My husband? NO! My greatest enemy! Chapter 17: When a party goes wrong, an inuyasha fanfic

My husband? NO! My biggest enemy!!

By Mmiray

I don't own Inuyasha and sorry for mistakes!

Uh... oh... err... (A shoe hit my head what soon followeb by a clock, a table, a hammer etc...) OK!! I know I have promised. SORRY!! I was lazy, and I have a boyfriend (believe it or not, he is my first) so I didn't have so much time. (blush) But it's scholltime again and he lives 200 km away from me so we can meet only on the weekend TT I love him soo much... uh... sorry... Back to the fiction ;;

Chapter 16 „When a party goes wrong"

Kagome felt hands on her hips and someone's hot breath touched her cheek and ear. She made a face. She could smell that this certain someone wasn't completly ok. His every breath was full of the smell of the alcohol.

'Inuyasha?' Kagome's eyes widened at this thought and she stopped dancing... And there came the answer to her question: when she stopped the man behind her started to growl warningly. Kagome's face darkened because of her burning anger as she slowly turned around preparing to the worst. „Inuyasha you..."

Her sentence was cut off by the sight in front of her. Surely he was the most gorgeous sight ever. Maybe except Inuyasha. Inuyasha...

'Somehow he remind me Inuyasha! Thought Kagome as she stared at the man with wide eyes. He had long, silky looking black hair and beautiful violet eyes (what was foggy from the alcohol at the moment) and had a pretty muscular body, what anyone could tell easily beacause of his muscular T-shirt.

The man grinned stupidly and took an unconfident step toward Kagome who quickly took two step back, nearly fell over her own leg. „Hello my dearest Kagome! Wanna dance with me?" He grinned like an idiot while Kagome studied him up and down with the widest eyes she could ever product.

'His face... His clothes... and voice!!' Someone softly tapped her shoulder and Kagome looked back at Sango who seemed just as shocked and confused as her.

„I would bet he is... but he can't be, can he..??" sked Sango loudly, through the music. Kagome didn't have a chance to answer when the man wrapped his arms around her and buried his face into her neck.

„Sango! Help me! Wha.. What are you doing?! COME BACK HERE YOU LITTLE TRAITOR!!" but it it had no use. „Let me go you bastard!! What the hell do you think you are doing?!?!" Kagome pushed him away and slapped him with all of her strength. The man stepped back and blinked dumbly at her and tried to study her face... as if a drunken man can see anything, not just look out of his head.

The same grin appeared on his face as before. „You know the more you foght is the more I enjoy this game, my dear fiancée" with that he grabbed her arm painfully and shoved her to the wall not-so-gently. Kagome closed her eyes for a moment but soon opened them as she felt him kissing her neck.

It sent shivers down her spine and his words slowly sank into her mind. The sudden realization was stronger than anything. That time her whole body shooked but not from the pleasure, but from the anger. „Inu...yasha..."

The man pulled back and blinked down at the woman whom eyes were closed, hands cleched and eyebrows twitching dangerously but in that state he didn't notice any of this just when something hit his head and everything went black.

„Jerk."

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Sango slowly started to get bored with the idiot, hormone-drived man surrounding her, she broke, kicked and punched her way through them. Suddenly women's laugh hit her head and without seeing anything she could tell what have caused the laughing and giggling. „Houshi..." she hissed like a cat as the crowd of sluttish women in „little" pink clothes came into her sight.

She couldn't decide if she should kill her favourite boyfriend there and then or torture him to death. Suddenly an evil grin plasted on her face and she made her way roughly though the circle of women. Then she could hear what was Miroku saying.

„... I am lonely, poor man, who don't want big things. I just want to love and being loved. You, the crown of the creation, a the littlle shining diamond of this dark and cold world, you are the medicine for my illness. Women are such delicate creatures, but still they are the only things to help a lonely and sad man like me. And the night is the ally of a man and a woman. Does anyone of you want me to show her-- „

„Good evening, Miroku! How are you?" Miroku froze in the middle of his speech This voice was familiar but strangely, no, suspiciously swet and gentle. He turned his head toward the voice, soul and body filled with hope but..

There she stood. In her whole reality, her angelic face was soo gentle, she smiled kindly down at him and her eyes... Her eyes promised him a slow and painful death. They were dark and if you look into them closely anough maybe you would be able to look the flames in them.

