her right breast. Lorelai began to moan at his touch, he pulled it aside to expose her hardened nipple, which he immediately kissed and teased with his tongue.
Lorelai then decided to take control, using her left hand to lift his face and kiss him deeply letting their tongues duel for control once again. Stopping for breath, Luke stepped back as Lorelai undid the twist in her hair some stray hairs fell over her face. Luke brushed them aside before holding her chin he gently kissed her on the lips, moving his hand to behind her neck he pulled her in to deepen the kiss.
Lorelai lifted her right leg and used it to pull Luke into her, feeling his hardness against her centre. Wanting contact as soon as possible Lorelai reached down and undid Luke's belt and zipper. Putting her leg back down she slid his pants to the floor, along with his boxers. Luke began to move his hands down her side, to her legs, lifting the right one again. He moved his left hand on to her thigh and under the dress to her buttock. As he also moved his right hand under her dress feeling how moist she was he pulled her panties to the side.
LUKE "Nice time to start wearing underwear again." He jokes with a smile.
They moved over to a side table, which Lorelai sat on. Before she knew it Luke was inside her, pushing her hard against the wall and table. Lorelai lifted both her legs around his waist, forcing Luke in harder. After a few minutes they slowed down to catch their breath.
LORELAI "We must be getting old."
LUKE "Bed?"
LORELAI "God yes!"
Luke still inside her lifted Lorelai up and slowly walked to the bedroom, shedding cloths as they went, Luke almost tripping on the pants around his ankles. Luke helped Lorelai lift the dress over her head. By the time they got to the bed, Luke was just in his shoes and Lorelai in her tong. Luke lowered her down on the edge of the bed still inside her. The bed was about 3 foot off the ground, which was the perfect height. As Lorelai laid on the bed with her legs over the edge Luke pulled out, then proceeded to slip the last remaining piece of clothing of her perfect body. He always liked she had freckles but few people got to see them all. He lifted her legs up over his shoulders before plunging inside her once again.
Quickly picking up pace now that balancing was less of a task. Lorelai reached up and pulled Luke in for a tender kiss as they slowed down.
LORELAI "My turn."
Luke pulled out, quickly kicked off his shoes and socks, climbed on the bed and laying back in the centre with his head on the pillows. Lorelai moved around to the foot of the bed and climbed back on to be between his legs. Teasing him at first she didn't take long to put him into her mouth. She moaned, as she tasted his salty goodness. Luke touched her on her head playing with her hair as he moaned enjoying the sight. Tapped her on the shoulder, letting her know he was close. She straddled him, facing away in a kneeling to position. Reaching down to place him at her entrance. Sitting down Lorelai took just his tip in to her before pulling him out. Doing this several time driving Luke crazy. Finally she sat down on him. Take all of Luke inside her in one long motion. Moving up and down together Lorelai tease Luke's balls with her left hand and feeling herself and her wetness with her right. She then took her right hand and leant back to put her fingers in Luke's mouth. He accepted them, licking them clear while moaning at the scent.
As her climax came she lent forward to hold his feet, clamped down on Luke's shaft as the orgasim hit, in turn forcing Luke to come deep inside her. Lorelai fell back on Luke's chest as they bought their breathing back under control. After a few minutes they settled on their sides and Luke pulled out of her. They laid in silence for a few more minutes before the cool night air started to take effect.
LORELAI "Up!"
LUKE "Why?"
LORELAI "We're on top of the covers and I'm cold."
LUKE "Thanks." Said with that typical dry Luke tone. "Give me a minute."
LORELAI "Okay." Leaning back to kiss Luke. "But hold me tighter." They got closer. "So is this your plan."
LUKE "What plan?"
LORELAI "To sleep with me in every state before the trip is over."
LUKE "We're not going to every state."
LORELAI "We could."
LUKE "Okay, I'll call the diner, you call Sookie and tell them we'll be back sometime next year." He joked as he got up.
LORELAI "Cold now."
LUKE "Well it was your idea to get up, the sooner you get your ass off the bed, the sooner we can get back under the covers."
LORELAI "Okay, I like the sound of that." Lorelai quickly moved.
They pulled back the covers and sheets then climbed back into bed, Lorelai setting on Luke's side with one leg over his. They kissed.
LORELAI "So round 2?" Kissing him.
LUKE "You're gonna be the death of me." Returning the kiss.
Lorelai pulled back and gave Luke a cheeky smile as she moved on top of him once more. They continued making love for the next few hours before settling into a deep sleep for the night, or what was left of it.
TBC…
ETA - If someone would like to beta future chapters please let me know, I'm doing my best at getting all the spelling correct but some might slip though.
With the Anna and stuff I was trying to bring her in but don't know if it came out any good.
As for the marriage part I was trying to make it clear they both want to marry and that it will happen, but they are at a point in their relationship after 10 years as friends and just renewing their romance that they don't need to say those words just yet, but that it will happen, some day. I don't know yet if that will be with-in this fic, maybe.
Please remember this is my interpretation of what I would have like to have seen in season 8 if we got it.
And the dialogue is always one of the hardest parts.
Thanks for the feedback/reviews.
And if someone would like to beta this story please left me know.