Ninja Revelations
Chapter Four
Disclaimer: Copy and paste disclaimer from last chapter.
Last time on Ninja Revelations- Naruto angrily stared into the face of the test proctor. "That is enough Genin Uzumaki!" The proctor hissed into his face. After staring the proctor down for a few moments, the blonde Genin just smirked and walked away.
As he was about to climb the stairs to exit the arena, he addressed the proctor. "You have saved the Hyuuga for now, but that does not stop me from finishing this later. None escape me when I wish them dead, keep that in mind "and with that he exited the arena.
With the fight with Neji finally over, Naruto can finally turn his attention towards bigger challenges. What challenges are these? Find out in Chapter Four of Ninja Revelations!
Naruto climbed the stairs at a leisurely pace, making sure to enjoy every moment of the fearful looks he received from the stunned audience. Stepping up the stairs, sword still in his hand, the blade dragging upon the ground; creating a horrid screech with each step the wielder took, red eyes still alit with the dark lust, pierced the shadows inside the arena. Along with his hauntingly demented smile and the fact he was covered in blood (most of it his opponents) made him appear to be a fiend from the lowest pits of hell. Yes Naruto was for the first time in his life reveling in the looks given to him from his home villagers. As he reached the top of the stairs the blonde paused. He looked towards the pulsing weapon in his hand and smirked. Slowly the blade retracted back into its fleshy sheath, leaving only the heart and the arterial handle still attached to the blondes arm. The hearts steady beating suddenly increased and became frantic. The boys arm also started to spasm, just as suddenly. The change started so slowly it was almost unnoticeable, but as it began to increase its pace what was occurring became clear. It started with the veins seemingly being 'absorbed' by the boys arm. The heart soon also followed the same suit becoming part of the boy's body. If you looked closely you could see the object worming its way up the blonde's limb like a parasite. After a few moments the only sign of the object were many, deep crimson, rune like marks running up the blonde's arm. Though up close, it could be seen that the marks were in fact deep cuts in the bearers flesh colored by his-own crimson blood. Though it would appear the pain was excruciating, the blonde showed no signs of being injured, having endured enough injuries in his life to effectively desensitize him from the feeling of pain.
After finishing his task the red-eyed boy continued his leisurely gait towards his fellow Genin. As he slowly approached his fellow Konoha ninjas, he noticed that he was getting odd reactions from the Suna team. The blonde Kunoichi, and the dark haired middle sibling, were for the most part, predictable; the usual looks of fear and apprehension, though they were much more subdued than the others, and the blonde's eyes seemed to hold something more a sort of …. longing? The demented boy smirked inwardly; maybe he could find a use for her, but their reactions, while unusual weren't the reaction had truly caught his attention. It was the one coming from the red haired youngest sibling, Gaara he believed the Suna boy had called him-self, which he had really considered odd. The cold green eyes of the one called Gaara held something akin to …. Respect? Yes instead of fear in those cold eyes he saw respect and eagerness. Locking eyes with the boy, Naruto attempted to discern the reason behind such feeling. What he saw inside the boys eyes intrigued the blonde, and he began to subconsciously project an aura of battle lust and eagerness that startled those watching. Naruto's bloodthirsty grin from before seemed almost, apathetic in comparison to the one he now wore. As crimson eyes met green, what truly amused the Konoha native (and scared the other genin) was that the Suna youth wore a grin identical to his own. Turning away to continue his approach towards his fellow Konoha genin, Naruto couldn't deny his excitement for his battle with the Ichibi Jinchuuriki. A battle with one so like himself was bound to be a challenge indeed. The Kyuubi Jinchuuriki counldn't stop himself for chuckling in anticipation.
As he arrived to the location of the rookie nine the blonde, turned back towards the arena, not caring for what they felt of his brutal treatment of what was once a Hyuugan prodigy. While most seemed to get that he did not wish for conversation, one pink haired annoyance seemed to miss this and began to screech in her agonizing voice.
"WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT YOU IDIOT!? I ALWAYS KNEW YOU WERE A FREAK BUT EVEN I NEVER THOUGHT YOU WERE THIS WORTHLESS! WHY COULDN'T YOU HAVE GOTTEN YOURSELF KILLED YOU MONSTER!?"
The other rookies were pissed. They had already told the pink harpy TWICE about speaking and they were fed up with her constant stupidity. Subtly they all prepared to silence the pink creature once and for all. As they were about to go in for the strike, they were halted by a chuckle from the blonde demon container. His chuckling continued for a moment, before turning to face that which had amused him so much. Sakura's expression changed from one of rage and stupidity into one of fear and terror seeing the blonde's vicious smirk. Despite themselves' the male rookie genin found themselves grinning in anticipation over the pink thing's reaction, hoping that it would get the punishment it truly deserved. The kunoichi on the other hand, seemed to keep a neural expression, but their eye practically glowed in their excitement of what was to come.
The Haruno took a few steps backwards as the blonde turned to face her. Absolute bloodlust radiated from his smirking form. Despite what to most would seem like common sense, the pink witch once again opened her mouth and spoke. "Stay away from me freak! A monster like you should know where you belong, so leave me alone and go back to hell!"
