My husband? NO! My biggest enemy!!
I don't own Inuyasha and sorry for mistakes.
Hmm... Some hungarian words. /Hungary isn't on the end of the Earth, my little country is in Europe and we don't dance in hawaii-like skirts or travel on horses or something like that...)
Jerk – Bunkó („ó" like double „o") Idiot – Idióta (what a difference) Bastard – Szemét or Barom. („sz" like „s" and „é" like ... uhh... maybe „a") ^_~ (I usually use japanese words too when I am angry. If you want more words just tell me.)
!!@!!@!!@!!@!!@!!@ Chapter 14. „Bye, loneliness! – the first couple" !!@!!@!!@!!@!!@!!@
Miroku stared up at the woman. She smiled down at him coldly. Miroku tried once more to move but he couldn't. He cleched his teeth when the woman stepped into the tube and sat down near him. He looked at her with disguist in his eyes.
She laughed slightly and watched him with great amusement. „What's the matter? Didn't you ask me to bear your child?" with that she slipped closer to him and wrapped her arms around his neck. Miroku tried to back away with all of his strengh but something didn't allow him to move.
She kissed him on the lips and Miroku felt the cold filled his body, his heart. She wasn't an ordinary human. She continued kissing him on the neck while her hands slipped down to his [you little perverts, don't drool] chest.
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Sango stepped under the shower but jumped out in an instant as the ice-cold water touched her skin. She wrapped a towel around her body and prepared to ran toward to the other bathroom. She took a deep breath and jumped out of the bathroom, ready to kick the pervert if he would try something but... Miroku was nowhere in the sight.
She turned around with narrowed eyes. „Where did you hide, pervert?" she asked in a dark tone but didn't got any reply. Suddenly she frozed and then shivered. 'Could it be... a youkai?!' she had a horrible feeling. 'If Miroku...' she ran toward her luggage and took on a pair of jeans with a white T-shirt. She ran out of the room with a huge boomerang in her hand.
She still had the terrible feeling but even stronger with every wasted minute. She ran into the first room and frozed... She stared at Miroku with a woman in his arms...
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Miroku suddenly felt he could move again. He tried to stand up but the woman didn't let him. In the corner of his eyes he looked someone ran into the room. He turned his head toward the door and his glance met with Sango's. She stood there with a hurt expression on her face and stared at him with disbelief. Her shoulders slightly shaked and a sad smile appeared on her face.
„Miroku, I knew your lust will cause some trouble sometime." Her face was sad and hurt but there was no emotion in her voice. Miroku stared at her, he didn't know what to say. Her eyes were what killed him. Her usually cheerful and strong self was weak and sad now.
'Come on idiot, say something or you will lose her!!' his mind yelled at him. He just lovered his head, he couldn't said anything. He didn't know what to say. Before he could had a change,the woman jumped up from his arms and stepped in front of Sango.
„Who are you to interrupt?!" she hissed like a snake. Sango glared at her. Her look could kill itself.
„I didn't interrup, I just came to exterminate the evil youkai. You are the one, don't you?" Her voice was like the ice.
„A demon exterminator, huh? I will kill you and then I will absorb that man." The demon whispered but Sango could hear her very well. „What a tragic. You love him, don't you? In that case I think I will let you live until I done with him." She said and laughed cruelly and with a simple jump she pinned Sango to the wall. Her grip on Sango's throat tightened and her smile grew wider. Her face was beautiful but now it was just a grinning mask what covered her real, sneak-like face.
Sango felt dizzy and the world went black.. 'Do I love Miroku? ... I think I do...'
The youkai woman grinned and dropped her to the ground. She was about to turn back to her pray when something hit her back. She felt like she would explode and fell onto her knees with a silent scream on her lips.
Miroku stepped over the dead youkai's ashes and wrapped a towel around his waist before kneeled down beside Sango and pulled her into a tight embrace. He could hear her heart-beat. It was still strong. 'Thanks god, she just fainted.'
**~**~**~**~**~**~**~**~**~**~** Sango opened her eyes and stared into a a pair of violet ones. She pushed him away as she realized it was Miroku. Sango turned away and she was about to leave the room when she felt his hands grabbed her arm. She glared at him over her shoulders but this wasn't the usually 'don't-dar-to-touch-me' glare.