„Err... I... I am... fine... yeah... I am totally fine..." Miroku couldn't look away from her eyes and slowly fear started to fill his own ones. He tried his best to pull himself together and forced a weak smile onto his now „not-so-peaceful-and-perfect" face, but it soon faded away as the poisoned sweetness of Sango's voice reached his soul, his heart again.

„Great. I am glad. You know I am looking fo my boyfriend who happened to live me behind. You know him very well, he is a jerk isn't he? So would you please leave your fanclub behind for a sec and help me? Just a minute, I promise." Sango sent him and angelic smile and turned around, didn't even wait for his answer.

„Sure, my dearest Sango!" Miroku gulped, stood up and slowly followed Sango with the face of a condemned, following by the disappointed girl's whispering.

They went through the dance florr and ent outinto the garden. Sango stopped and didn't move, didn't even turn around to face with him. Miroku stood behind her, thinking of a good enough explanation. Sango's body shooked lightly and she whirled around with an unbelieveable speed, red aura glowing around her She clenched her fists into little balls. A sweatdrop appeared behind Miroku's head and he backed away just in time, before one of Sango's fists could hit him.

Sango's eyes widened from the surprise, she didn't expect it. She fell over because of her own buoyancy. Sango landed on her stomach and before she could realize what was happening Miroku wasstting on her back, trying to hide his huge victorius grin from her hot-tempered girlfriend.

„Let me go so I can kick your ass."

„No." Miroku crossed his arms in front of his chest and looked dwn at his defeated girlfriend.

„Let me go!" Sango practically yelled, everyone around them turned their way and small sweatdrops appeared behind their head.

„Relax Sango! Calm down, kitty!" said Miroku smiling like an angel and patted Sango's butt friendly.

„PERVERT!!!!!!!!"

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„Be a god little puppy and sleep here!" Kagome made a face as she stepped over the fainted Inuyasha and headed back to where she left Sango... Umm.. Where Sango left her. 'I can't believe she could do that!! She ran away, enjoying herself while I was playing with my lil' Inuyasha.' She thought sarcastically.

Kagome was so deep in her dream-land to how to kill Sango, she didn't even noticed that she was walking straight into the worst thing ever... She looked up, but too late, she bumped into someone and fell over, landing hard on her behind.

„I am...sorry..." her eyes widned as she noticed who she ran into. Again, she heard Inuyasha's almost worried voice as he told her to stay away from him.

„Look, what do we have here" said Naraku with a gentle smile and reached out his left hand to help her up. Kagome stared at his hand as if it was going to bite her.

Naraku laughed lightly at her but it was just as honest as his gentle smile from before. „Come on Kagome, or do you want to sit here all the night?"

Kagome's cheeks turned pink and took the offered hand, hardly made herself say 'thank you'. She raised and tried to pull her hand back but Naraku hold it strongly, lifted it to his mouth and kissed the back of her hand, but never look away from her chocolate brown eyes.

Kagome culdn't decide if she should blush and trying to stay calm or srceaming and slapping him with all her strength. But even if she could decide, she wasn't able to do anything. Naraku caught her with his blood-red eyes. There was a strange glint in them, something opposite of his gentle smile and silky voice. His eyes were cold and.... Cruel...?? But his words pulled Kagome back to the real world.

„You are beautiful tonight, as usual. Shall we dance?" He asked, still holding her hand strongly enough. It said clearly without words that he wouldn't let her go until she say yes to him.

„I.. err... umm..." Kagome's i sentence /i was cut off bye a sudden jerk what pulled her out of Naraku's hands.

„Oi, bastard! Who the hell do you think you are, grabbing MY woman's hand?!?!" Kagome felt strong arms wrapped around her shoulders and waist protectively and she was pulled to a strong chest. Somewhere she was glad but this stage wasn't so much better... She started to feel like a christmas present.

„hello Kouga! You know your arms are around me so I can't move... Would you please let me go? You know I have a little business" she siad, trying to stay calm.

„NO! Kagome, I'm sorry but I can't let you go with men around, all of them want you, drooling after you. The only way to save your innocent soul from them is to take you out of here. I will take you to my hotel room and you will stay with me."

A sweatdrop appeared behind Kagome's head and she looked up at Kouga as if he was an idiot. It was getting boring and men are soooo stupid. Kagome sighed and forced a bright sile onto her (now) angelic face.

