Our Lives In Rhyme

by StarlightPhoenix

DISCONTINUED Hilary sets the Bladebreakers a poetry challenge, realizing they're not really getting to know each other. She sees this as a pain, as it's affecting their teamwork. So, they agree to her challenge. Read to find some funnydepressing poetry.

2. Entry 2 Max to Kai

Thanks to everyone who reviewed:

EagleFox – Thanks, it means so much to have a great first review! Erm, I wasn't quite sure what to think of the poem when I wrote it, but hey at least you liked it!

My great pal CyborgRockStar – Yay! That's all I can say! Thank you sooo much! Your reviews make me happy too! So have a pocky! You deserve one! (Hey, so does everyone else who reviewed!) Okay, you have some more! In case you can't tell, I'm HYPER!

BetrayedByDarkness – Sad? At last! One of my poems turned out RIGHT! Wahey! Thank you so much!

Kitsune – Erm, go hyperness! Whee! Thanks!

DM666 – Man, you're so much like CRS! I know you're mates too, so that's probably one reason. Thanks, your review made me laugh. (And I stay up to ridiculous hours too.)

Kuro1107 – Thanks! I will!

Loveyaray – Wow. I never actually thought of myself as a poet, let alone great. Thanks!

Entry Two – Max to Kai

Reading Kai's previous entry It makes you wonder, really, how cruel life is. I mean, Kai's the strongest out of all of us, and it made him feel like this. What would happen to us then?

I wish Kai would tell us more about himself. Maybe then we'd be able to help. But I know we will be able to soon. After all, he wrote in here. That proves he wants to interact with us. And Kai's not all bad. He's just lonely, I can tell.

Well, here you go, Kai. I hope it makes you feel better.

Tough Lives Life can be cold

As we've all seen

And life drains us

As we've all been

But we must keep our heads high

Otherwise we'll all fail

These are tough lives

We can't just up and bail

You may feel it all gets too tough

Trust me, I've been there too

But I made it through

And so will you

Just keep a smile on your face

You're the strongest of us all

We all live tough lives

Just pick yourself up after the fall

Whether this has helped

That's up to you

But act on my advice and follow through

Things can't always go the way you wish

After all, it's a tough life

But we're here for you, at home and in the dish

Go on, Kai! You can do it, my son!

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