Well, thank you all for clicking on this poem, first off. This is my third poem in this series, I hope you all like it. I actually like this poem myself, and that's rare because I usually am extremly self-consious about my writing. I'm not trying to sound like "Omg, this is awesome, I absolutely love it!", but I do like it. Johnny has a way of acting with his eyes, which is incredible. The emotions you can sense are amazing, you can really see another layer of a character (That Johnny plays, at least. I don't know any other actors like that) by looking into their eyes. I think that Johnny plays Sweeney with such emotion and understanding for him, he is such an amazing person and actor. :)
Finishing my long rant, thank you for the review, AngelofDarkness1605, it means a lot!
Poem #3
Such hurt in those deep brown eyes,
Such torment and anguish.
Yet those eyes,
Those melancholy eyes
Penetrate deep into your inner-most soul.
They push past your fronts and lies
And find you.
They hold the sadness of the world.
They hold a wounded soul
Begging, pleading for solace.
They also show anger and rage.
It radiates from deep within-
And under that rage hides a person.
A wounded and scared little boy
Who was driven to rage by a dissolute vulture.
He cannot trust anymore,
He cannot sense emotions.
He sits there,
Hiding from the dark,
But it has engulfed him.
It holds him in its sinister clutches,
Never letting go.
But he cannot feel it.
He cannot feel the demons inside of him.
But they're there,
They always are.
Lurking and plotting,
Controlling him.
He's unable to stop them,
He never will.
He is condemned to this fate.
The only way you can tell he's real
Is behind those deep brown eyes.
They call out for help,
Pleading for someone to help him
Ease his anguish
Anyone…
Thank you all for reading this, it means a lot to me! But then again, how will i know if you really read it? By reviewing, of course! I could always check how many people clicked on this, but you never know who really read it. The button is right there, and I'd appreciate it if you used it. :) If you did happen to like this, there are many more on the way!