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Thank you for the reviews!! I love you all!! But I think I will test Kagome's new weapon on Doggie-love's head.... Wary
I don't own Inuyasha, if I am, I would pet his adorable ears. love love
Happy birthday, Doggie-love!
&&&&& Chapter 16. „A little too much fun..." &&&&&
The night went verrrrry slow... at least for Kagome. Inuyasha kept jumping onto her or trying to kiss her or...even more. When he tried to slid his hands under her knee-lenght shirt (what she used as PJs) Kagome made his sleep with a frying pan.
Inuyasha slowly opened his eyes but shut them close in an instant when a wavw of pain hit his head.
„Oww.... What the hell?!" he sat up and looked around only to find himself in the kitchen. He puthis hand onto his aching forehead and walked out of the kitchen, nearly fell over a frying pan. The memories of the last night slowly came back to him. Inuyasha grinned and stepped into the bedroom.
Kagome slept peacefully on the bed, grabbing the sheets and smiling lightly. She turned her onto her back and mumbled something. Inuyasha walked to Kagome and leaned down to hear her. 'So what my dear fiancée dreaming about?'
„Inuyasha..."
Inuyasha smirked and leaned closer, his ears almost touched her mouth.
„Inuyasha you..." Inuyasha grinned smugly and tried to catch every word. „Inuyasha you are an idiot." With that Kagome bit down onto his ear. Inuyasha yelled and jumped up in an instant.
„Wench, you have no shame!! Do you know how does it hurt?!" Inuyasha growled and yelled at her in the same time. He clenched his fist as tried his best to not to do anything he would regret. Kagome crossed her arms and glared at him.
„That was because you didn't let me sleep the whole night." She turned around and started to walk away when something hit her back and tackled her to the ground. „INUYASHA YOU JERK!!!! WOULD YOU STOP IT?!?!?!?!" she tried to get up but Inuyasha who happened to sit on her back was too heavy. „You fat pig..."
„Nani?! Want me to let you see how muscular I am?" Inuyasha grinned evilly but nearly fell off of Kagome when she kicked his back. „Oww...."
„No, thank you very much. Why should I want to see you, bastard?" Kagome felt really uncomfortable with Inuyasha on her back and the hard floor under her...
„Cuz you are my little beloved fiancée. Have you ever thought about what always happen between men and women after wedding?" he asked in a husky voice and smirked when she felt her battle aura.
„Get..off..of..me..you..fat..pig.." Kagome kept kicking his back. Inuyasha growled deeply, he started to get fustrated and grabbed her waist to turn her onto her back. Kagome felt his hands on her waist and was about to kick harder but suddenly she find herself staring into his amber eyes. 'Wha... Again... His beautiful eyes... I want to stare into them forever... WHAT?? Stop it!!' She felt like she wanted to cry. „Inuyasha why can't you just leave me alone? A lot of prettier girl running on the beach and waiting for someone to take them? Why me? What did I do to you? Why can't you leave me alone?"
Inuyasha stared into her eyes. 'Doeas she really hate me thet much?' He studied her face, her rosy lips, her beautiful brown eyes, her silky black hair. She was beautiful but of course there were some girl who was prettier then her... However he didn't want them. He wanted Kagome... 'What did you do to me stupid bitch?' He stared at her for a few more moments and the grinned evilly... as usual... „Because you are the one who ever refused me... That's why I will make you mine sooner or later."
Kagome looked straight into his amber eyes and noticed some strange glint in them. She didn't care. Her eyes burnt with anger and she clenched her fists. 'Why can't he understand? We have to marry for a life but he didin't mind because..!! He can't be that stupid!!!'
She saw Inuyasha's grin grew wider with her anger and she closed her eyes to calm herself down.. at least a little... But suddenly she felt sometehing warm touched her lips. Her eyes opened up in an instant and widened in shock as she realized Inuyasha was kissing her. She blushed and tried to push him away but he grabbed her wrists and held them in pace.
She didn't know if her heart stopped or pounded faster.His lips was warm, his kiss was gentle. She tried to free herself but he didn't let her. Inuyasha pulled away and looked into her eyes before a victorious grin crept onto his face. „I won the today morning's match." He said, still holding her wrists.
„Let me go and I will show you who is the real winner." Kagome hissed like a cat. He held her wrists and she couldn't do anything. That was humiliating.
„Ok." Inuyasha released her wrists and jumped off of her in an instant, she didin't even have time to punch or slap him.
„INUYASHA, YOU WILL DIE!!!!!" Kagome ran after him and tried to kick him but he dodged it. Inuyasha laughed like an idiot while Kagome yelled with great anger.
