It's me again! sorry if it was a long wait, but ive been looking 4 new ideas.

(My bro used the name cannon, which i used)

BTB: for a certain SNL fan, grublings are pretty much evolved sheargrubs.

As my friends left the hill, out of nowhere came the cannon.

The cannon reared up as it saw the pikmin. It had been looking for food, and then it saw the min going toward it. Being defensive, it only wanted to be left alone. Thinking it was being attacked, it sucked in air and let out a boulder. If it was an adult, then it would have been smarter and waited for the pikmin to get out into the open, but it fired any way. Lucky for the pikmin, they were partially behind a wall, and were able to take cover. The rock exploded, causing fragments to fall among the team. Some were hit, but weren't wounded to bad. One pikmin (a blue) was hit, and the sprout snapped. He would live, unless he didn't get helpsoon. Murdoc ran over and gave orders to heal my friends. As the science clan (orange and grey) sent some healers over, Murdoc called some warriors to him. Luckily, I was chosen. Me and my battle brothers rushed in line. He ran around the cannon, which was still in a craze. It didn't notice us. He started throwing us onto it. The green pikmin were using their needle heads very wisely, hitting in the points were our flowers or buds or leaves coudn't penetrate. It was working.

Unfortunately, as the cannon thrashed about, i was knocked off...

Right in front of the opening

The boulder that followed hit me . I was crushed underneath, still clinging to life;if yet barely. Immediately, a brave grey pikmin came out of safety and carried me out. He was almost killed in the attempt. A boulder, a last boulder, almost hit him. But his clawed foot was crushed, and as he cried out, and his lifeblood washed the ground, he still carried me.

That was the part when i fell asleep...

My starting stories are short, but later they will be longer. I will also stop taking ideas from my bro, as i used his becuz im bored.

srry. Soon they will be longer. R&R plz. need idea. ty