Thank-you EVERYONE for your reviews! AH! It made me so happy, especially since I got like zero sleep last night and was really crabby this morning.
Anyways, this morning all these different ideas were coming to me about this fan fiction and all my other ones, plus one that I'm thinking about writing, so I'm going to take advantage of my creative spur and write a bunch today!
JAVAMANIAC – Yeah I really hate exams but YEAH HOO, I'm done with them, so I can go back to writing a bunch of fan fictions instead of doing my homework! Here's my update, keep reviewing!
GGIRLSISMYLIFE– I replied with how to get to my other stories, but if you didn't get it, scroll to the top of this page and click on my pen name, and then scroll down that page to see a list of my stories. Glad you want to read my other ones, thanks.
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GIGI892 – Wow… just… wow. That was THE LONGEST, and BEST review I have ever gotten, thanks so much! I can't write much, but I'll write a little something. This is the chapter (first one) where Luke is in a bathing suit! And by the way, I'm writing another story where Luke and Lorelai go to the cottage, and Luke is in a bathing suit almost the whole weekend! (DROOLS),,, I can't cook or bake, so don't feel bad, ha. Oh yeah, and what are your favorite songs from the STYX? Because the concert is the next chapter… I have three brothers so yuck, a sister would be cool… but yeah… I didn't study for exams and I think I did alright happy face, we don't celebrate MLK… at least… I don't think. Can't write anymore because I am getting told by my mom if I don't get off the computer I'm getting it taken away for a week… and we do NOT want that. Anyways, thanks for the awesome review! Please write more like it, it makes me happy!
Thank you for the reviews and please keep reviewing, they make me happy! Here's your next chapter, I hope you guys like it… and for those of you who I promised, Luke and Lorelai are going to the water park today… meaning one thing… Luke in a bathing suit! PFFT. Who cares about the actual story line, we have Luke in a bathing suit… that is all we need to survive!
Lorelai and Luke were both sleeping on the big bed, Luke's arm was draped over Lorelai's stomach and they were both buried into the sheets. The sun was coming in threw the curtains and hitting Luke in the face.
Once Luke started feeling the heat on his face he slowly opened his eyes. At first he was startled when he saw Lorelai sleeping next to him but then he remembered the night before.
Luke thought the night was going to be headed in a whole different direction after the fourth kiss, but they actually ended up talking until about one o'clock in the morning, which Luke thought was good because he didn't want to rush into anything.
Luke slowly got out of bed and did it without waking Lorelai up and went into the kitchen and started making breakfast.
About twenty minutes later Lorelai slowly moved out of the bedroom rubbing her eyes.
"Good morning," Lorelai mumbled, kissed Luke on the cheek quickly and then collapsed at the table.
"Morning, here, I made you some breakfast," Luke said and handed her a plate with eggs, bacon, toast and sausages.
"Thanks"
"So…" Luke started as he sat across from her.
Lorelai looked up at him while she swallowed some food. "So," She shrugged.
"Listen, about last night… you know, we were both tired and if you want to re-think what happened, that's okay with me"
"Are you breaking up with me?" Lorelai asked wide-eyed.
"No," Luke said quickly. "I was just making sure… you know, so if we're able to break up, that means we're… together, right?"
"Yeah," Lorelai said and smiled.
"Good…" Luke matched her smile.
"What ride do you wanna hit first?" Lorelai asked looking at the map.
"Lets try that one," Luke pointed at the first ride when you entered the park; Boomerang.
Lorelai looked uneasy, "Um… okay."
"It's not that bad, you went on Superman yesterday, this ride has nothing on Superman"
"How about we start on a different ride? Look, we haven't even been to this part of the park yet"
"The water park?" Luke asked.
"Yeah, let's go there instead"
"We're not in our bathing suits," Luke pointed out.
"Eh who cares?"
"Um, probably the people in charge."
"What, you think the people in charge will care if we just strip down right in line and go on the ride naked?"
Luke turned about four shades of red and replied quickly, "I think they'll mind"
"Would you mind Lukey-poo?" Lorelai asked making Luke stop in front of her and walk towards her.
"Yes I would mind is all the people in the park saw me naked."
Lorelai, still teasing him she ran her finger down his chest. "Would you mind if the whole park saw me naked?"
"Lorelai," Luke warned.
"Would you like to see me naked?" Lorelai asked giggling at how much she was making Luke blush.
"That's it, you're going on Boomerang" He said and pulled her arm pulling her into the line.
"No," She yelled trying to pull her out of the line, but he was stronger and he won the battle so they were both in line for the back of the car.
"Luke I'm sorry, I'm sorry… please don't make me go on this ride!"
"Why are you so scared? You went on two different roller coasters yesterday"
"Yeah but this one is missing half the track!"
"It's not missing the track," Luke said. "This is how the ride is, it pulls you to the top, you go down the hill threw the ride and then you go back up that side and the breaks stop you…"
"What if the breaks don't stop? We could die, It would be horrible so we-"
Luke cut her off by kissing her on the lips.