„Leave me alone Miroku." She narrowed her eyes and looked at him angrily. „If you want someone in your bed then go and pick up soemone on the street. But don't dare to bring her into my room."
Miroku looked at her but instead of let her go he pulled her into a tight embrace. Sango didn't try to free herself but she was still cold. „Sango, we have to talk." He said a pulled back to look into her eyes.
„Miroku, you don't have to explain. You are not my boyfriend and I—„ Sango blushed as he silenced her with his lips pressed against hers in a soft kiss. Her eyes widened and turned her head away. Miroku looked down at her. „Miroku, please let me go. I won't be your next . I am not stupid."
„Yes you are." Sango looked up at him with narrowed eyes but his face was serious. „I don't know how to prove it Sango, I really don't. I want you to believe me. I love you." She felt her heart stopped as the words left his lips. She stared at him with wide eyes. She didn't know if she wanted to laugh in joy and kiss him or oush him away and say him 'I don't believe you'.
„D—do you?" she asked quietly and turned her head away. She still didn't know what to think. She felt a hand under her chin and Miroku gently lifted her face so she was facing with him. His eyes told him he wasn't lying.
„Yes I do." He looked straight into her eyes. She felt like she would drown into his violet ocean. He leaned closer as he studied her face for any sign of rejection but there was no. She looked she lost in his eyes. He leaned even closer and kissed her softly.
Sango felt his lips against hers but didn't pushed him away. Instead she wrapped her arms around his neck and kissed him back ad deepened the kiss. When they finally parted to breath Miroku looked down at her with a strange smile.
„Can I take it as a 'Yes'?" he asked. Sango didn't want to notice the glint in his eyes and just nodded silently. „Good. Now, I am allowed to grope you as my girlfriend." Stated Miroku and reached out his hand but...
„No, you aren't" said Sango as she smacked his head with her giant boomerang and left him sleep on the floor while she walked back to their room.
[I LOVED WROTE IT!!]
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Kagome woke up. She felt something pressed against her back and some weight on her waist. She didn't care, she was too sleepy. She tried to sit up and that was the time when she finally realized what just pulled her back. She looked down and stared at the clawed hand what rested on the bed near her hip. She looked at the arm what wrapped tightly around her waist. 'Inuyasha!!!!'
She blushed even more as Inuyasha shifted behind her and she realized he was the one who pressed against her back. She felt her heart beated faster as his already tight grip around her tightened even more but didn't hurt her. She could feel his breath on her neck as he nuzzled into her hair. 'It felt really good... Thanks god, he can't read in my mind. His head would grew wider and he wouldn't be able to come through the door. Wait... Would it be that bad?' she giggled at her own thoughts.
She turned onto her other side so she faced with Inuyasha. 'He look so adorable and peaceful when he sleeping.' She smiled slightly and her glance travelled up to his ears. 'I want to touch them... They look so soft..." she raised her hand and touched his ear. It twitched and made Kagome giggle again. She caught his ear and started to rub it gently.
A loud purr escaped Inuyasha's throat. Kagome's eyes widened and stared at him with disbelief. She burst out laughing, totally forget about the sleeping Inuyasha. His eyes slowly opened and noticed the laughing Kagome... who was still in his arms. He almost grinned but her happiness was suspicious.
Kagome looked at him and almost jumped out her skin as her glance met with Inuyasha's. She looked into his eyes and without warning reached out both of her hands and started to rub his ears. Inuyasha wanted to push her hands away but ended up pulled her closer (wich made Kagome blush) and a purred happily. Kagome couldn't help but rolled over the bed and laughed. She wrapped her arms around herself and tried to control her laughter.
„What?!" Inuyasha asked but he knew very well what caused her laughter. 'Great. Another weapon in her hands... against me...'
„Inuyasha, you little kitten! I understand now why didn't you act like a dog." She laughed and jumped onto him to pet his ears.
„I am not... * purr * a kitten!!" he couldn't help, he must purred... Kagome rolled off of him and laughed heartily. Inuyasga growled and walked toward the bathroom. Kagome stopped and stared at him... he only wore boxer... Her eyes widened as she imagined his body pressed against hers... She blushed and looked down at herself and noticed she still wore his pijamas.
„I don't understand... Why didn't he wear my pijamas?" she burst out laughing again as she imagined him in her clothes. 'Inuyasha, the cross-dresser.' She laughed even louder. („Would you shut up, wench?) She suddenly stopped and an evil grin appeared on her face. 'I have to speak with Sango.'
