My husband? NO! My biggest enemy!!
Thanks for reviews!! I love you all!!! daisuki
I don't own Inuyasha and sorry for mistakes!
$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$ Chapter 15. „Inuyasha you idiot!" $$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$
Kikyou had wrapped the sheet around her body to cover it and stood up to collect her clothes. They were dropped everywhere in the room. She had an amazing night.
Kikyou had turned back and smiled widely at the now awake Naraku. He had yawned lazily and patted the bed next to him as he grinned back at her. Kikyou had walked through the clothes and sat down next to him, her back faced with him. She had felt arms wrapped around her waist and tried to free her from the sheet. She didn't care.
„What's with that Kagome girl?" she asked as she tilted her head to let him kiss her neck. His hands had stopped wondering and he pulled back. Kikyou turned to him with a quiestioning face.
„I have to save my energy you know." Naraku said and winked at her. „Soon she will be mine and you can seduce that half breed."
„You forgot that small fact that you are a hmm... what did you say? Half breed?" Naraku narrowed his eyes at her wondering if he should slap her or not.
'Maybe I will need her later...' „Leave! Now."
Kikyou stood up and get dressed in an instant. She felt his eyes on her back as she left his hotel room. Inuyasha stepped out of the bathroom and looked at Kagome. She seemed she was deep in her own world. He stepped in front of her but she didn't move... He leaned closer. Nothing...
'I have no other choices...' he grinned and leaned even closer. His lips almost touch hers when... SLAP Inuyasha had fallen down onto his stomach and he felt Kagome sit on him. „Whoa Kagome. I didn't know we are that close to each other..."
„Whoa Inuyasha! Once in that life you thought something right." Kagome said sarcastically.
Inuyasha growled and rolled over. Kagome gasped when she realized what had just happened. Her heart started to beat faster as she realized he was on top of her. His body pressed against hers. She blushed and looked into his amber eyes.
'They are so beautiful...' she drowned into his amber sea. It felt like he opened himself to her. She could see his emotions in his eyes. She couldn't help but stared into them. She tried to turn away and push him off of her but her body didn't do anything. Maybe she didn't want to...
Inuyasha studied the woman under him. She was so weak, so... beautiful. 'WHAT?! Ok, she is sexy but...' All of his thoughts flew away as his glance met hers. Her glance was warm and gentle. He could see her emotions easily anytime he want but now something was different. His eyes travelled down onto her rosy lips and back. He couldn't help but stared into his eyes. That woman did something to him...
He leaned closer, still stared into her eyes. He gently caressed her cheek with the back of his hand and leaned down. Their lips were inches apart and he felt something what he have never felt before. Something warm...
Kagome watched him as he leaned closer but she didn't do anything. She couldn't and maybe she didn't want to. Everything was just too perfect to let it flew away. He started to close his eyes. Kagome blushed but her heart said it was alright. She closed her eyes too and tilted her head a little. She had felt his breath on her lips and his nose touched hers.
„Oh, Inuyasha! Kagome! You know you shouldn't do... it before the wedding."
Inuyasha had jumped off of Kagome and stared at the grinning Miroku who stand at the door with Sango. Her face was red from... anger? She had slapped Miroku hard on the cheek and grabbed Kagome's wrist to pull her out of the room and into her (and Miroku's) own.
Kagome's face was bright red from the shock and the embarassment and she took a deep breath before glanced up at Sango. To her surprise she grinned like an idiot and hugged her tightly.
„S...Sango.. I am glad you are happy... but I... can't breath..." Sango had finally pulled away and winked at her.
„Answer honestly! Do you like Inuyasha?" Kagome opened her mouth but couldn't speak. Her face looked like a tomato. Sango grinned even wider.
„Maybe he is attractive but he is still a hormone-drived jerk." Kagome whispered quietly, but not quiet enough. Sango could hear her perfectly.
„So I am attractive." Kagome had turned to the door where the grinning hanyou stood and glared at him. Her face turned back into his normal colour and her face was anything but gentle.