"Wow, finally found a way to shut me up," Lorelai said as he pulled away.
"Yeah… finally," Luke said.
The gates opened in front of them and they went onto the ride.
"It's going to be fine," Luke said as he took off his baseball cap and tucked it under his foot.
Once the people in charge of the ride checked their harnesses Lorelai reached over and grabbed Luke's hand.
"You know, holding my hand just turns my hand purple… it doesn't help you at all," Luke said seriously.
"It helps me from feeling like I'm falling out of the ride and helps me from screaming at my full volume"
"When you were screaming on Superman that wasn't your loudest scream?"
"No," Lorelai said.
"God help me"
"Fine, I won't hold your hand," Lorelai said and dropped his hand.
"Lorelai it's fine, hold my hand if you want."
The ride started pulling the car up backwards.
"I'm not going to do you any favors"
"Fine" Luke said and Lorelai looked down and realized how high they were off the ground.
"Oh my gosh!" Lorelai squealed and grabbed his hand Luke smirked.
The ride went threw all of the loops and then went up the other side where the breaks went on.
"Wait a minute…" Lorelai started as she looked around, "If we're facing this way, and the track is behind us then…"
"We're going backwards"
"Dear god I am sorry for anything I have done to deserve this… but please don't make me die… this is not how I planned to go, I wanted to drown in a giant tub of coffee… not like this"
"Please shut up…" Luke pleaded.
"You can't make me… nah-nah-nah-nah-nah-AHHHHH!" Lorelai screamed as the ride went backwards.
"That was so much fun!" Lorelai said as they walked through the park.
"Yeah having you scream in my ear for five minutes is always fun," Luke said sarcastically.
"How's your hand?" She asked and Luke held up his hand, where you could clearly notice her hand print in purple. "Oops, sorry"
"It's alright… where do you wanna go next?" Luke asked.
"Let's sit down for a bit," Lorelai said and Luke followed her to a bench.
They sat for a minute and Lorelai turned to Luke. "Do you think this is weird?"
"What is weird?" Luke asked.
"We're a we, but it doesn't feel that different… why?"
"You've noticed that too eh?" Luke asked. "Maybe it's because we talked last night and we're comfortable with what's going on"
"Maybe…" Lorelai started, "Incase I didn't tell you… it was a great kiss"
Luke smiled shyly and then leaned in and kissed Lorelai.
"Well it's kind of different… I mean we never get to spontaneously kiss before"
"Right," Luke agreed and looked around nervously realizing he just kissed in public.
"Oh come on Luke, we'll never see any of these people again," Lorelai said as if she was reading Luke's mind.
"How do you know? These people could come to Stars Hollow and stay at the Inn or go to the diner and they'd recognize us!"
"Right, because out of everything here they're remember us kissing on the bench, man… it must have been one good show"
"Lorelai…" Luke warned as he stood up, Lorelai followed.
"I mean really…" She started and then switched to a high pitch voice, "Oh my gosh are you that guy who was kissing that girl on that bench in Six Flags… can I have your autograph Butch?"
"They wouldn't know what my name was," Luke pointed out.
"Exactly… so no biggy"
They walked a few minutes in silence walking in to particular direction until Lorelai stopped in her tracks and looked at the 'Sky Coaster'.
In front of the line they had a sign that read, 'First couple to ride the SKY COASTER three times in a row, without getting sick, wins tickets to the STYX concert tonight!'
Lorelai squealed. "Let's go Luke!"
"No"
"Luke come on… THE STYX! We have to go, pretty please?"
"Lorelai I'm not going on that stupid ride."
Lorelai pouted and Luke shifted.
"No matter how much you pout I'm not…" Lorelai cut him off by kissing him hard on the lips, causing him to almost fell backwards.
When she pulled away, she still had her hands on his cheeks, "Please"
Luke sighed, "Fine, let's go"
As Lorelai filled out the contest entry form, Luke looked at the sign.
"Don't you find it weird that they're giving away tickets to a concert?"
"What, do you think we're getting PUNKED?" Lorelai asked.
"Getting what?"
Lorelai laughed, "Luke it's a radio contest thing, they do it all the time and I've been trying to win these kind of things FOREVER, but I never win… so, today is the day I am going to win one of these!"
"Okay"
He didn't argue, he learned long ago to never argue with Lorelai Gilmore.
They attached Luke and Lorelai to the Harness, Luke was at the bottom and Lorelai was on top of him. The cable brought them up to the other post… the attendant counted down, "5…4…"
"It's good you're on the bottom cause if we fall out, you'll break my fall." Lorelai joked and Luke rolled his eyes.
"3…2…1…"
And they dropped, they went soaring threw the air, over the water and back up several times until they were brought back up for their second drop.
"Feeling sick yet?" Luke asked.
"Scrambled eggs weren't the best thing to have before doing this."
Luke gave her hand a quick squeeze.
"You know we can stop if you want, we don't have to go threw with this."
"Hello, STYX." Lorelai said and the ride fell once more.