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Miroku looked at Inuyasha and then Kagome... That wasn't too difficult to tell what could have happened... Kagome glared at him from time to time and and Inuyasha winked at her and grinned every time he caught her glance. Miroku and Sango watched the two for a long time and it was getting scary...
Kagome looked at Miroku and noticed his fearful glance. „What?"
A sweatdrop appeared behind Miroku's head as she tried to smile. „Nothing, really nothing." They all went back to eat. There was a uncomfortable silence. Suddenly Inuyasha get a great idea and nudged Kagome while she drunk...
A shriek, a crash and man's yell was heard...
And the whole day went like that...
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Kagome stomped off of the hotel and sat down onto the stairs. „Inuyasha yu jerk. I will never... NEVER marry him. I won't be able to live like this" She wanted to cry. But this wasn't Inuyasha... she sisn't know herself what she wanted... Suddenly she heard music and her eyes lit up with happiness. She ran back into the hotel and flew into Sango's and Miroku's room.
„Sango...I have... a great... great idea..." she said breathlessly from the running. She didn't even noticed Sango's blush as she pushed herself off of Miroku's lap.
„And what would it be?" she asked suspiciously.
Kagome clapped her hands together and grinned widely. „Wanna dance?"
Sango stood up, grabbed the staring Miroku's collar and throw him off of the room. „Get Inuyasha!" With that she shut the door in front of him. A sweatdrop appeared behind Miroku's head but Kagome's words slowly sank into his mind... He grinned and ran to get Inuyasha.
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„COME OUT, DAMNIT!!!! HOW LONG DOES IT TAKE TO YOU TO DRESS UP?!?!" yelled a very angry Inuyasha as he banged Sano's and Miroku's door.
Sango made a worried face and turned to Kagome with a questioning face. Kagome rolled her eyes and stepped to the door. „Sorry, Kagome isn't at home at the moment. Please left you message after the pips. Thank you!"
Sango snorted and burst out laughing. Kagome soon joined her as she heard Inuyasha kicked something and cursed loudly. Sango wipped the tears away fromthe corner of her eyes and smiled at Kagome. „You know you are cruel...."
„I will make sure Inuyasha don't want me to make his." Said Kagome smugly and continued to try on some clothes. She turned around in front of the mirror and looked at herself. She let her wavy hair down and it reached the middle of her back. She put on a light blue make up and she wore a pair od tight jeans with a light blue tanktop. It was simple but she admitted thet she looked really pretty in them.
Sango stepped out of the bathroom with a hair drier in her hand.. She was almost ready. She looked at her friend and a huge smile appeared on her face. „Wow kagome, you look beautiful."
Kagome smiled sweetly „Thank you." Studied Sango up and down. Sho wore a pair of white ducks and a pale pink tanktop. „You look pretty yourself." She winked at Sango „Miroku will craze for you"
Sango blushed and mumbled something about Inuyasha under her breath but Kagome didn't want to notice it.
„Let's go!" They shrieked cheerfully and stormed out of the room.
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Inuyasha looked very angry, his ears faltted on his skull and he growled deeply. Miroku looked at him as they headed toward the dance club „Inuyasha, calm down! Girls need time to get ready."
Inuyasha glared at him and continued stomping like it was no tomorrow. „Calm down?? She made fun of me!!"
„Like it usually doesn't happen every day..." mumbled Miroku but Inuyasha could hear him very well. Inuyasha snorted and stopped.
„What do you mean?"
„Nothing, my dear freind nothing..." Miroku rolled his eyes „Will we get drunk?" he asked with a playful grin
„Sure!" Inuyasha grinned evilly...
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Kagome and Sango giggled cheerfully after a quick entrance with the help of a little smile to the guards. It was really good sometimes to be a girl... a nice girl...
Kagome grinned like an idiot even she didn't drink anything [yet.. hehhehh evil grin ] „Wanna dance or find the boys?" she yelled into Sango's ears. They couldn't hear each other beacuse of the loud music. Sango made a face and laughed.
„Who cares about the boys?" she said dragging Kagome toward the dancingfloor. Kagome gladly followed her and started to dance. As they reached to middle of the dance floor they started to dance. Their body moved with the music perfectly. The guys around them stared like idiots...almost drooling.
„Who will get a boy quicker?" Kagome winked at Sango and started to swing her hips a little more. Suddenly she felt hads on her hips and someone's hot breath on her ear...