„Sure, Kouga dear. I just want to go into the bathroom and make myself more beautiful to fit such a strong and handsome man like you."

„Uh... ok. I will wait for you here." Kouga immedietly let her go, but not before sent a death glare to Naraku what clearly said „my woman". Kagome had already disappeared in the crowd, rubbing her forehead and made a painful face. „Men are idiots." 'Now let's find that rotten traitor Sango.'

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Kikyou stood near the wall, scanning the dancing crowd for a certain someone. She wore a pair of pink high-heels, a little pink skirt with an even smaller pink top what showed everything what it supposed to hide.

Her eyes fell onto Narakuwho seemed to be alone... without Kagome... She clenched her fists andstomped his wy but suddenly tripped over someting (this time not her own legs) and fell over it.

„Ouch...!! What the fu-- her eyes widened as she reaized who she just fell ovr. But somehow this man was different. „Inuyasha?"

Inuyasha sat up and looked at Kikyou who now sat next to him. He blinked dumbly before a grin appeared on his face.

„Ki... Kikyou... Wanna dance wi... with me?" Kikyou studied him for a moment before she decided that he was Inuyasha and grinned mentally to herself.

She snuggled closer to Inuyasha who didn't seem to mind it, leaned to his ear and ket out a seductive, long, hot sigh before answered. „Yes of course, sweetie."

They walked to the dance floor, Inuyasha was bumping into everyone but probably he couldn't even feel it. In the middle of the dance floor Kikyou stopped, turned around, wrapped her arms around Inuyasha's neck and sterted to dance as close to him as she could.

They danced like this for a long time and the air between them was getting hotter. Inuyasha started to kiss her neck, didn't knew what he was doing in his state. Kikyou closed her eyes and grinned evilly. She leaned closer to his ears again.

„Don't you want to go somewhere more quiet?" she whispered seductively.

„Yeah.."

Kikyou grabbed Inuyasha's hadn and started to drag the drunken hanyou... human at moment... away. But suddenly he stopped and a familiar grin appeared on his face.

„What's the problm, Inuyashie?" Kikyou looked up at Inuyasha with lust-filled, half-closed eyes what supposed to be seductive but Inuyasha didn't pay attention. „Do you listen to me? INUYASHIE!!"

But it had no affect on him anymore, Inuyasha stared at one point and tried to pull his hand away nut Kikyou didn't let go that easily. She looked where he was staring at and a fustrated moan escaped her lips. 'Kagome!'

Kikyou tried to yank him away agonized. „Oww.. Come on sweetie! Shall we go?! I will ma-- „ She was cut off by Inuyasha who was getting impatient and pulled his hand away roughly.

Kikyou shrieked after him in a voice what a banshee would be jealous of, but the loud music overwhelmed her high-pitched voice. A new song started started, a very good and popular one and as the crowd started to dance wildly. Inuyasha disappeared from her sight.

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Kikyou stomped through everyone who get in her way until she reached the opposite end of the club and Naraku, his back facing with her.

„NARAKU YOU IDIOT!!"

Naraku lifted his eyebrows and turned around with a glass of water in his hand, to find Kikyou was standing behind him, eyes glowing with anger... with the anger of a spoilt goose.

„What are you doing here idiot?! While you are drinking you wine peacefully MY Inuyasha and that bitch are-- „

Naraku silenced her with a single glance. It wasn't a dangerous look,, his is face was emotionless and cold, his anger's only sign was his shaking hands. „Shut up. I am working on it." His voice was quiet and calm but Kikyou could hear him very well through the loud music.

„I can see! With a glass of wine in your hand?! Go NOW and get her, useless idiot!!"

The glass in Naraku's hand exploded and the shards lodged into Naraku's hand. Kikyou's anger turned into fear as blood mixed with the wine on the floor and glinted in the colorful dazzle lamp's light. She turned her hand away, wasn't able to stand Naraku's glare. Suddenly he grabbed her chin roughly and forced her to face with him. She could see her reflection in his blood.red eyes.

„What do you think, who you are, worthless whore?! I don't care about your little business!!" with that he turned around and walked away, seemd to be calm again.

„Where are you going?" asked Kikyou, her voice was shaking lightly.

„To get HER."

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Sango felt the two glasses of coctail started to make her mind foggy, but that didfn't meanshe was drunken. Just made her a little... umm... happier.... She was dancing wildly with Miroku, the people around them gave them place and was staring with wide eyes.