She screamed at the top of her lungs and felt the familiar feeling of her stomach rising.
"One more to go," Luke said once they reached the top.
"It doesn't look as bad from down there I bet"
"Here we go, again" Luke added and the ride dropped.
"Congratulations, here are your tickets, a map to the concert area, and an invitation for a free dinner at The Beaver Brothers Lakeside Café, enjoy." The DJ said handing Luke and Lorelai all the stuff they won, plus two free shirts and two baseball caps with the stations logo on them.
Luke and Lorelai thanked them and then started walking towards the trailer for lunch.
"I FINALLY won a radio station contest… my life is complete!" Lorelai cooed.
"Glad you can finally check that off your list," Luke said.
"Okay so what's the game plan here?"
"Game plan for what?" Luke asked.
"The rest of our day"
"Oh, right, trailer for lunch, back to the park for water rides, then we'll get changed and go to dinner, the concert, then back to the trailer"
"Fabtabulous" Lorelai said nodding. "What's for lunch?"
"What do you want?" Luke asked.
"A burger?"
"You had a burger yesterday"
"I know"
"Don't you want something else for today?"
"No, I want a burger…" Lorelai said
"But… oh fine" Luke caved.
Lorelai reached down and held Luke's hand and Luke stiffened.
"Luke remember… they don't know you"
Luke sighed and relaxed a bit.
Once Lorelai and Luke were done eating, Luke was cleaning up and Lorelai was on the phone with Rory.
"Seriously, all Luke had to do was run around the park a couple times and then we got the tickets!" Lorelai said. She already told Rory about her and Luke getting together and Rory was really happy.
"Aw geeze" Luke mumbled from the sink.
"Did you get pictures?"
"Why, you want pictures of Luke running around naked?" Lorelai asked.
"No, but there are rather impressive black mail opportunities associated with getting pictures of Luke running around naked in front of people" Rory joked.
"Well, if you're trying to get into the 'Black mail Luke' business, I might have some goods"
"Really?" Rory asked.
"After Luke cleans up we're going to the water park, which means Luke's going to be in a bathing suit"
"I don't know if the crowds will be as happy if Luke is wearing clothes… not as black mailing as naked Luke."
"Okay, we really have to stop talking about naked Luke" Lorelai said.
"Agreed" Luke said over hearing Lorelai, Lorelai stuck her tongue at him.
"Anyways, I've been on like four roller coasters since I've been here!"
"You… on a roller coaster? How'd that happen?" Rory asked surprised.
"Luke held my hand."
"Aw, he's such a softy" Rory laughed.
"I know, okay, Luke's giving me the death glare so I'm going to go, we're going to the water park"
"Okay, see you tomorrow Mom"
"Bye Kiddo" Lorelai said and hung up her cell phone.
"Okay I'm going to get changed… finish up, I need someone to put sunscreen on me" Lorelai said and raised her eyebrows. Luke blushed and rolled his eyes.
About ten minutes later Lorelai came out of the small bathroom wearing a two-piece, baby blue, bikini. Luke almost dropped the glass of water he had in his hand when he saw her.
"You like?" Lorelai asked and did a little spin.
"Mhm" Luke said still eying her. "You look… beautiful"
Lorelai blushed and walked over to Luke, he put his arm around her.
"Thanks" She smiled and kissed him quickly on the lips.
"You're turn"
"Huh?" Luke asked.
"Your turn to get changed." Lorelai said.
"Oh, right, okay, I'll be right back" He said and grabbed his towel and bathing suit.
When Luke came out of the bathroom five minutes later he was wearing a blue bathing suit and a black muscle shirt, but still kept the baseball cap on. Lorelai was facing the wall drinking out of a bottle of water so Luke walked up behind her and raped his arms around her stomach. She jumped a bit and then turned, while in his arms, to look at Luke.
When she saw his muscle top, revealing he muscles she dropped the water bottle, which was still opened, to the ground, water slashed up on her legs causing her to shiver.
Luke, amused with her reaction began to mock her, "How do I look?"
"Um… good, you know… the shirt, and the short thing… um," She looked at him and then at his muscles, "Do you work out?"
"Occasionally," Luke said still smirking.
"Stop, I just… have never seen you so, not dressed before… I mean," She shock her head, "With so few layers."
"I can say the same thing about you," Luke laughed and kissed her quickly.
He released her from his grip and picked up a towel and began cleaning up the mess.
Lorelai grabbed the elastic from her wrist and tied her hair back and then started focusing on Luke's muscles flexing as he cleaned up the water.
Sensing she was watching him he turned around.
"What?" He asked.
"You should really avoid flannel… and any shirt that has more material than that shirt you're wearing now."
Luke's face reddened and he went back to cleaning up but mumbled quickly, "Same to you"
Lorelai smiled and picked up her shorts and a white t-shirt to put over her bathing suit.
"Let's hit the rides," Lorelai said as they left the trailer.
Sorry if the radio contest seamed random, and impossible, but they actually do it, my cousin and I entered one, but the people in front of us beat us.
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