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I hope you like it, R&R. I didn't do that for get more-more-more reviews I just wanted to get reviews from readers who didn't write yet rolls her eyes
I will answer you reviews, I swear, but now I have to go to sleep glare at her mom
Your reviews:
Chrisy12: YAY! you updated! and i loved it! but kikyo sleeping with naraku? EW! that's gross! anyway wright more a.s.a.p.!
Mmiray: That was just to make Kikyou more „popular" grins evilly
Crazy-Kitsune: Yay! You updated! Inu plushie for you! gives mmiray Inu plushie
lol kit totally loves your story, maybe as far as obsessed.
Who is kit kidding, she newer gets obsessed. huggles kiba
Ok so kiba is an exception...
lol
keep writing
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Mmiray: Oo Kiba? Huh? Did I miss something? (I hope I am not an idiot...) Thank you for the plushie hug
Shamanic Destiny: heeheheehee alarm clocks if I do say so tend to be Kagome's weapon of choice...and i should take a few pointers...when used in the right way they can be very potent weapons. Oh well I liked the new chappie please update soon I can't wait to find out what happens
Mmiray: grin Maybe I will use your weapon-idea, it is very good... hehheh...
Ceaseless Cloudy Days: LOL, that was hot. TT I'm such a pervert, I'm so sorry. XD But PLEASE continue! I don't care about the mistakes!! It's so...funny...and hot...LOL. XD XD
Mmiray: The only one pervert here is me... smirk
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Mmiray: Cuz my story is more ineteresting in that way
Lil-missa: i love it! i really really do, one of my favs...
Mmiray: I am glad
StarLightKagome: I love it! But I hate naraku he's so...creepy...and how could Kikyo do it with him!?!?! That's nasty...but I guess it DOES suit her...anyways update soon! I have Yaida Hitomi stuck in my head! Er! (She's a japanese rock/pop singer) woops I gotta go now and get ready for school!
Kat
Mmiray: I hate them both and they will... oops... nearly slipped out of my mouth... (I LOVE THE „WOLF'S RAIN"'S OPENING!!!!!!! drooling )
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(But you are one of my favourite reader if an author can say that )
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Mmiray: Ok
Eternalhappiness: funny! lol
please update-
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Manuca: heyas!!
omg totally awesome cool layout!I liked the end better,heheh he LIKES her!!yay!!soo fluffy!!waa please update!
see yaa round!
Mmiray: Of course he is. But I won't let them be happy too easily evil grin
Makeyourselfduo: drunk inu! how amusing...
sleazy kikyo, not surprising...
o yea with the ashley lost her bet thing a girl i know bet that i would be bored till the end of time, she's so mean!
please continue!
Rori
Mmiray: Drunk Inu will be more amusing in the next chapter Kikyo... pfff.... --
K chan: NO! YOU STOPPED WRITING! cries PLZ UPDATE SOON!
Mmiray: Sumimasen TT
Hungarian Tiger: Rövid megjegyzés a történet KIRÁLY tegnap este már végigolvastam, de éjfél körül kezd az anyám életveszélyes lénnyé vállni úgyhogy a megjegyzést csak ma tudtam elkészíteni. Csuda egy házaspárt csináltál a két szegény párából, teljesen egymásba vannak zúgva és nem tudják bevallani hehehe. Hát mivel kérted hogy segítsek a nyelvtannal ezét ideje hogy kitérjek erre a részre, két problémát találtan, az egyik az, hogy szinte félsz a did szó alkalmazásától, illetve wan egy kis problémád a melléknévképzõkkel.
Mmiray: Már korábban is válaszoltam volna csak egy a nyomi freemail (meg ne kérdezd miért) nem jelezte hogy írtál... hmmm... Mind1. Köszönöm, most hogy nyári szünet én is végigolvasom majd a te fanficedet. Na igen mindig is vonzottak az ilyen helyzetek (talán innen ered a nagy Ranma Årület is ehheehe...) Kicsit kerge meg merész fantáziájú vagyok de hát istenem... Nem tudom hogy ismered a www.manga.hu oldalt, ha van valami én a nap 24 órájából 25öt ott töltök a fórumon Mira néven az offtopicban.
A „did"-tÅl pedig tényleg rettegek...
Katie Keita: Hi!
I just LOVED ur fanfiction, i love the style!
it's perfect!!, well there's a little grammar error but it' still perfect , i love it
i cant wait till thenext chapter!
Mmiray: Thanx!
Luna-miko: Funny chapter...Pleaz Pleaz Update! Keep up the good work!
Mmiray: Hai
Snug: It's alright. I think it would be better if you used a little more Japanese words though. Thanx
Mmiray: I knew a lot but I am not sure others will undestand. I don't want to mix english and japanese.
ChibiKenshin6490: Great story. Please update ASAP!
