Hey guys,
As I reread this story, I realize that it really needs help. Many of the reviews make a valid point….I need more to the story, and more background. Seeing that I lost the draft of this, im not sure whether I can correct it, so, I'm going to try again, with a different plot line.
Thanks to all of you with your comments…some were harsh…but you made me see reason!
Hopefully now, I can have a steady writing schedule, if this new story is any better.
Thanks!
Little Marauder
