Chapter one
"GIVE IT BACK!!!!" Mysticshine yelled at her apprentice.
"You have to catch me first!" Frostpaw yelled back.
Mysticshine sighed. She had one of the most disrespectful apprentices in Thunderclan.
She looked at her best friend Icewish, and her apprentice who was sitting neatly, ready to go. She growled to herself. She sometimes even tried threats, brides and other unimaginable things but Frostpaw wouldn't listen.
"Frostpaw, get back here. No…no…NO!!!!!! UHHGGG!!!!!"
Icewish and her apprentice were laughing under breath at a poor Mysticshine trying to get her apprentice paw attention.
"Mistpaw, will you get Frostpaw? I feel we should cut Mysticshine some slack! She's been trying to get Frostpaw to pay attention for almost a moon!" Icewish added with a smile,
"You'll ready for an assessment soon!"
"Oh sure Icewish, thank you!"
Icewish smiled, looking at her tired friend.
"THANK YOU! MAY STARCLAN CLEAN YOUR NEST FOR THE NEXT MOON!"
Icewish wondered how she got so lucky.
"Wanna go on Dawn patrol, I'm leading it."
"Sure…"
They walked to their dens, making sure tomorrow they would have a good rest for dawn patrol, until…
"JUST DON"T TALK TO ME!!!!!!!!!"
"Wait!" Mistpaw shouted, chasing a furious Frostpaw.
As Mistpaw was chasing her, she slid in the leaf-bare slopes, and fell right in the middle of a Thunderpath. Icewish was startled, she let out a faint mew of distress as she saw Frostpaw racing blindly through the twoleg monsters to get to Mistpaw.
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Mistpaw's POV:
The foul scent of the thunderpath made mistpaw wrinkle her nose in disgust. She let out a shriek of alarm as she saw a huge monster charging at her, mistpaw desperately tried to hurry back to the safety of the forest but she was frozen place. Her sapphire eyes widened in fear as the monster got nearer and nearer, charging at her with no intension to stop. Mistpaw wailed for help, but all that came out was a dry croak. The monster was barely a fox-length away from mistpaw now, she squeezed her eyes shut, praying silently that she wouldn't be joining starclan at such a young age. Then the pain came, it shot through mistpaw's body almost as fast as lightning, it burned through all her muscles and bones, making mistpaw screech in agony. She could hear frostpaw's anxious voice from the other side of the thunderpath, rushing to get to mistpaw, who tried to open her eyes. Everything was so blurry to her, the monsters flew through the thunderpath carelessly, without a second glance at the nearly-dead she-cat laying motionlessly on the side of the path. It was an effort to mistpaw to keep breathing, every shallow breath possiblely being her last, it seemed like ages when Frostpaw finally reached mistpaw's side, her pretty brown eyes stretched wide in horror and dismay.
"Mistpaw…MISTPAW!!" Frostpaw wailed helplessly as Mistpaw closed her eyes, surrendering to the darkness that enveloped her.
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No one's pov:
"MISTPAW!!!" Frostpaw's yowl of agony made Icewish's heart pound faster, her golden paws were a blur as she raced to Frostpaw's side pushing her back to see mistpaw's limp body.
They scooped up the beautiful golden tabby, and let her towards the medicine cat den.
Frostpaw was scratching her paws with one another.
"Frostpaw, what happened?" Mysticshine led the worried apprentice outside of the medicine den.
"Well…It's just that I fell when Mistpaw taught me a new game that I didn't understand. When I tried, I fell. And all the other apprentices started laughing."
Mysticshine felt her pelt blazing.
"You nearly killed this apprentice because of your careless mistake?"
"But I-"
"NO! No more excuses Frostpaw! I have been way too soft on you. If you ever want to become a warrior, then DO NOT fool around! Go check the elder's pelts for ticks. DO IT NOW!"
Mysticshine turned around. She looked in the elders den. Her nose tickled with the scent of mouse bile. Still, she stayed. Frostpaw must learn responsibility. Until then, no more training.