Suddenly Kagome's scream broke through the loud music. Sango immedietly stopped dancing and listened to the loud, long scream, the shrugged her shoulders and went back to her own business. She knew that scream very well, she had a lot time to get used to it. She could recognize it from it lengthand tone.

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„KYAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!" Kagome felt something hit her back, and she fell onto a table. She felt weight on her, she couldn't stand up, not even move. She felt hands on roaming up and down her sides and someone buried his face into the back of her neck. „Who the hell are you?!"

The certain someone moved off of her but just for a moment to grab her by her waist and turn her around so she was on her back then... and she could see his face... Kagome moaned to express that he was getting boring. „Inuyasha... Please kiss me and get off of me, be satisfied, feel like you win and leave me alone for the next five minutes!"

„Never... I won... won't be sati... satisfied that... easily... „ said Inuyasha

„Wow dear, you could say a whole sentence. It's pretty good from someone who can't even tell if he is a man or a woman." Said Kagome sarcastically. Inuyasha blinked down at her dumbly till her words slowly sank into his mind. He grinned and lowered his face to her ear.

„Want me... to show... show you how.. I know... that I'm a ma... man?" With that he closed his eyes and lickked her earlobe. Kagome froze dead in her track as she felt something wet touched her ear.

'Is he...? IS HE..?!' „STOP IT!!" she struggled against him, but Inuyasha's weight and strength was too much. He slowly made his way down her neck and back up to her face, pulled back for a moment to look into her eyes, see the anger in them and laugh at her but... He nearly fell back from the sight.

Kagome felt as he planted hot, open-mouthed kisses along her neck and slowly back up to her face. Her whole body shivered from the sensation, as she felt and realized his body pressed against hers. 'What is he doing to me...? He is just a perverted bastard, a hormone-drived jerk!' Her eyes opened wide at this thought and filled with tears of the powerless anger. 'Yes, maybe it feel good but I am NOT a doll to drag around and play with. He just want to make me his, he said so!!' Anger filled her whole soul. She felt Inuyasha pulled back and looked into her eyes.

He backed away from the sight and stared at her with wide eyes.. Her rosy lips shaking lightly, her eyes filled with tears but not cuz she was sad. Painful anger radiated from her, he could almost feel as if it was surrounding and choking him. Inuyasha stared at her confused and immedietly let her go. He started to get out of his drunken state and he could tell that something wasn't good.

Kagome stood up and turned her back to him, tilted her head forward to cover her face with her hair. Inuyasha reached out and touched her shoulder lightly. In that moment Kagome spun around, looked straight into his eyes for a few moments, a lonely teardrop ran down her cheek but soon followed by another...

„Kago...me... what's the prob... prob... problem..?"

„NOTHING!!" Kagome slapped Inuyasha as hard as she could, sent him a last painful glance and ran away leaving the drunken, dizzy Inuyasha man behind.

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Kagome ran back to the dance floor, still looking for Sango. She had to tell all of this to someone. Tears ran down down her cheeks in narrow streams and she wipped them away angrily. She supposed to enjoy herself tonight... But she couldn't be cheerful or happy. The dance even didn't help her. She sighed again, looking around once more for Sango, unsuccesfully, of course.

'I think I should leave...' she was about to exit the club when she felt hands on her hips again. Kagome whirled around, almost yelled into... Naraku's face. She sighed in relief and didn't even notice that she was staring into his eyes. Just when Naraku's words pulled her back to the Earth.

„Waht are you looking at?" he asked and gently lifted one of his hands to her cheek and wipped a teardrop away. Kagoe blushed and again, the alarms bells rang in her head and she pulled back from his gentle but still cold touch. Without Kagome noticing, Naraku's eyes narrowed but when he spoke up his voice was still silky. „Can I ask you for a dance?"

„Umm... I..." Kagome looked up at him straight in the eyes. She decided. She would reject him now, once and for all. And that was the moment she noticed Inuyasha stepped in and looked around dumbly. Her eyes narrowed, new tears welled up in them but she didn't let them escape. She turned back to Naraku and smiled brightly at him. „Yes, C'mon!" with that she practically pulled him onto the dance floor.

Naraku saw everything and smiled. But this smile told anything... It was evil...