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It is short but I hope you like it. I will update soon. I didn't update for a week because I hadn't got any ideas. But I now I know what to do. * evil grin *
Next chappie: Naraku, Kikyou and a bet.
I STILL DON'T KNOW WHAT SHOULD I DO WITH THAT DAMNED WOLF... GRRR...... (Mmiray you idiot, why you...)
Answers for reviews: (I will write it from now on)
Trinity:I like your fic! About Kouga, just pair him up with someone. How about Kikyo? *evil grin*
Nah, probably not, he's not that bad to be punished so hard, but on the other hand, he tried to take Kagome from dear Inuyasha... I WON'T FORGIVE HIM! GIVE HIM TO KYKIO I SAY! GWAHAHAHAHAHAH!
Oh yeah, one last thing, GIVE NARAKU HELL FOR ME! I HATE THAT GUY'S GUT! LET THE SHARKS EAT HIM OR SOMETHING! I will cheer for you all the way.
Mmiray: Hehheh... Good idea... :D Nut no, I think I will let the sharks eat Kikyou... poor kouga... He will be lonely!! * faked cry *
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Ceaseless Cloudy Days: wow, this story is PERFECT! Nearly every Inu-Yasha story I've read ALWAYS involves sex, and Kagome always loves Inu-Yasha to the point where it just seems obsessive...lol...and the grammar is a bit messed up, but that's pretty good for somebody...hungarian? Whatever. I'm loving it! Please continue!
Mmiry: Yeah... I know I am not perfect (Not perfect isn't the word)... But it's good to know you like my fanfic with the mistakes too... ^_^
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;): evil
Mmiry: yeah... I hope so
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animequeen06: I love the fic. That sunburn part was awesome!
Mmiray: This is my favourite chappi too. I had a lot of fun while I wrote it. * evil grin *
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animequeen06: I like this chapter! Is Naraku making another appearence in the next chapter? The suspense is killing me! Please update soon!
Mmiray: Sorry, I am late and there is no Naraku, but in the next chapter...
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Shin1: Yay! A good story! You gotta update please! Cuz... I really love your story!... it would help a lot if you can do a recheck on your grammar... but other than that... it would be FANTASTIC! Okay... ttyl.
~Shin Mmiry: Thank you very much, but I think I will just go on with my mistakes. At least I am hungarian ne? ^_^
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makeyourselfduo: i really, realy like it.
can i ask you something?
how do you say idiot in hungarian.
i love to insult mean people without them knowing, i use many handy japanese phrases daily.
but any way please up date soon or i might die of boredom, not many realy good fanfics anymore
~Rori
Mmiray: I couldn't write e-mail so read I wrote some hungarian insults under the title for you. ^_~
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Puppy-chan: WHY DID YOU MAKE INUYASHA KISS KIKYO! I KNOW HE THOUGHT IT WAS KAGOME BUT COME ON!
THAT WAS SUPPOSED TO BE INUYASHA KISSING KAGOME!
*SOB*SEE!? YOU HAPPY NOW?!?! YOU MADE ME CRY!
Mmiray: Don't cry! I hate her, I on't let her enjoy the life in my little world. ^_~ * smirk *
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karen (pierina@wildmail.com) : That was great I love the fighting scenes but I think you should start making them like each other. Either way it's up to you, though, like i said before it's really good and I hope you up date soon. Keep up the good work.
:)karen reyna
Mmiray: I will. This is why Naraku is in my fic. ^_~
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chrisy12: what should you do with kouga? hm i think you should feed him to the sharks! hehehe sorry i like him in the series but for some reason he annoys me in fanfics anyway wright more soon! ^_^
Mmiray: Don't worry, I don't know what to do with him. Hmm... Mybe if I avoid him the readers will forget about him...
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riah89: That was great and I cant wait for more and with the koga thing make inuyasha and kagome come closer together and then koga does something so kagome gets made at inuyasha and goes to koga or sumfin like that
Mmiray: I already have enough trouble with Naraku... --__--;
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That's all! Please review!!!! I will update soon, becuase I have plans but I will be glad if you would write me some ideas.
Other chapters: amusement park, under the moonlight, Kikyou and Naraku (maybe Kouga but I really don't know... --__--)
Pussza: Mmiray
(Pussza mean xxx ^_^)
I don't own Inuyasha and sorry for mistakes.