„No, Inuyasha. I spoke about you friend, that... what is his name again..? Naraku." Inuyasha's jaw dropped to the ground as he realized what she had just said. He heard the whole conversation but he couldn't not to hear it.
„N...Nani????" he asked half growling, half yelling.
„I think he is attractive."
Inuyasha's anger turned into fear for a moment and it confused Kagome. „Don't go near him, Kagome. Once in that life do as I told you and don't go near that monster. Do you know what could have happened yesterday evening?" he asked in a worried and serious voice. It rang some alarm bell in Kagome's mind but she just ignored it.
„Like you care! I think the only one is threating me is you." Said Kagome with hurt in her voice and stormed out of the room before anyone could stop her. 'Inuyasha, that jerk! I shouldn't have let him made me angry.' She thought as a tear slid down her cheek. She wipped it away angrily. 'That idiot! Why should I cry beacuse of him.'
She walked in the city all the day and tried to forget what happened in the mrning. She just couldn't. With asigh she walked toward the beach.
Sango glared at Inuyasha as Kagome stormed out of the room. „Inuyasha you are an idiot. Kagome was right. Everybody now you like her REALLY."
Inuyasha stared at her as if she was an idiot and turned his head away. „I don't know what are you talkin' about."
„Sure you don't." sighed Sango and stepped out of the room to take a glance at the 'sleeping' Miroku. „Inuyasha, would you oull him in here please?" asked Sango the hanyou and smiled at him sweetly.
Inuyasha stared at Sango with fear in his eyes and throw Miroku in their room. „Thank you." Sango shut the door closed in front of Inuyasha's face before went to a glass of water to wake Miroku up.
SPLASH
Miroku jumped up and turned around. Sango giggled slightly before get on her old glare and poked Miroku's chest. „Miroku!! Why must you interrupt them! You insensitive jerk! You... PERVERT!!!!!!!!!"
SLAP
Miroku rubbed his cheek with a dreamy face and looked up at Sango. She grabbed her towel and wlaked toward the shower. Her face was filled with (pretended) anger. Miroku grinned and grabbed her wrist.
Sango's eyes widened as she felt Miroku grabbed her wrist. She was about to slap him when she felt warm lips on her own and everything else flew away. She felt his arms wrapped around her waist but one of his hands slid lower and lower...
„PERVERT!!"
SMACK CRASH POW BANG
Her eyes darkened and walked toward the sea. It was beautiful. The sun played on the surface and made it gold. The whole sea was gold. It reminded her something... Kagome slapped herself at his eyes thought. Why must everything aroun her be something like him. She had stepped onto the snow- white sand and sat down. She wrapped her arms around her feet and out her chin onto her knees.
Kagome had closed her eyes and enjoyed the light breez touched her cheeks. She heard stepa came closer to her. Her anger had awakened as the man kneeled down beside her and touched her shoulder. She stood up in an instant but didn't turned around to face with him. Her shoulders shook slightly as her fists clenched.
„Inuyasha, you jerk! You don't know when should you leave me alone, do you?" she whirled around but she found Naraku looked at her smiling instead of Inuyasha. She blushed and lowered her head. „I-I'm sorry... I had though you was someone else." Kagome murmured and the alarm bells rang again in her head as she felt had his hand touched gently her chin and lifted her head to face with him.
„No problem, Kagome." He said and stroked her cheek gently with his other hand. Kagome blushed and pulled her head away from his touch. She could remember Inuyasha's warning very well...
„Sorry, I have to go now." She said coldly and and turned to leave.
„Why do you afraid of me?" Kagome stopped and turned back to him. She had studied his face but it was honest and confused. She smiled slightly.
'Maybe Inuyasha was just jealous...' „No, I don't afraid of you but I really have to go back to the hotel." She said and started to walk away.
„But it is dangerous for a beauty as yourself to walk around in the evening. Shall I accompany with you?" he asked and smiled at her kindly.