Mmiray: Hai
Denaliyasha: This is cute! I really like this story! :D I loved the Kikyou's Puppy suntan lotion! I think Kikyou should get stuck with Naraku and Kouga... should be left all alone. Laughs maniacally
Keep up the good work!
Mmiray: Great idea grins evilly and Hai
Remix-69er: well if you would update more offten there would be more reviews!
Mmiray: More review is not the point. I just want more READERS to review. (But with that of course I would get more reviews too rolls her eyes )
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Mmiray: I will read and review them
...: umm why do you want more reviews? anyways here's one and i luv you story
Mmiray: I was an idiot to say I haven't gor enough review.. Once more I wanted more READERS to review. (and my „I-won't-update-plan" worked very well evil grin )
Reviewer: You're pathetic. 170 reviews is a lot. God, you've got to be the most stupidest writer in the world to go around demanding reviews. No offense, but stop acting all hostile.
Mmiray: sigh
Doggie-love: NOO!
Please continue! I've been waiting like...more than 1 month for the next chapter!! My birthday is on Friday! Can you post it then? Please continue!
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Mmiray: ?? Oo
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Mmiray: ... :P
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I wanted my chapter 16 (crying) r u happy now u got almost 200 reviews (some more cryin) I love your story i have been reading it since the first day PLEASE PLEASE OH PLEASE WRITE OH MIGHT LORD MMIRAY!
Mmiray: LORD?? Oo faints
Chrisy: it's going to be kouga isn't it? if so then that's going to be a great fight when inuyasha see's them.and if not...then just forget everything i just said! XD more ASAP!
Mmiray: Who is Kouga? innocent puppy dog eyes
Shamanic Destiny: oh is the guy thats dancing with her going to be Inuyasha...i sure hope so! loved the chapter and can't wait for the next one!
Mmiray: Who knows? Shrug (me)
Ceaseless Cloudy Days: grins that was hot. You're pretty good for somebody who doesn't speak English as their first language. Continue ASAP!
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Mmiray: Ok... If I won't forget...
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Mmiray: Maybe.... At the and... evil grin
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Mmiray: Mmiray's eyes widened in fear... She shrieked at started to run away as fast as she could OK! OK! OK! OK! A next chappie is almos ready!!!!! KYAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Makeyourselfduo: parents are evil!
well that was an amusing chapter,
starts begging please write more!
Rori
Mmiray: I must, otherwise StarLightKagome will kill me Oo
Snug: That really didn't make sense, but whatever, this fic is worth reading so yeah. Thanx.
Mmiray: I won't mix english with japanese. Gomen. Hmph
Inuyasha1990: LOL this is so funy...the way they keep on trying to kill each other LOL Keep writing these good chappies! GOOD LUCK!
Mmiray: Thank you very much... They will never change but you know somewhat I have to done my fanfic... but not yet grin
Lina: luv it! this chapter was sort've funny
Mmiray: Arigatou
?The author? :Snug... take a deep breath ... thank you very much you are so kind... glare
Mmiray: NANI??? Oo
XsangoX: i really really liked it...man, i was so bored until i saw your fanfic summary so i decided that i would read it. -
Mmiray: Arigatou. (I can't change the summary!!!!! KYAAA!!!! It didn't work!!! (...hate him more than anyone !!IN!! the Earth...)
XsangoX: wow, u speak another language...wait i speak another language too. where are you from? well anyways, this chappie was really good and i hope you will update asap -
Mmiray: I am hungarian (like Hunagrian Tiger too who write me a review )
AngelofLight: NO DAMN CLIFFYS!please write more i love this fic and i wana know what happeneds!
Mmiray: An angel shouldn't curse. grin Anyway (finally once) I will update SOON. Yay!
The next cahpter is almost ready, I will update I swear. But after that I will go to Tunesia for a week, one week break and after that two week english-camp with my best friend happy sigh
Thank you for the reviews!! I love you all!! But I think I will test Kagome's new weapon on Doggie-love's head.... Wary
I don't own Inuyasha, if I am, I would pet his adorable ears. love love
Happy birthday, Doggie-love!
&&&&& Chapter 16. „A little too much fun..." &&&&&
The night went verrrrry slow... at least for Kagome. Inuyasha kept jumping onto her or trying to kiss her or...even more. When he tried to slid his hands under her knee-lenght shirt (what she used as PJs) Kagome made his sleep with a frying pan.
Inuyasha slowly opened his eyes but shut them close in an instant when a wavw of pain hit his head.