Hmm... Some hungarian words. /Hungary isn't on the end of the Earth, my little country is in Europe and we don't dance in hawaii-like skirts or travel on horses or something like that...)
Jerk – Bunkó („ó" like double „o") Idiot – Idióta (what a difference) Bastard – Szemét or Barom. („sz" like „s" and „é" like ... uhh... maybe „a") ^_~ (I usually use japanese words too when I am angry. If you want more words just tell me.)
!!@!!@!!@!!@!!@!!@ Chapter 14. „Bye, loneliness! – the first couple" !!@!!@!!@!!@!!@!!@
Miroku stared up at the woman. She smiled down at him coldly. Miroku tried once more to move but he couldn't. He cleched his teeth when the woman stepped into the tube and sat down near him. He looked at her with disguist in his eyes.
She laughed slightly and watched him with great amusement. „What's the matter? Didn't you ask me to bear your child?" with that she slipped closer to him and wrapped her arms around his neck. Miroku tried to back away with all of his strengh but something didn't allow him to move.
She kissed him on the lips and Miroku felt the cold filled his body, his heart. She wasn't an ordinary human. She continued kissing him on the neck while her hands slipped down to his [you little perverts, don't drool] chest.
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Sango stepped under the shower but jumped out in an instant as the ice-cold water touched her skin. She wrapped a towel around her body and prepared to ran toward to the other bathroom. She took a deep breath and jumped out of the bathroom, ready to kick the pervert if he would try something but... Miroku was nowhere in the sight.
She turned around with narrowed eyes. „Where did you hide, pervert?" she asked in a dark tone but didn't got any reply. Suddenly she frozed and then shivered. 'Could it be... a youkai?!' she had a horrible feeling. 'If Miroku...' she ran toward her luggage and took on a pair of jeans with a white T-shirt. She ran out of the room with a huge boomerang in her hand.
She still had the terrible feeling but even stronger with every wasted minute. She ran into the first room and frozed... She stared at Miroku with a woman in his arms...
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Miroku suddenly felt he could move again. He tried to stand up but the woman didn't let him. In the corner of his eyes he looked someone ran into the room. He turned his head toward the door and his glance met with Sango's. She stood there with a hurt expression on her face and stared at him with disbelief. Her shoulders slightly shaked and a sad smile appeared on her face.
„Miroku, I knew your lust will cause some trouble sometime." Her face was sad and hurt but there was no emotion in her voice. Miroku stared at her, he didn't know what to say. Her eyes were what killed him. Her usually cheerful and strong self was weak and sad now.
'Come on idiot, say something or you will lose her!!' his mind yelled at him. He just lovered his head, he couldn't said anything. He didn't know what to say. Before he could had a change,the woman jumped up from his arms and stepped in front of Sango.
„Who are you to interrupt?!" she hissed like a snake. Sango glared at her. Her look could kill itself.
„I didn't interrup, I just came to exterminate the evil youkai. You are the one, don't you?" Her voice was like the ice.
„A demon exterminator, huh? I will kill you and then I will absorb that man." The demon whispered but Sango could hear her very well. „What a tragic. You love him, don't you? In that case I think I will let you live until I done with him." She said and laughed cruelly and with a simple jump she pinned Sango to the wall. Her grip on Sango's throat tightened and her smile grew wider. Her face was beautiful but now it was just a grinning mask what covered her real, sneak-like face.
Sango felt dizzy and the world went black.. 'Do I love Miroku? ... I think I do...'
The youkai woman grinned and dropped her to the ground. She was about to turn back to her pray when something hit her back. She felt like she would explode and fell onto her knees with a silent scream on her lips.
Miroku stepped over the dead youkai's ashes and wrapped a towel around his waist before kneeled down beside Sango and pulled her into a tight embrace. He could hear her heart-beat. It was still strong. 'Thanks god, she just fainted.'
**~**~**~**~**~**~**~**~**~**~** Sango opened her eyes and stared into a a pair of violet ones. She pushed him away as she realized it was Miroku. Sango turned away and she was about to leave the room when she felt his hands grabbed her arm. She glared at him over her shoulders but this wasn't the usually 'don't-dar-to-touch-me' glare.
„Leave me alone Miroku." She narrowed her eyes and looked at him angrily. „If you want someone in your bed then go and pick up soemone on the street. But don't dare to bring her into my room."