„S-sure..." They went quietly for a while and the silence started to be very uncomfortable.
„What did he do to you now?" asked Naraku suddenly.
„Hmm? Who?" Kagome knew very well who did he talk about but she didn't want to speak with HIM about Inuyasha.
„You know who I am talking about. I don't know what do you see in him. He is rude and a jerk." Said Naraku.
Kagome stayed silent and sighed with relief as they reached the hotel. She turned to Naraku. „Thank you very much. Now... Goodbye."
„Goodbye, Kagome." He said and took her hand, kissed it gently as he stared into her wide eyes. „Goodnight."
With that he turned and walked away. The darkness swallowed his black figure. Kagom ran up the their hotel room and stepped in only to find Inuyasha laying on the bed in his boxers, grinning widely at her. Kagome made a face as she studied from his toes to the top of his head. 'I have to wash my face'
„Hey Kagome! Don't you want to join me in the bed?" he asked with a smug grin. Kagome's glance turn away from his and she noticed a empty bottle of wine on the tabble... She made a face. 'So this is the reason of his happines'
„No, thank you. Please calm Inuyasha junior down and tell me when I can come out of the bathroom ok?" With that she ran into the bathroom and locked the door.
Inuyasha stared at the door while her words sank into his mind and grinned even wider. „But Kagome! Inuyasha junior is totally calm... at least temporarily calm..."
„Then put some ice on him to make his fall asleep!" 'Idiot'
„Kagome?"
„Hmm?"
„Want me to wash your back for you?" he asked in an innocent voice. He heard something hard hit the floor in the bathroom and Kagome cursed under her breath. [at least he have demon ears ne]
„Want me to feed you with some soap?"
Kagome turned the doorknob silently and peeked out from the bathroom. She smiled slightly when she noticed Inuyasha fell asleep. His face was peacefull and innocent. Something what he could never produce when he is awake. Kagome sat down next to him and studied his face for a few minutes before get into the bed near him.
She turned her back to Inuyasha and almost fel asleep when she felt arms sneaking around her waist. Kagome's face turned red bit from the anger. She was about to push him away when he buried his face into her neck, took a deep breath and inhaled her scent. She blushed into a deep shade of red and frozed when she felt him kissing her neck gently. Shivers ran through her body and her eyes widened. Her heart started to beat faster as shirvers ran through her body again and again.
Inuyasha grinned and jumped off of her just in time before her lamp hit the pillow where his head was a minute ago. „Inuyasha... How dare you? You went too far you bastard." Kagome hissed like cat and throw her clock at him.ű
CRASH
It hit him on his forehead and Inuyasha fell off of the bed, his grin frozed onto his face.
„Be a good puppy and sleep near the bed."
End of the capter
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Next chapter: Chicken fight and Naraku's plan
Your reviews:
Ra: Keep going this is funny! Mmiray: Thanx, I am trying my best but.... --
Asianvietgirl52: lol! This story made me burst out laughing so many times its not even funny! Ahahahahaha! I LUV THIS STORY! Hahahahahah! I hope ya update soon! Buh bye! Lol! This is my new favourite story for sure! Mmiray: Thak you, I am glad you loved it that much. Sorry for make you wait that much for the new chapiie TT (I am sooooo proud... sob)
KellyLuvsInu: Could you possibly kill Kouga? I don't like him very much. Mmiray: ehh... I think I will just ignore him in my fanfic. At least none of you want him so I don't think you will miss him.
Jenny: Very cute story. Thought I don't understand why you would make Miroku attracted to some other girl and then beg to Sango for forgiveness. I think that you should make Miroku more loyal. Mmiray: Yeah, but I didn't find any other reason to make him ask Sango out.
Makeyourselfduo: I will be sure to make good use of those phrases... it's so boring speaking english... Good chapter! MWHAHAHAHAHA, im no longer bored thet means ashley lost her bet! Yay! Mmiray: Thanx.... Oo??