„Oww.... What the hell?!" he sat up and looked around only to find himself in the kitchen. He puthis hand onto his aching forehead and walked out of the kitchen, nearly fell over a frying pan. The memories of the last night slowly came back to him. Inuyasha grinned and stepped into the bedroom.
Kagome slept peacefully on the bed, grabbing the sheets and smiling lightly. She turned her onto her back and mumbled something. Inuyasha walked to Kagome and leaned down to hear her. 'So what my dear fiancée dreaming about?'
„Inuyasha..."
Inuyasha smirked and leaned closer, his ears almost touched her mouth.
„Inuyasha you..." Inuyasha grinned smugly and tried to catch every word. „Inuyasha you are an idiot." With that Kagome bit down onto his ear. Inuyasha yelled and jumped up in an instant.
„Wench, you have no shame!! Do you know how does it hurt?!" Inuyasha growled and yelled at her in the same time. He clenched his fist as tried his best to not to do anything he would regret. Kagome crossed her arms and glared at him.
„That was because you didn't let me sleep the whole night." She turned around and started to walk away when something hit her back and tackled her to the ground. „INUYASHA YOU JERK!!!! WOULD YOU STOP IT?!?!?!?!" she tried to get up but Inuyasha who happened to sit on her back was too heavy. „You fat pig..."
„Nani?! Want me to let you see how muscular I am?" Inuyasha grinned evilly but nearly fell off of Kagome when she kicked his back. „Oww...."
„No, thank you very much. Why should I want to see you, bastard?" Kagome felt really uncomfortable with Inuyasha on her back and the hard floor under her...
„Cuz you are my little beloved fiancée. Have you ever thought about what always happen between men and women after wedding?" he asked in a husky voice and smirked when she felt her battle aura.
„Get..off..of..me..you..fat..pig.." Kagome kept kicking his back. Inuyasha growled deeply, he started to get fustrated and grabbed her waist to turn her onto her back. Kagome felt his hands on her waist and was about to kick harder but suddenly she find herself staring into his amber eyes. 'Wha... Again... His beautiful eyes... I want to stare into them forever... WHAT?? Stop it!!' She felt like she wanted to cry. „Inuyasha why can't you just leave me alone? A lot of prettier girl running on the beach and waiting for someone to take them? Why me? What did I do to you? Why can't you leave me alone?"
Inuyasha stared into her eyes. 'Doeas she really hate me thet much?' He studied her face, her rosy lips, her beautiful brown eyes, her silky black hair. She was beautiful but of course there were some girl who was prettier then her... However he didn't want them. He wanted Kagome... 'What did you do to me stupid bitch?' He stared at her for a few more moments and the grinned evilly... as usual... „Because you are the one who ever refused me... That's why I will make you mine sooner or later."
Kagome looked straight into his amber eyes and noticed some strange glint in them. She didn't care. Her eyes burnt with anger and she clenched her fists. 'Why can't he understand? We have to marry for a life but he didin't mind because..!! He can't be that stupid!!!'
She saw Inuyasha's grin grew wider with her anger and she closed her eyes to calm herself down.. at least a little... But suddenly she felt sometehing warm touched her lips. Her eyes opened up in an instant and widened in shock as she realized Inuyasha was kissing her. She blushed and tried to push him away but he grabbed her wrists and held them in pace.
She didn't know if her heart stopped or pounded faster.His lips was warm, his kiss was gentle. She tried to free herself but he didn't let her. Inuyasha pulled away and looked into her eyes before a victorious grin crept onto his face. „I won the today morning's match." He said, still holding her wrists.
„Let me go and I will show you who is the real winner." Kagome hissed like a cat. He held her wrists and she couldn't do anything. That was humiliating.
„Ok." Inuyasha released her wrists and jumped off of her in an instant, she didin't even have time to punch or slap him.
„INUYASHA, YOU WILL DIE!!!!!" Kagome ran after him and tried to kick him but he dodged it. Inuyasha laughed like an idiot while Kagome yelled with great anger.
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Miroku looked at Inuyasha and then Kagome... That wasn't too difficult to tell what could have happened... Kagome glared at him from time to time and and Inuyasha winked at her and grinned every time he caught her glance. Miroku and Sango watched the two for a long time and it was getting scary...
Kagome looked at Miroku and noticed his fearful glance. „What?"
A sweatdrop appeared behind Miroku's head as she tried to smile. „Nothing, really nothing." They all went back to eat. There was a uncomfortable silence. Suddenly Inuyasha get a great idea and nudged Kagome while she drunk...
A shriek, a crash and man's yell was heard...
And the whole day went like that...
