Once again… the reviews made my day! Thanks a lot everyone! Glad to know you like reading it, it makes me writing it more enjoyable!
LOLABELLE26 – Hey, I'm not a normal person either, we could totally make a club! Ha, Review-age (that's cute) was great, thanks… you know what? No one would have to bribe me to get Luke running around Six Flags naked, I would make him do it voluntarily… but it would be kind of random… maybe another fan fiction for another time… Thanks for the review, keep them up please!
CYWEN69 – I agree now that I re-read the kiss… I was trying to build up to it using the whole story, like from the first chapter they were looking at each other and holding hands on the ride, but you're right. Thanks for the review! Keep them up please!
VAKAN – Ha, thanks a lot! I love fan fictions where they're together, keep up the reviews please!
JAVAJUNKIMI – Thanks a lot… hope it doesn't lose its awesome-ness. Continue to review please.
Anyways, thanks everyone, and I'm writing this at lunch on Monday, February 12, so it should be posted tonight!
"You wanna go on that ride?" Luke asked pointing towards a giant yellow and blue funnel-like ride.
"Yeah, it just opened, it's called Tornado… it looks totally awesome. Plus the lines are short because everyone's eating lunch."
"Okay, let's leave our stuff on this chair and go line up," Lorelai said as she dropped her tank top and shorts on a white beach chair.
"We can't just leave our stuff here, it's not safe"
"It's just our clothes, no ones going to take our clothes," Lorelai said putting her flip-flops on the chair as well.
"What if they take our shoes?"
"Then we'll just have to walk back to the trailer with no shoes."
"Lorelai," Luke warned.
"Luke leave your stuff here, we can watch the chair from the line and if anyone goes near our stuff we can attack them"
"Fine" Luke said and dropped his shirt and sandals on the chair.
"We're next," Lorelai said clapping. Luke was holding the blow-up tube they were going to sit on as he watched the people in front of them go.
They went down a curved tube and then shot out in a giant funnel where they went from one end to the other back and forth until they came out on the other side.
"Next please" The person said and Luke put the tube in the water.
He sat down first and Lorelai sat next to him, instead of holding her handle, she held Luke's hand.
Luke got used to it, every ride they went on Lorelai held his hand, it was kind of weird, but he wasn't complaining.
"Ready Freddy?" Lorelai asked as the person in charge began to push them.
"Do I have a choice?" Luke asked looking into the black tube.
"No not really"
And they were off, in the tube there was a drop that made the tube bounce making Luke almost fall out. Then they saw the light and shot out of the tube into the open funnel where they went almost upside down on one side and then dropped to the other side.
Of course, normally Lorelai would be screaming her lungs out while going down a drop like that, but she couldn't help but look at Luke and how his muscles flexed each time the dropped and how he would tense as the water hit his body.
As they came out the opening at the other side Lorelai was getting out of the tube when a wave came and knocked her out. She went under water temporarily and scuffed her knee on the ground, but Luke pulled her up quickly.
"You alright?" Luke asked concerned.
"Yeah… just me being my usual klutz-self." Lorelai laughed nervously and they returned their tube to the pile.
"So what ride do you wanna hit next?" Luke asked.
"Um doesn't matter," Lorelai said and glanced down at her knee. There was a little bit of blood, which almost made Lorelai gag, and the feeling of the water running into the cut wasn't helping much.
A kid in the line they were walking next to started to freak out.
"Mommy the ride hurt that lady, the ride hurt that lady!" He said he was probably no older than six or seven.
"What where?" The mom asked and the boy pointed towards Lorelai.
"Oh this, no, I had this before," Lorelai said, "The band aid just fell off in the ride"
The boy looked reassured and smiled.
"When did you cut your knee?" Luke asked.
"Just now"
"What? On the ride? Is that why you were so quiet?" Luke demanded.
"No, after the ride I just scuffed my knee, no biggy, I'll slap a band-aid on it and I'll be fine"
"They should put something soft on the ground to prevent that from happening"
"Luke seriously, I'm fine."
"Are you sure?" Luke asked as they reached their beach chairs.
"Yes, I'm sure… but it's cute you're so worried."
Luke shook his head and looked around. "I'll go get a band-aid from the life guard, I'll be right back."
"Okie dokie." Lorelai said and sat on the chair, re-applying her sunscreen.
When Luke came back about five minutes later he had a bottle of water, a band-aid and a small container in his hand with the words Dippin Dots on the side of it.
"What's all this?" Lorelai asked.
"Water to wash of your cut, band-aids are a given, and you said you love Dippin Dots… so here you go." He said and handed her the container and a spoon.
"You are my hero… did you know that?"
"Well I try, plus, if you're eating the dippin dots so you wont be paying attention to the water pouring down your leg"
Luke said and smiled. He opened the bottle and poured some water down her leg causing her to squirm a bit and try and concentrate on the dippin dots.
He put on the band-aid, "There you go"
"You want some?" Lorelai asked holding out a spoon full of little balls of ice cream.
"Not really, I brought an apple." He unrolled his towel and pulled an apple out.
"You brought an apple to an amusement park?"
"Yeah, so what?" Luke asked.
"Because you brought an apple to an amusement park… that's just wrong"
"Right, and I'd rather be like you and Rory who only at food from the stands a whole day and then threw up and were sick the following day"
"Hey, that was fun," Lorelai defended.
"Having me clean up your puke when you threw up in the diner was really fun," Luke said sarcastically.
"Okay can we stop talking about puke? It's totally bringing down the whole Dippin Dots experience."
"My pleasure." Luke said and looked towards the other water slides. "What ride next?"
"I don't know… what about those ones?" She pointed at a four different tubes you went threw on your raft.
"Sure"
"Have I mentioned this is the best vacation I have EVER been on?"
"Not yet… but I agree"
Lorelai and Luke smiled shyly and Lorelai looked down at her empty container.
"Okay, let's hit the road" She said and they headed for the other water rides.
NOTE: TORNADO wasn't built until 2004, and I don't know if the dates would match up, but it was SUCH a cool ride so I had to add it in!
QUESTION: You know those things that you sit in when you go on a water ride… are they called rafts, or tubes… or what? I totally blanked and I couldn't remember… ARG. Anyone know?
ANOTHER NOTE: I know it was really short, but I wanted to get this park out of the way so the next chapter is going to be Luke and Lorelai at the restaurant/concert… I'm planning on it being a very romantic chapter… anyways, something to look forward to,
Sorry if the afternoon was totally cut in half, and I left out them going on the water rides, but it had NO plot line and it would have been extremely boring (like math class boring), so I apologize.
Next chapter will be up as soon as I can post it… I'm going to spend a little extra time on it making it really good… so you might have to wait, but not as long as you had to wait for the last three chapters.
You know what to do, review!!
MEGGAN.