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Sango suddenly stopped as her eyes fell onto something. She rubbed her eyes to make sure she was seeing what she thought she was seeing. But there they were. Naraku and Kagome, dancing wildly, bodies pressed to each other.

It made her feel sick. Sango amde her way out of the dance floor to find Inuyasha before it's too late. It was very difficult, people were dancing and jumping like maniacals and she near fell down as they bumped into her from every direction.

„Owwww..." her whole body hurt when she could finally get out. And there he sat... A half filled glass of coctail in his hand and a lot of empty on the table near him. He was laughing like he was a lunatic and whistled after evrey girl who passed him... and some long-haired men to who sent him strange looks.

Sango ran to him and started to yank his T-shirt roughly. „Inuyasha!! You have to some!! NOW!!"

Inuyasha blinked at her and an intelligent smile crept on his face. „I will... go any...anywhere with... you and I will... I will show you what... a bad bo.. boy I am." Sango stared at him with wide eyes. Probably he didn't recognize her... She rubbed her forehead and tried to sty calm but it had no use.

„NO!! Listen you idiot: Kagome-is-dancing-with-Naraku. And they doing it wildly and... and... Ow Inuyasha, you muste help her before she do something what she will regret!"

„I am sorry... but I don't like... Nara... Nara... Naraku so I won... won't join them."

„NO!! WHO SAID YOU TO JOIN THEM?!?! YOU HAVE TO b SAVE /b KAGOME!! YOU ARE HER FIANCÉE!! YOU ARE THE MAN!!!!!!"

There was an hot glint in Inuyasha's eyes as he jumped up. He pounced his glass to the table and it shattered into to peaces. But Inuyasha didn't notice. „I WILL SHOW WHAT A MAN I AM!!! JUST LOOK AT ME!!!!" yelled Inuyasha but it was needless, everybody watched him with wide eyes. He jumped onto a table, laughing maniacally and started to dance. Women stopped everywhere and stared at him drooling. And this was when everything went wrong...

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A little cliffy... a dozen of shoes hits my head but I am still grinning

I know you all hate me now but I promise you will love the next chapter

PLEASE DON'T KILL MEEEEE!!!!!!!!! hide behind Doggie-love I promise I won't write anymore depressive chapters... but it was necessery for the shake of the next chapters!! I think te whole story will be 18-22 chapters long but I don't know yet. And the pairing is still INUYASHA-KAGOME!!!! I wrote this chappie onto a paper first and it is not near the end of the original chapter, I made it originally double that lenght but I have wrote this rotten 9 page for three days near the school so I think I will die after I post it to

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Now the answers:

Kaoru4: UPDATE SOON! MORE INKAG FLUFF! PLEASE!

Mmiray: Uhh... Inthe next chapter. You will love it, I promise!

AlleyWings: lol who? They are so in for it! lol Inu really needs to stop being such a... such a... well i'm not sure what he is but he really needs to do something about it! lol i love it! Lol

Mmiray: Thank you very much! I am very happy when I get reviews like yours

Doggie-Love: Thanx for the greeting! Anyways, I loved it! This is like the best fanfiction I ever read! I'm not kidding. There's another fanficton I like. It's called "What I Did For Love". It isn't a story about an anime though. It's about k-pop artists. So dramatic! I cried like, on every chapter!! JOKES! Anyways, I hope you update soon! I'm dying to read it!!

Mmiray: I am really sorry!! TT I hope you liked this one too

Werewolf212: PLEASE UPDATE SON
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Mmiray: Uhh..... --

JojoBlond: good chapter! i bet that the guy who grabbed Kagome at the end was Naraku. please update soon!!

Mmiray: You lost the bet grin You owe me something evil grin

Kit-Pudding: NO! THATS THE WORST CLIFFY I HAVE EVER SEEN! please write more PLEASE.

Mmiray: ;; sorry...

FANG SISTER 1 aka:RAY : More..Please!

Mmiray: As you wish

Sarah: Ah! You are absolutely TORTURING me! Hurry up and finish it soon! I love your story so if you don't finish it soon, I'll...I'll...whack your head with a stick! You should have lots of time to finish it anyways. It's summer break!