Miroku looked at her but instead of let her go he pulled her into a tight embrace. Sango didn't try to free herself but she was still cold. „Sango, we have to talk." He said a pulled back to look into her eyes.
„Miroku, you don't have to explain. You are not my boyfriend and I—„ Sango blushed as he silenced her with his lips pressed against hers in a soft kiss. Her eyes widened and turned her head away. Miroku looked down at her. „Miroku, please let me go. I won't be your next . I am not stupid."
„Yes you are." Sango looked up at him with narrowed eyes but his face was serious. „I don't know how to prove it Sango, I really don't. I want you to believe me. I love you." She felt her heart stopped as the words left his lips. She stared at him with wide eyes. She didn't know if she wanted to laugh in joy and kiss him or oush him away and say him 'I don't believe you'.
„D—do you?" she asked quietly and turned her head away. She still didn't know what to think. She felt a hand under her chin and Miroku gently lifted her face so she was facing with him. His eyes told him he wasn't lying.
„Yes I do." He looked straight into her eyes. She felt like she would drown into his violet ocean. He leaned closer as he studied her face for any sign of rejection but there was no. She looked she lost in his eyes. He leaned even closer and kissed her softly.
Sango felt his lips against hers but didn't pushed him away. Instead she wrapped her arms around his neck and kissed him back ad deepened the kiss. When they finally parted to breath Miroku looked down at her with a strange smile.
„Can I take it as a 'Yes'?" he asked. Sango didn't want to notice the glint in his eyes and just nodded silently. „Good. Now, I am allowed to grope you as my girlfriend." Stated Miroku and reached out his hand but...
„No, you aren't" said Sango as she smacked his head with her giant boomerang and left him sleep on the floor while she walked back to their room.
[I LOVED WROTE IT!!]
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Kagome woke up. She felt something pressed against her back and some weight on her waist. She didn't care, she was too sleepy. She tried to sit up and that was the time when she finally realized what just pulled her back. She looked down and stared at the clawed hand what rested on the bed near her hip. She looked at the arm what wrapped tightly around her waist. 'Inuyasha!!!!'
She blushed even more as Inuyasha shifted behind her and she realized he was the one who pressed against her back. She felt her heart beated faster as his already tight grip around her tightened even more but didn't hurt her. She could feel his breath on her neck as he nuzzled into her hair. 'It felt really good... Thanks god, he can't read in my mind. His head would grew wider and he wouldn't be able to come through the door. Wait... Would it be that bad?' she giggled at her own thoughts.
She turned onto her other side so she faced with Inuyasha. 'He look so adorable and peaceful when he sleeping.' She smiled slightly and her glance travelled up to his ears. 'I want to touch them... They look so soft..." she raised her hand and touched his ear. It twitched and made Kagome giggle again. She caught his ear and started to rub it gently.
A loud purr escaped Inuyasha's throat. Kagome's eyes widened and stared at him with disbelief. She burst out laughing, totally forget about the sleeping Inuyasha. His eyes slowly opened and noticed the laughing Kagome... who was still in his arms. He almost grinned but her happiness was suspicious.
Kagome looked at him and almost jumped out her skin as her glance met with Inuyasha's. She looked into his eyes and without warning reached out both of her hands and started to rub his ears. Inuyasha wanted to push her hands away but ended up pulled her closer (wich made Kagome blush) and a purred happily. Kagome couldn't help but rolled over the bed and laughed. She wrapped her arms around herself and tried to control her laughter.
„What?!" Inuyasha asked but he knew very well what caused her laughter. 'Great. Another weapon in her hands... against me...'
„Inuyasha, you little kitten! I understand now why didn't you act like a dog." She laughed and jumped onto him to pet his ears.
„I am not... * purr * a kitten!!" he couldn't help, he must purred... Kagome rolled off of him and laughed heartily. Inuyasga growled and walked toward the bathroom. Kagome stopped and stared at him... he only wore boxer... Her eyes widened as she imagined his body pressed against hers... She blushed and looked down at herself and noticed she still wore his pijamas.
„I don't understand... Why didn't he wear my pijamas?" she burst out laughing again as she imagined him in her clothes. 'Inuyasha, the cross-dresser.' She laughed even louder. („Would you shut up, wench?) She suddenly stopped and an evil grin appeared on her face. 'I have to speak with Sango.'