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Kagome stomped off of the hotel and sat down onto the stairs. „Inuyasha yu jerk. I will never... NEVER marry him. I won't be able to live like this" She wanted to cry. But this wasn't Inuyasha... she sisn't know herself what she wanted... Suddenly she heard music and her eyes lit up with happiness. She ran back into the hotel and flew into Sango's and Miroku's room.
„Sango...I have... a great... great idea..." she said breathlessly from the running. She didn't even noticed Sango's blush as she pushed herself off of Miroku's lap.
„And what would it be?" she asked suspiciously.
Kagome clapped her hands together and grinned widely. „Wanna dance?"
Sango stood up, grabbed the staring Miroku's collar and throw him off of the room. „Get Inuyasha!" With that she shut the door in front of him. A sweatdrop appeared behind Miroku's head but Kagome's words slowly sank into his mind... He grinned and ran to get Inuyasha.
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„COME OUT, DAMNIT!!!! HOW LONG DOES IT TAKE TO YOU TO DRESS UP?!?!" yelled a very angry Inuyasha as he banged Sano's and Miroku's door.
Sango made a worried face and turned to Kagome with a questioning face. Kagome rolled her eyes and stepped to the door. „Sorry, Kagome isn't at home at the moment. Please left you message after the pips. Thank you!"
Sango snorted and burst out laughing. Kagome soon joined her as she heard Inuyasha kicked something and cursed loudly. Sango wipped the tears away fromthe corner of her eyes and smiled at Kagome. „You know you are cruel...."
„I will make sure Inuyasha don't want me to make his." Said Kagome smugly and continued to try on some clothes. She turned around in front of the mirror and looked at herself. She let her wavy hair down and it reached the middle of her back. She put on a light blue make up and she wore a pair od tight jeans with a light blue tanktop. It was simple but she admitted thet she looked really pretty in them.
Sango stepped out of the bathroom with a hair drier in her hand.. She was almost ready. She looked at her friend and a huge smile appeared on her face. „Wow kagome, you look beautiful."
Kagome smiled sweetly „Thank you." Studied Sango up and down. Sho wore a pair of white ducks and a pale pink tanktop. „You look pretty yourself." She winked at Sango „Miroku will craze for you"
Sango blushed and mumbled something about Inuyasha under her breath but Kagome didn't want to notice it.
„Let's go!" They shrieked cheerfully and stormed out of the room.
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Inuyasha looked very angry, his ears faltted on his skull and he growled deeply. Miroku looked at him as they headed toward the dance club „Inuyasha, calm down! Girls need time to get ready."
Inuyasha glared at him and continued stomping like it was no tomorrow. „Calm down?? She made fun of me!!"
„Like it usually doesn't happen every day..." mumbled Miroku but Inuyasha could hear him very well. Inuyasha snorted and stopped.
„What do you mean?"
„Nothing, my dear freind nothing..." Miroku rolled his eyes „Will we get drunk?" he asked with a playful grin
„Sure!" Inuyasha grinned evilly...
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Kagome and Sango giggled cheerfully after a quick entrance with the help of a little smile to the guards. It was really good sometimes to be a girl... a nice girl...
Kagome grinned like an idiot even she didn't drink anything [yet.. hehhehh evil grin ] „Wanna dance or find the boys?" she yelled into Sango's ears. They couldn't hear each other beacuse of the loud music. Sango made a face and laughed.
„Who cares about the boys?" she said dragging Kagome toward the dancingfloor. Kagome gladly followed her and started to dance. As they reached to middle of the dance floor they started to dance. Their body moved with the music perfectly. The guys around them stared like idiots...almost drooling.
„Who will get a boy quicker?" Kagome winked at Sango and started to swing her hips a little more. Suddenly she felt hads on her hips and someone's hot breath on her ear...
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I hope you like it, R&R. I didn't do that for get more-more-more reviews I just wanted to get reviews from readers who didn't write yet rolls her eyes
I will answer you reviews, I swear, but now I have to go to sleep glare at her mom
Your reviews:
Chrisy12: YAY! you updated! and i loved it! but kikyo sleeping with naraku? EW! that's gross! anyway wright more a.s.a.p.!
Mmiray: That was just to make Kikyou more „popular" grins evilly
Crazy-Kitsune: Yay! You updated! Inu plushie for you! gives mmiray Inu plushie
lol kit totally loves your story, maybe as far as obsessed.