At this Naruto lowered his head and his shoulders began to shake. Sakura believing that he was crying because she was right, took on a smug expression. The expression quickly changed as she heard the laughter of the boy, and saw his manic grin slowly spreading across his face. Before she was able to react, the blonde's hand shot forward and grabbed her by the throat. Lifting her off the ground the boy slammed her back into a pillar next to them and held her there. Forcing her head up, he locked his crimson stare to her eyes, though to Sakura she was looking into the eyes of the Satan himself. She visibly shook at her captors murderous gaze, though she could not pull away from his look. "You sound exactly like Neji did Haruno. And need I remind you of the consequences of his actions?" Sakura was shaking at the joy in his voice as he spoke and was forced to look towards the arena where a team of medic nin rushed Neji off the field towards the emergency room. Naruto laughed again as he brought his plaything's face back to face him "Look at them rushing like the ants they are. It's very obvious that they won't be able to do anything for him. Yes they can mend his broken bones and fix most of his injuries, but it is of no use. They can't fix his useless eye, and I have taken away his will to live leaving him a useless shell of what he once was. They can never fix the Hyuuga, and there is no point in trying. I will kill him just as I said I would, there is no stopping that. For now though, my main concern is how to punish you for your actions." Naruto got a look of sudden inspiration and slowly brought up his right arm. Having had he vision forced on her blonde captor's arm, she watched as a cut appeared on the bottom of his wrist. A small metallic glint shone from inside and the point of a sword began to extend forth. "Your punishment is to burn in hell, and don't worry about being lonely, as the Hyuuga will be joining you shortly." The blade continued to extend till it rested against Sakura's throat, mere centimeters from piercing her jugular vein. "Goodbye Haruno."
As Naruto went to end the pink haired girl's existence he felt a pair of arms drape over his shoulders, and a voice whispered hotly against his neck. "You know, it's impolite to play with your food Uzumaki."
Naruto smirked as he recognized the voice. Without facing the speaker he answered "But it's much more fun to make them squirm before you end their lives. It also keeps them guessing on how long they have to live. So if it isn't the examiner for the second part of the Chunin Exams, Anko I believe it was." Feeling movement on his shoulder which he took as a yes the blonde continued. "Despite how comfortable this current position is, I should probably ask what you're doing here."
Feeling her release his shoulders as she stood, the demon container turned to face his current cause of interruption, still holding his victim against the cold stone of the pillar. She looked down into his face and explained "As much fun as it was watching you enjoying yourself, I really must stop you from killing the girl. If I don't the old man might lock ya up so you can't have any fun. I figured you'd prefer this way." Having finished her message she went to walk away.
"Hey." She heard the blonde speak and turned around, only for the body of Sakura to land in her arms. "Take that with you for now, so I can finish what I started later."
While normally Anko doesn't listen to orders the kid interested her enough to do him a favor. "Alright kid but you owe me one" And with that she left, an amused blonde demon container to go back to the other rookies.
And
that's how babies are made ….
Chapter 4 Is over!
To be honest I wasn't very happy with how this chapter came out, definitely not my best work. It had some good parts but I don't think it was up to my usual standards. I will make it up to you guys by writing an extra awesome chapter tomorrow.
Reviewer Mail Time!
Thanks to all of you for you awesome responses!
Kira(still love the name)- Im getting great chapter as always on my third day here. You guys are overrating me I think lol. Anko pairing very possible as well as Temari I through a bit with both sort of interacting with Naruto to set up either or possibly both if another guys idea goes over. Kurargari hmm interesting I'll keep this in mind.
Kagefighter- A wonderful, gory display of demonic brutality!? YES! Tell ya what I'll keep up my work if you continue with the great use of adjectives. And your welcome for the bashing, there's quite a bit more in this chapter so enjoy.
High Demon Lord- I hope your talking about my Orochimaru bit if so thanks! If not … Thanks!
IEatChicken-Your Welcome! Thanks I really enjoyed making Neji lose his eye. When I went in to writing this chapter one of the thoughts in my head was how can I make Neji lose one if not both eyes? And as for possibly being first thank you, I love to be original and unique as much as I can so you get the best story possible, and have always wanted an Eyeless Neji.
Shadowassassin-the problem with calling it the sword of the damned is that the heart really isn't damned more like corrupted. I suppose I could call it the sword of corruption or blade of the fallen or something if you guys like that. I still think you guys are overrating my writing skills again, but thank you! And I will keep up my work as long as you guys keep reading and responding.
Kammari- Thank you very much! I think a Harem would be easy to pull off since I have been thinking of ways to make most pairs work and it wouldn't be any harder, though it wouldn't be a giant city sized harem it would only be 3 or 4 girls. I must admit I couldn't help smiling at the Gaara with a period part, that would be devastating lol. But sadly I cant do a female gaara for the same reason I cant do a Gara/Naruto pairing it would change too much of how the story progressed. And you wont have to wait any longer here it is.
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