Heather: great chappy!! Poor Inuyasha lol... hee hee ::tweak tweak:: Mmiray: thanx
Shin1:Great story! You gotta update ASAP cuz you will bring smiles to your „fans" when you update! I am one of them! Mmiray: melted Fans.... sigh
Jackie (Doggie Love): Even if they are some grammar mistakes it is still good! I am seriously loving it! It is so funny and romantic at the same time! I love how you made them hate each other at the start and then end up liking each other! T's kind of like the starting of the real anime! I'm not kidding! Ohh! I hope Kikyou, Naraku and Kouga die! (Kikyou the most) I love Dogs Mmiray: Oh yeah... the grammar mistakes.. ehheehh ;; Yeah, it's kind of the same put in the anime series Inuyasha didn't want to kis Kagome. evil grin
Doggie-Love: That was funny. Also, I have to agree with Puppy-chan! Why did you make them kiss! Just reading it made me mad! I hope you die and turn into ashes! Well... actually not becuase if you do then you can't write/type and finish this fanfic. Well.... I hope Kagome and Inuyasha keep fighting. It makes it more interesting. Mmiray: =P turn her back to Doggie-Love
Ceaseless Cloudy Days: NU! You're soo evil!! Continue ASAP please! Mmiray: SORRY FOR KEEP YOU WAITING!!!!!! TT TT
Bgirlshaluvinu: Hey keep doing what u doing. If you can please review my story it is called 'From Heaven To Hell And Back To Heaven Again' Please review it and have your friend review it too! Mmiray: I reviewed it. That fic was great but I have no friend who like animes and mangas. sigh
JojoBlond: Doggielove is and idiot. This story is awesome keep it up and update soon. Mmiray: Yes madam!! hug jojoblond
Eternalhappiness: luv the story please update! Mmiray: sorry.... --;;
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Thanks for reviews!! I love you all!!! daisuki
I don't own Inuyasha and sorry for mistakes!
$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$ Chapter 15. „Inuyasha you idiot!" $$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$
Kikyou had wrapped the sheet around her body to cover it and stood up to collect her clothes. They were dropped everywhere in the room. She had an amazing night.
Kikyou had turned back and smiled widely at the now awake Naraku. He had yawned lazily and patted the bed next to him as he grinned back at her. Kikyou had walked through the clothes and sat down next to him, her back faced with him. She had felt arms wrapped around her waist and tried to free her from the sheet. She didn't care.
„What's with that Kagome girl?" she asked as she tilted her head to let him kiss her neck. His hands had stopped wondering and he pulled back. Kikyou turned to him with a quiestioning face.
„I have to save my energy you know." Naraku said and winked at her. „Soon she will be mine and you can seduce that half breed."
„You forgot that small fact that you are a hmm... what did you say? Half breed?" Naraku narrowed his eyes at her wondering if he should slap her or not.
'Maybe I will need her later...' „Leave! Now."
Kikyou stood up and get dressed in an instant. She felt his eyes on her back as she left his hotel room. Inuyasha stepped out of the bathroom and looked at Kagome. She seemed she was deep in her own world. He stepped in front of her but she didn't move... He leaned closer. Nothing...
'I have no other choices...' he grinned and leaned even closer. His lips almost touch hers when... SLAP Inuyasha had fallen down onto his stomach and he felt Kagome sit on him. „Whoa Kagome. I didn't know we are that close to each other..."
„Whoa Inuyasha! Once in that life you thought something right." Kagome said sarcastically.
Inuyasha growled and rolled over. Kagome gasped when she realized what had just happened. Her heart started to beat faster as she realized he was on top of her. His body pressed against hers. She blushed and looked into his amber eyes.
'They are so beautiful...' she drowned into his amber sea. It felt like he opened himself to her. She could see his emotions in his eyes. She couldn't help but stared into them. She tried to turn away and push him off of her but her body didn't do anything. Maybe she didn't want to...