Who is kit kidding, she newer gets obsessed. huggles kiba
Ok so kiba is an exception...
lol
keep writing
-kit
Mmiray: Oo Kiba? Huh? Did I miss something? (I hope I am not an idiot...) Thank you for the plushie hug
Shamanic Destiny: heeheheehee alarm clocks if I do say so tend to be Kagome's weapon of choice...and i should take a few pointers...when used in the right way they can be very potent weapons. Oh well I liked the new chappie please update soon I can't wait to find out what happens
Mmiray: grin Maybe I will use your weapon-idea, it is very good... hehheh...
Ceaseless Cloudy Days: LOL, that was hot. TT I'm such a pervert, I'm so sorry. XD But PLEASE continue! I don't care about the mistakes!! It's so...funny...and hot...LOL. XD XD
Mmiray: The only one pervert here is me... smirk
Remix-69er: love your story..but why is it taking soo long for kagome to admit he3r feelins for inuyasha?
Mmiray: Cuz my story is more ineteresting in that way
Lil-missa: i love it! i really really do, one of my favs...
Mmiray: I am glad
StarLightKagome: I love it! But I hate naraku he's so...creepy...and how could Kikyo do it with him!?!?! That's nasty...but I guess it DOES suit her...anyways update soon! I have Yaida Hitomi stuck in my head! Er! (She's a japanese rock/pop singer) woops I gotta go now and get ready for school!
Kat
Mmiray: I hate them both and they will... oops... nearly slipped out of my mouth... (I LOVE THE „WOLF'S RAIN"'S OPENING!!!!!!! drooling )
Doggie-love: I luved it! I hope you update soon! This is like my fav. story since last month, or was it 2 months ago, I don't know. Anyway, DIE JOJOBLOND. JKS. Update soon. (Die Kikyo!)
Mmiray: Thank you very much. Hey! Don't dare to touch JojoBlond or I won't update!! wary
(But you are one of my favourite reader if an author can say that )
Suzie: 0mg!! that was so good!! u have 2 write more!! i want to read more!! plz hurry up w/ another chapter! kk?!
Mmiray: Ok
Eternalhappiness: funny! lol
please update-
Mmiray: hai!
Manuca: heyas!!
omg totally awesome cool layout!I liked the end better,heheh he LIKES her!!yay!!soo fluffy!!waa please update!
see yaa round!
Mmiray: Of course he is. But I won't let them be happy too easily evil grin
Makeyourselfduo: drunk inu! how amusing...
sleazy kikyo, not surprising...
o yea with the ashley lost her bet thing a girl i know bet that i would be bored till the end of time, she's so mean!
please continue!
Rori
Mmiray: Drunk Inu will be more amusing in the next chapter Kikyo... pfff.... --
K chan: NO! YOU STOPPED WRITING! cries PLZ UPDATE SOON!
Mmiray: Sumimasen TT
Hungarian Tiger: Rövid megjegyzés a történet KIRÁLY tegnap este már végigolvastam, de éjfél körül kezd az anyám életveszélyes lénnyé vállni úgyhogy a megjegyzést csak ma tudtam elkészíteni. Csuda egy házaspárt csináltál a két szegény párából, teljesen egymásba vannak zúgva és nem tudják bevallani hehehe. Hát mivel kérted hogy segítsek a nyelvtannal ezét ideje hogy kitérjek erre a részre, két problémát találtan, az egyik az, hogy szinte félsz a did szó alkalmazásától, illetve wan egy kis problémád a melléknévképzõkkel.
Mmiray: Már korábban is válaszoltam volna csak egy a nyomi freemail (meg ne kérdezd miért) nem jelezte hogy írtál... hmmm... Mind1. Köszönöm, most hogy nyári szünet én is végigolvasom majd a te fanficedet. Na igen mindig is vonzottak az ilyen helyzetek (talán innen ered a nagy Ranma Årület is ehheehe...) Kicsit kerge meg merész fantáziájú vagyok de hát istenem... Nem tudom hogy ismered a www.manga.hu oldalt, ha van valami én a nap 24 órájából 25öt ott töltök a fórumon Mira néven az offtopicban.
A „did"-tÅl pedig tényleg rettegek...
Katie Keita: Hi!
I just LOVED ur fanfiction, i love the style!
it's perfect!!, well there's a little grammar error but it' still perfect , i love it
i cant wait till thenext chapter!
Mmiray: Thanx!
Luna-miko: Funny chapter...Pleaz Pleaz Update! Keep up the good work!
Mmiray: Hai
Snug: It's alright. I think it would be better if you used a little more Japanese words though. Thanx
Mmiray: I knew a lot but I am not sure others will undestand. I don't want to mix english and japanese.
ChibiKenshin6490: Great story. Please update ASAP!