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It is short but I hope you like it. I will update soon. I didn't update for a week because I hadn't got any ideas. But I now I know what to do. * evil grin *
Next chappie: Naraku, Kikyou and a bet.
I STILL DON'T KNOW WHAT SHOULD I DO WITH THAT DAMNED WOLF... GRRR...... (Mmiray you idiot, why you...)
Answers for reviews: (I will write it from now on)
Trinity:I like your fic! About Kouga, just pair him up with someone. How about Kikyo? *evil grin*
Nah, probably not, he's not that bad to be punished so hard, but on the other hand, he tried to take Kagome from dear Inuyasha... I WON'T FORGIVE HIM! GIVE HIM TO KYKIO I SAY! GWAHAHAHAHAHAH!
Oh yeah, one last thing, GIVE NARAKU HELL FOR ME! I HATE THAT GUY'S GUT! LET THE SHARKS EAT HIM OR SOMETHING! I will cheer for you all the way.
Mmiray: Hehheh... Good idea... :D Nut no, I think I will let the sharks eat Kikyou... poor kouga... He will be lonely!! * faked cry *
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Ceaseless Cloudy Days: wow, this story is PERFECT! Nearly every Inu-Yasha story I've read ALWAYS involves sex, and Kagome always loves Inu-Yasha to the point where it just seems obsessive...lol...and the grammar is a bit messed up, but that's pretty good for somebody...hungarian? Whatever. I'm loving it! Please continue!
Mmiry: Yeah... I know I am not perfect (Not perfect isn't the word)... But it's good to know you like my fanfic with the mistakes too... ^_^
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;): evil
Mmiry: yeah... I hope so
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animequeen06: I love the fic. That sunburn part was awesome!
Mmiray: This is my favourite chappi too. I had a lot of fun while I wrote it. * evil grin *
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animequeen06: I like this chapter! Is Naraku making another appearence in the next chapter? The suspense is killing me! Please update soon!
Mmiray: Sorry, I am late and there is no Naraku, but in the next chapter...
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Shin1: Yay! A good story! You gotta update please! Cuz... I really love your story!... it would help a lot if you can do a recheck on your grammar... but other than that... it would be FANTASTIC! Okay... ttyl.
~Shin Mmiry: Thank you very much, but I think I will just go on with my mistakes. At least I am hungarian ne? ^_^
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makeyourselfduo: i really, realy like it.
can i ask you something?
how do you say idiot in hungarian.
i love to insult mean people without them knowing, i use many handy japanese phrases daily.
but any way please up date soon or i might die of boredom, not many realy good fanfics anymore
~Rori
Mmiray: I couldn't write e-mail so read I wrote some hungarian insults under the title for you. ^_~
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Puppy-chan: WHY DID YOU MAKE INUYASHA KISS KIKYO! I KNOW HE THOUGHT IT WAS KAGOME BUT COME ON!
THAT WAS SUPPOSED TO BE INUYASHA KISSING KAGOME!
*SOB*SEE!? YOU HAPPY NOW?!?! YOU MADE ME CRY!
Mmiray: Don't cry! I hate her, I on't let her enjoy the life in my little world. ^_~ * smirk *
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karen (pierina@wildmail.com) : That was great I love the fighting scenes but I think you should start making them like each other. Either way it's up to you, though, like i said before it's really good and I hope you up date soon. Keep up the good work.
:)karen reyna
Mmiray: I will. This is why Naraku is in my fic. ^_~
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chrisy12: what should you do with kouga? hm i think you should feed him to the sharks! hehehe sorry i like him in the series but for some reason he annoys me in fanfics anyway wright more soon! ^_^
Mmiray: Don't worry, I don't know what to do with him. Hmm... Mybe if I avoid him the readers will forget about him...
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riah89: That was great and I cant wait for more and with the koga thing make inuyasha and kagome come closer together and then koga does something so kagome gets made at inuyasha and goes to koga or sumfin like that
Mmiray: I already have enough trouble with Naraku... --__--;
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That's all! Please review!!!! I will update soon, becuase I have plans but I will be glad if you would write me some ideas.
Other chapters: amusement park, under the moonlight, Kikyou and Naraku (maybe Kouga but I really don't know... --__--)
Pussza: Mmiray
(Pussza mean xxx ^_^)