Inuyasha studied the woman under him. She was so weak, so... beautiful. 'WHAT?! Ok, she is sexy but...' All of his thoughts flew away as his glance met hers. Her glance was warm and gentle. He could see her emotions easily anytime he want but now something was different. His eyes travelled down onto her rosy lips and back. He couldn't help but stared into his eyes. That woman did something to him...
He leaned closer, still stared into her eyes. He gently caressed her cheek with the back of his hand and leaned down. Their lips were inches apart and he felt something what he have never felt before. Something warm...
Kagome watched him as he leaned closer but she didn't do anything. She couldn't and maybe she didn't want to. Everything was just too perfect to let it flew away. He started to close his eyes. Kagome blushed but her heart said it was alright. She closed her eyes too and tilted her head a little. She had felt his breath on her lips and his nose touched hers.
„Oh, Inuyasha! Kagome! You know you shouldn't do... it before the wedding."
Inuyasha had jumped off of Kagome and stared at the grinning Miroku who stand at the door with Sango. Her face was red from... anger? She had slapped Miroku hard on the cheek and grabbed Kagome's wrist to pull her out of the room and into her (and Miroku's) own.
Kagome's face was bright red from the shock and the embarassment and she took a deep breath before glanced up at Sango. To her surprise she grinned like an idiot and hugged her tightly.
„S...Sango.. I am glad you are happy... but I... can't breath..." Sango had finally pulled away and winked at her.
„Answer honestly! Do you like Inuyasha?" Kagome opened her mouth but couldn't speak. Her face looked like a tomato. Sango grinned even wider.
„Maybe he is attractive but he is still a hormone-drived jerk." Kagome whispered quietly, but not quiet enough. Sango could hear her perfectly.
„So I am attractive." Kagome had turned to the door where the grinning hanyou stood and glared at him. Her face turned back into his normal colour and her face was anything but gentle.
„No, Inuyasha. I spoke about you friend, that... what is his name again..? Naraku." Inuyasha's jaw dropped to the ground as he realized what she had just said. He heard the whole conversation but he couldn't not to hear it.
„N...Nani????" he asked half growling, half yelling.
„I think he is attractive."
Inuyasha's anger turned into fear for a moment and it confused Kagome. „Don't go near him, Kagome. Once in that life do as I told you and don't go near that monster. Do you know what could have happened yesterday evening?" he asked in a worried and serious voice. It rang some alarm bell in Kagome's mind but she just ignored it.
„Like you care! I think the only one is threating me is you." Said Kagome with hurt in her voice and stormed out of the room before anyone could stop her. 'Inuyasha, that jerk! I shouldn't have let him made me angry.' She thought as a tear slid down her cheek. She wipped it away angrily. 'That idiot! Why should I cry beacuse of him.'
She walked in the city all the day and tried to forget what happened in the mrning. She just couldn't. With asigh she walked toward the beach.
Sango glared at Inuyasha as Kagome stormed out of the room. „Inuyasha you are an idiot. Kagome was right. Everybody now you like her REALLY."
Inuyasha stared at her as if she was an idiot and turned his head away. „I don't know what are you talkin' about."
„Sure you don't." sighed Sango and stepped out of the room to take a glance at the 'sleeping' Miroku. „Inuyasha, would you oull him in here please?" asked Sango the hanyou and smiled at him sweetly.
Inuyasha stared at Sango with fear in his eyes and throw Miroku in their room. „Thank you." Sango shut the door closed in front of Inuyasha's face before went to a glass of water to wake Miroku up.
SPLASH
Miroku jumped up and turned around. Sango giggled slightly before get on her old glare and poked Miroku's chest. „Miroku!! Why must you interrupt them! You insensitive jerk! You... PERVERT!!!!!!!!!"
SLAP
Miroku rubbed his cheek with a dreamy face and looked up at Sango. She grabbed her towel and wlaked toward the shower. Her face was filled with (pretended) anger. Miroku grinned and grabbed her wrist.