Mmiray: Hai
Denaliyasha: This is cute! I really like this story! :D I loved the Kikyou's Puppy suntan lotion! I think Kikyou should get stuck with Naraku and Kouga... should be left all alone. Laughs maniacally
Keep up the good work!
Mmiray: Great idea grins evilly and Hai
Remix-69er: well if you would update more offten there would be more reviews!
Mmiray: More review is not the point. I just want more READERS to review. (But with that of course I would get more reviews too rolls her eyes )
Seida02: Please update! U must! So what if it's seems like it's patheic! I'm much worse! I have 14 chapters and only 50 reviews letting u know! Please check out my stories!
Mmiray: I will read and review them
...: umm why do you want more reviews? anyways here's one and i luv you story
Mmiray: I was an idiot to say I haven't gor enough review.. Once more I wanted more READERS to review. (and my „I-won't-update-plan" worked very well evil grin )
Reviewer: You're pathetic. 170 reviews is a lot. God, you've got to be the most stupidest writer in the world to go around demanding reviews. No offense, but stop acting all hostile.
Mmiray: sigh
Doggie-love: NOO!
Please continue! I've been waiting like...more than 1 month for the next chapter!! My birthday is on Friday! Can you post it then? Please continue!
Mmiray: As you wish and happy birthday! hug, peck
Suzie: Wut a great chapter. rolls eyes Thats not what I meant! You have enough already, and authors shouldn't write 4 reviews
Mmiray: ?? Oo
Suzie: I can't believe how greedy u r being! While u wait 4 those reviews that u crave so badly, why don't u actually check ur spelling on that chap. It doesn't matter if u r sry or not! Don't b so greedy
Mmiray: ... :P
InuYashaKagome99: what!
I wanted my chapter 16 (crying) r u happy now u got almost 200 reviews (some more cryin) I love your story i have been reading it since the first day PLEASE PLEASE OH PLEASE WRITE OH MIGHT LORD MMIRAY!
Mmiray: LORD?? Oo faints
Chrisy: it's going to be kouga isn't it? if so then that's going to be a great fight when inuyasha see's them.and if not...then just forget everything i just said! XD more ASAP!
Mmiray: Who is Kouga? innocent puppy dog eyes
Shamanic Destiny: oh is the guy thats dancing with her going to be Inuyasha...i sure hope so! loved the chapter and can't wait for the next one!
Mmiray: Who knows? Shrug (me)
Ceaseless Cloudy Days: grins that was hot. You're pretty good for somebody who doesn't speak English as their first language. Continue ASAP!
Mmiray: Thank you very much! happy
Anglgurlseara: hey i really like this story i hope you continue writing it. please send me the updated chapters and whatever you continue writing. Thanks
Mmiray: Ok... If I won't forget...
ChibiKenshin6490: Great Story! Hope you update soon!
Mmiray: Hai
Kikyouhater: Wow! Great story! update soon! and kill Kikyo!-
Mmiray: Maybe.... At the and... evil grin
StartLightKagome: NO! UPDATE NOW I COMAND YOU! Pulls out a bow and arrow NOW!
Mmiray: Mmiray's eyes widened in fear... She shrieked at started to run away as fast as she could OK! OK! OK! OK! A next chappie is almos ready!!!!! KYAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Makeyourselfduo: parents are evil!
well that was an amusing chapter,
starts begging please write more!
Rori
Mmiray: I must, otherwise StarLightKagome will kill me Oo
Snug: That really didn't make sense, but whatever, this fic is worth reading so yeah. Thanx.
Mmiray: I won't mix english with japanese. Gomen. Hmph
Inuyasha1990: LOL this is so funy...the way they keep on trying to kill each other LOL Keep writing these good chappies! GOOD LUCK!
Mmiray: Thank you very much... They will never change but you know somewhat I have to done my fanfic... but not yet grin
Lina: luv it! this chapter was sort've funny
Mmiray: Arigatou
?The author? :Snug... take a deep breath ... thank you very much you are so kind... glare
Mmiray: NANI??? Oo
XsangoX: i really really liked it...man, i was so bored until i saw your fanfic summary so i decided that i would read it. -
Mmiray: Arigatou. (I can't change the summary!!!!! KYAAA!!!! It didn't work!!! (...hate him more than anyone !!IN!! the Earth...)
XsangoX: wow, u speak another language...wait i speak another language too. where are you from? well anyways, this chappie was really good and i hope you will update asap -
Mmiray: I am hungarian (like Hunagrian Tiger too who write me a review )
AngelofLight: NO DAMN CLIFFYS!please write more i love this fic and i wana know what happeneds!
Mmiray: An angel shouldn't curse. grin Anyway (finally once) I will update SOON. Yay!