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Potter has gone Pink?
There have been recent sightings of Harry Potter and his friends (Hermione Granger and Ronald Weasley) roaming around Diagon Alley with pink hair! Yes, you heard right! Pink hair! Perhaps they have done so to feel more united? Whatever the reason, lots of people have now dyed their hair Pink to resemble the trio! 12 year old, FarenHetchly says " I dyed my hair pink to show my support for the trio! They are my heroes and they deserve all the respect we can offer them!" Well, this strange event sure is something new to the Wizard world. If it's pink hair today, what will the heroes of our world do tomorrow?
Hermione was going to use an unforgivable on Fred then string him up by his toes till he turned 60. Ok well actually his toes would fall off after a couple years but still! This was his entire fault! After he left, she had been forced to leave the shop by walking out since there was no fireplace at the twin's shop! She was currently lying on the soft and worn bed of Percy. Since he had left the burrow Mrs. Weasley had though it would be all right to move her and Ginny up to his old room. Before her was spread about 10 different catalogs for weddings. She needed to choose what she wanted and fast. Hermione got up and went to her trunk and get out apiece of parchment and a quill to write down the things she liked from the magazines then go over them to decide what was best. Still she mused, she couldn't get over board with this wedding. It was foolish to waste so much money on a wedding when they could save up to buy a nice house or go on a vacation. A vacation on the beach would be nice, Fred could wear swimming trunks and she'd be able to see his chest, which was most likely muscular and defined...
No! She shook her head. She could not let herself even start to consider a romantic relationship with Fred! It would complicate everything! Sure, it would make the marriage easier but what about her life? Dealing with children would be hard enough! She didn't want to deal with the problems of a love life. Gods... Hermione put her head in between her face. And suddenly the reality of what was happening cached up with her and she just started crying. How evil could the Ministry be? How could they make her marry and have a child or possibly children! She couldn't take care of children; she couldn't even remember to water her plants! She would be put away in Askaban for starving her children to death! Suddenly a pop alerted her of someone apparating into her room.
"Sorry about me popping in here without knocking... But I wanted to make sure you haven't made any serious choices about this weddi ng without me."
" Fred looked at Hermione and noticed she was crying. He sat down on the bed shoving a couple of magazines onto the floor.
"Hermione? What's wrong?"
"I'm a bad mother... I'll starve my children... I'll go to Askaban! I don't want to get married! I'm only 16!"
Fred didn't know what to do with a crying woman. He ran his hand through his hair.
"Listen Hermione, I know I'm not the best candidate for this marriage, but I can promise you that I'll take care of you and the children. I'm sure you'll be a wonderful mother... I'm pretty sure we'll make it through this."
Hermione stuck her head up from her hands.
"Really?"
"Of course!"
"You must think I'm stupid crying so much over this...Wait here. I'll go clean up."
She got up and went to the bathroom. When she returned she found Fred flipping through the wedding magazines.
"I hope you don't choose the lime green theme."
She thought about which approach to the situation would be better. She could either be sad and weepy or act like nothing was wrong. She decided to go with the second choice.
"Oh honestly Fred I'm not that evil! Besides pink is a much better suited color for you!"
Fred looked at her horror struck.
"Please tell me that you've accepted my apology and won't try to force me to wear anything of that hideous color!"
Hermione shrugged and attempted to push Fred off her bed.
"Fredddd... Get off my bed. I still have to look at more catalogs!"
It seemed that it was pointless for her to try to keep on pushing Fred because he move probably about an inch from where he was before Hermione had tried to push him. Fred simply scooted over to the side of the bed and patted the left side.
"I'm plan on staying here. Now lay down! We've got planning to do!"
Hermione groaned, planning with Fred was like sticking a wand through her eye and wiggling it about.
"Now Hermione, I know my bedroom skills are fantastic but you should really wait until after the wedding before you start making these sort of noises. People might get ideas."
Hermione glared at him while blood rushed to her face.
"Fred, I just thought I'd get a head start faking these noises."
Fred put his arm over her shoulders.
"Well, my dear, you won't have to pretend like you were with the other useless boys. For, I am Fred Weasley the greatest person you could sleep with."
"More like biggestgit."
Ginny stood at the doorway.
"Mum wants you downstairs Hermione, she said something about teaching you how to cook with magic."
Hermione got up and left the now silent room. She passed Harry and Ron playing wizard chess in the living room whom both said a 'Hello' to her then turned back to their game. There in the kitchen awaited Mrs. Weasley whom would undoubtedly try to drop obvious hints about how they should plan their wedding. Hermione had a feeling that this was the end of her normal life.
After about 3 hours of cooking she had finally convinced Mrs.Weasley that going to the bathroom for 5 minutes would not destroy the food. Hermione looked at herself in the mirror. Fred had said some things that made her think he was attracted to her. Or he could have just been trying to be nice and make this own ordeal work better. Her wavy hair was tied back with an elastic band. Her brown eyes were a dark chocolate color. Her lips weren't bad either, they were slightly pouty and a light pink. Hermione never really paid much attention to he looks but right now she felt like a naive child standing next to a grown man.
She thought about her achievements in life. She had fought in the battle against Voldemort, she had the highest amount of OWLs you could get, she probably would do the same with her NEWTS and she was possibly the smartest person to come to Hogwarts. A knock interrupted her thoughts. Still somehow these things really didn't make her feel any older. How was it that Fred and George could act so childish yet still feel like adults? Did Fred see her as a woman or as a child? She remembered Fred smiling at her and making her feel butterflys in her stomach.
"Hermione it's time to eat."
Remus' voice came from the other side of the door.
"I'll be right there."
Hermione looked at herself in the mirror one last time and in that split second she saw a young woman of 16 staring right back at her.