Sango's eyes widened as she felt Miroku grabbed her wrist. She was about to slap him when she felt warm lips on her own and everything else flew away. She felt his arms wrapped around her waist but one of his hands slid lower and lower...
„PERVERT!!"
SMACK CRASH POW BANG
Her eyes darkened and walked toward the sea. It was beautiful. The sun played on the surface and made it gold. The whole sea was gold. It reminded her something... Kagome slapped herself at his eyes thought. Why must everything aroun her be something like him. She had stepped onto the snow- white sand and sat down. She wrapped her arms around her feet and out her chin onto her knees.
Kagome had closed her eyes and enjoyed the light breez touched her cheeks. She heard stepa came closer to her. Her anger had awakened as the man kneeled down beside her and touched her shoulder. She stood up in an instant but didn't turned around to face with him. Her shoulders shook slightly as her fists clenched.
„Inuyasha, you jerk! You don't know when should you leave me alone, do you?" she whirled around but she found Naraku looked at her smiling instead of Inuyasha. She blushed and lowered her head. „I-I'm sorry... I had though you was someone else." Kagome murmured and the alarm bells rang again in her head as she felt had his hand touched gently her chin and lifted her head to face with him.
„No problem, Kagome." He said and stroked her cheek gently with his other hand. Kagome blushed and pulled her head away from his touch. She could remember Inuyasha's warning very well...
„Sorry, I have to go now." She said coldly and and turned to leave.
„Why do you afraid of me?" Kagome stopped and turned back to him. She had studied his face but it was honest and confused. She smiled slightly.
'Maybe Inuyasha was just jealous...' „No, I don't afraid of you but I really have to go back to the hotel." She said and started to walk away.
„But it is dangerous for a beauty as yourself to walk around in the evening. Shall I accompany with you?" he asked and smiled at her kindly.
„S-sure..." They went quietly for a while and the silence started to be very uncomfortable.
„What did he do to you now?" asked Naraku suddenly.
„Hmm? Who?" Kagome knew very well who did he talk about but she didn't want to speak with HIM about Inuyasha.
„You know who I am talking about. I don't know what do you see in him. He is rude and a jerk." Said Naraku.
Kagome stayed silent and sighed with relief as they reached the hotel. She turned to Naraku. „Thank you very much. Now... Goodbye."
„Goodbye, Kagome." He said and took her hand, kissed it gently as he stared into her wide eyes. „Goodnight."
With that he turned and walked away. The darkness swallowed his black figure. Kagom ran up the their hotel room and stepped in only to find Inuyasha laying on the bed in his boxers, grinning widely at her. Kagome made a face as she studied from his toes to the top of his head. 'I have to wash my face'
„Hey Kagome! Don't you want to join me in the bed?" he asked with a smug grin. Kagome's glance turn away from his and she noticed a empty bottle of wine on the tabble... She made a face. 'So this is the reason of his happines'
„No, thank you. Please calm Inuyasha junior down and tell me when I can come out of the bathroom ok?" With that she ran into the bathroom and locked the door.
Inuyasha stared at the door while her words sank into his mind and grinned even wider. „But Kagome! Inuyasha junior is totally calm... at least temporarily calm..."
„Then put some ice on him to make his fall asleep!" 'Idiot'
„Kagome?"
„Hmm?"
„Want me to wash your back for you?" he asked in an innocent voice. He heard something hard hit the floor in the bathroom and Kagome cursed under her breath. [at least he have demon ears ne]
„Want me to feed you with some soap?"
Kagome turned the doorknob silently and peeked out from the bathroom. She smiled slightly when she noticed Inuyasha fell asleep. His face was peacefull and innocent. Something what he could never produce when he is awake. Kagome sat down next to him and studied his face for a few minutes before get into the bed near him.
