Hello all, and thank you for choosing this- out of the hundreds of stories- to read. For that I thank you. :) Now, you just have to read it. People have said this is my darkest poem yet, but I'll leave that up to you, my wonderful readers, to decide.
Thank you all for reviewing, it means the world to me! (AngelofDarkness1605, BroadwayMasquerade, Duchess Norrington, and Technomad)
Poem #6
In darkness you dwell,
In grief you remain.
You live a nightmare,
Your worst dreams coming true each day.
Can no one help you
Ease your sorrow?
This path you follow,
You couldn't choose,
It was chosen for you by the Devil -
The Devil in human form.
This darkness inside of you
Never leaves,
Eating away at your soul
More and more
As time goes by.
Months,
Days,
Years,
Never ceasing.
With every breath you take,
You take in demons.
Demons that envelop you –
And you don't notice.
Now that you have read my poem, you may notice that it doesn't have a proper ending. I'll try to work on it, but until then, this is how my poem will end. I originally had a few more lines, but they didn't work out at all, so this is what I reduced it to, and I think that it works - in a sense. So, please tell me your opinions on it (Do you know how to do that? Look at the button below this...see it? Click on it, type out a sentence or two, and hit Submit Review. About a two second process, can you handle it? lol!) Anyway, sorry if I sound pushy, but I'd like a review or two telling me what you think. Thanks for reading, more to come!