I realized, I DON'T NEED TO MAKE SENSE WHEN IT COMES TO DEALING WITH THE MIND. Just like Ergo Proxy. Didn't understand a thing.
This is the last chapter, it's going to be open-ended. I'm sorry to everyone who was reading. I'll just do a quick summary of everything at the end. I look back at this fanfic and I just wanna…barf. It was my first but sadly, I don't think it was that great.
- - - - - - - - - Hospital 11:13 A.M.
L had his head in a hand, quietly strumming his fingers across the corner table in the waiting area. Honestly, L only wanted to question Raito. "But since he's gone now, there's no point for me to stay here." Everyone was worried, but L knew better. Raito wasn't the kind of person to leap before they looked. Out of the group sitting in the waiting area, Misa seemed the most…panicked.
"Miss! Have you seen him?! He's my boyfriend! He was here, Misa knows it!" Misa impatiently dangled a picture in front of a nurse.
The nurse nervously inched away and shook her head. "N-no…I haven't…" Misa's face fell and she ran off to find another nurse to harass.
Sayu was pretty depressed too. "Ryuuzaki, do you think Raito's okay?" She sighed.
L put a thumb to his lips. "Yes, Raito-kun should be okay. He's not one to carelessly run away."
"What do you think? About the Kira case…why…are you going so far to arrest Kira? He's killing criminals, isn't that a good thing?" She didn't look at him, she looked like she was daydreaming.
"Justice, that's why. The executions of criminals should be left to the law. What Kira is doing…is murder."
Sayu ran a hand through her hair. "Yeah, you're right." There was a moment of silence; even the busy hospital seemed quiet for a moment. Then Sayu spoke up.
"Do you really think Raito is Kira?"
L wondered whether he should tell her or not. He decided he would act upon the opinion of the argument in his head.
"What are you doing? You can't tell his sister this, it'll crush her."
"I'm supposed to keep emotion out of this. I have to tell her, it's her right to know."
"She's depressed; Shouldn't the feelings of others come before business?"
"…Stop…I'm going to tell her, besides her father already knows, what harm will ensue if Sayu knows too?"
"Sayu, I…don't want to think Raito-kun is Kira, but he's the only lead we have."
"I see…" She sighed. "Well, where do you think he went?"
"I don't know." Sayu opened her mouth to say something but was stopped by Misa. She skidded in yelling and waving.
"A NURSE! SHE KNOWS! SHE KNOWS! MISAMISA IS SO HAPPY!!" Sayu jumped almost a foot in the air. L frowned. "Now what does she want?"
"Misa, slow down and tell us what you know."
Misa took a deep breath. "Misa asked a nurse! She said that Raito left an hour ago. Misa is relieved! Misa thought Raito was kidnapped!"
Only she spoke so fast that it sounded kind of like: "MisaaskedanurseandshesaidthatRaito-kunalreadyleftanhourago, ohMisaissorelieved! Raito-kuncouldhavebeenkidnapped!"
Sayu scoffed. "Who'd want to kidnap Raito?"
"Raito's whereabouts are painfully obvious, as always. I know more then you think, Yagami Raito."
- - - - - - - - - Yagami House 11:13 A.M.
"Uh-oh." Raito was starting to lose consciousness again. His thoughts were wavering; he couldn't think straight. His power was eluding him.
"Don't make me go back there…" Raito was out of options, his vision was starting to fade. He bit his fingers open hoping the pain would bring him back. With tired eyes, he watched his blood seep into the boards next to his desk.
Ratio's breathing slowed incredibly. Then he remembered something that Ryuk had told him a long time ago. Something about people possessed by death gods are embraced by misfortune.
"Would I believe it?" He passed out as the sound of sirens blared outside his window.
I
actually finished my first story. I've never finished anything. No
motivation. This is going down in my journal. –Scrambles off
You can't imagine how many times I revised this to make it even near "okay".