She turned her back to Inuyasha and almost fel asleep when she felt arms sneaking around her waist. Kagome's face turned red bit from the anger. She was about to push him away when he buried his face into her neck, took a deep breath and inhaled her scent. She blushed into a deep shade of red and frozed when she felt him kissing her neck gently. Shivers ran through her body and her eyes widened. Her heart started to beat faster as shirvers ran through her body again and again.
Inuyasha grinned and jumped off of her just in time before her lamp hit the pillow where his head was a minute ago. „Inuyasha... How dare you? You went too far you bastard." Kagome hissed like cat and throw her clock at him.ű
CRASH
It hit him on his forehead and Inuyasha fell off of the bed, his grin frozed onto his face.
„Be a good puppy and sleep near the bed."
End of the capter
Do you like it? Or not? Please R&R!!!
Next chapter: Chicken fight and Naraku's plan
Your reviews:
Ra: Keep going this is funny! Mmiray: Thanx, I am trying my best but.... --
Asianvietgirl52: lol! This story made me burst out laughing so many times its not even funny! Ahahahahaha! I LUV THIS STORY! Hahahahahah! I hope ya update soon! Buh bye! Lol! This is my new favourite story for sure! Mmiray: Thak you, I am glad you loved it that much. Sorry for make you wait that much for the new chapiie TT (I am sooooo proud... sob)
KellyLuvsInu: Could you possibly kill Kouga? I don't like him very much. Mmiray: ehh... I think I will just ignore him in my fanfic. At least none of you want him so I don't think you will miss him.
Jenny: Very cute story. Thought I don't understand why you would make Miroku attracted to some other girl and then beg to Sango for forgiveness. I think that you should make Miroku more loyal. Mmiray: Yeah, but I didn't find any other reason to make him ask Sango out.
Makeyourselfduo: I will be sure to make good use of those phrases... it's so boring speaking english... Good chapter! MWHAHAHAHAHA, im no longer bored thet means ashley lost her bet! Yay! Mmiray: Thanx.... Oo??
Heather: great chappy!! Poor Inuyasha lol... hee hee ::tweak tweak:: Mmiray: thanx
Shin1:Great story! You gotta update ASAP cuz you will bring smiles to your „fans" when you update! I am one of them! Mmiray: melted Fans.... sigh
Jackie (Doggie Love): Even if they are some grammar mistakes it is still good! I am seriously loving it! It is so funny and romantic at the same time! I love how you made them hate each other at the start and then end up liking each other! T's kind of like the starting of the real anime! I'm not kidding! Ohh! I hope Kikyou, Naraku and Kouga die! (Kikyou the most) I love Dogs Mmiray: Oh yeah... the grammar mistakes.. ehheehh ;; Yeah, it's kind of the same put in the anime series Inuyasha didn't want to kis Kagome. evil grin
Doggie-Love: That was funny. Also, I have to agree with Puppy-chan! Why did you make them kiss! Just reading it made me mad! I hope you die and turn into ashes! Well... actually not becuase if you do then you can't write/type and finish this fanfic. Well.... I hope Kagome and Inuyasha keep fighting. It makes it more interesting. Mmiray: =P turn her back to Doggie-Love
Ceaseless Cloudy Days: NU! You're soo evil!! Continue ASAP please! Mmiray: SORRY FOR KEEP YOU WAITING!!!!!! TT TT
Bgirlshaluvinu: Hey keep doing what u doing. If you can please review my story it is called 'From Heaven To Hell And Back To Heaven Again' Please review it and have your friend review it too! Mmiray: I reviewed it. That fic was great but I have no friend who like animes and mangas. sigh
JojoBlond: Doggielove is and idiot. This story is awesome keep it up and update soon. Mmiray: Yes madam!! hug jojoblond
Eternalhappiness: luv the story please update! Mmiray: sorry.... --;;
Luna-miko: Hello! I luv ur story! It's so funny and cute! I hope u can update soon. It's killeng me! Mmiray: Just wait till the cliffhangers!!! BWHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!