Mmiray: I will bite you warning glare (just kiddin, thanx for the review)

PreciousBlood: OO...speechlessif my mom ever said that her company was first I would've blew up in her face saying "Well...obviously, Your company is more important than me and my happiness. Congratulations, Mother, you've just managed to give Pond Scum a new name." I cannot stand parents that put thier work before thier families. My mom does to, but I've rarely even talk to her(no conversations. non. zip. nada. only calls for dinner and etc.)So I've rarely faught w/ her...and the part w/ Inuyasha and him trying to hold on to me(unbutton his wet shirt part.) If someone did that to me, I'd step back, pull my shoulder strap down, rip the hem of my dress and scream "RAPE!" and start crying(fake of course) Ha ha. That should teach them a lesson or two. You could also do this at school to the guy that keeps on bothering you...but i wouldn't recommend it unless you were desprate...

Mmiray: rolling on the floor and laughing I think I will use this idea later!! :D

Precious Blood: Totally agree w/ you about Kik/Inu pairings. They suck. Hate them. She should just get over him cuz she's never gonna have him back in the episodes. Stupid living un-dead whore. She's nothing but dirt under our feet...literally.. ish...

Mmiray: I like you more and more

Unseed Jade Eyed Wolf: I love this story i read it when first wrote then i lost i was so pissed cause i couldnt find it and here iit . i am so glad you catch inu and kag at their best fighting . lol do you think you could read my story rebellious soldiers

Mmiray: Of course, sorry, I will read it tomorrow (I have enough of fanfics for nÅ±tonight )

K chan: cries I LOVE YOUR STORY!! PLZ UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN!YOU ROCK!

Mmiray: hide behind Doggie-love again... SORRY!!!

AngeloflLight: lol your right

Mmiray: Of course I am. smug

Rain the Godess of the c: I love this story it sounds like it should be a funny romance movie or some thing I hope that the guy that kagome is dance with is inuyasha and not naraku or koga uh hold on I have to kill naraku once and for all( pulls out a gun) hello naraku die bastard die(shoot the gun repeatly) all crap i ran out of bullets ah
Mmiray save me

Mmiray: give her a huge boksz of bullets Kill him instead of me too, you know I can't do this, I am tha author... At least I can't do this yet. BWHAHAHAHAHA!!!! laughs maniacally

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Mmiray: Thank you. It's good to know but your review was the 1# why I didn't update. My confidence fell to 0. -- I needed a half month to get over it.. and I spent the other half with my boyfriend

Akiraton: Love The Story! plz update soon!-

Mmiray: Thank you and sorry ;

Courtney: Its great but the spelling isnt that good.
But the story is WONDERFUL!!

Mmiray: Thank you! I am learning, and I hope I am getting better

Pnay-princess: Ha-ha. Kikyo is the leader of the InuYasha Fan Club? eye rolls She DOES kinda dressed like a slut. I like your story so far!!

Mmiray: Yeah, it shows off very well how much I love Kikyou grins evilly Thanx

LiquidFusion38: This is by far my favorite story that I have read so far. Pleasee update soon. I'm adding you to my favorite author and my favorite story list. Keep it coming :).

Mmiray: THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!! hug

Mooshy: hey, are you going to be putting another chapter up her soon? The story ish great.. no.. aweosme! but what can be a great story with no more chapters ;;?

Mmiray: I am working on them. Sorry for made you waiting TT

lilangelyuna ) : sobbing WHY DID YOU STOP?! YOU WERE ON SUCH A GOOD PART! PLEASE UPDATE SOON OR I WILL DIE! I MEAN, LOOK! YOU ALREADY MADE CRY! SUDDENLY SMILES You're a great writer and I absolutely LOVE your story! E-mail me when you update, k? Ja!

Mmiary: took a step back Ok.. OO (I will send you the new chappie in e-mail )

Chibikins: oh please please please update soon! your story is wonderful! nad so much fun to read! hope theres more fluff in the next chapter!

Chibikins

Mmiray: Not in this chapter, it's a little more serious but it will be in the next chappie as I said earlier.

StarLightKagome: Yes, that IS right! StarLight Kagome WILL kill you if you don't update! D not to put any stress on you or anything Lol. Keeps her bow and arrows near j.i.c. He he, now we wouldn't watn StarLightKagoem to find her bow and arrows would we? I'm jsut playin! I'm not going to kill you! (Yet) I'm not that mean! (THAT) Update soon okay! Smiles at her bow and arrows also if you're hungarian, do hungarians speak english? Or are you just really good at it?

Mmiray: Yeah, in Hungary people can't pass high school without an very high level english exam what's called „middle-level language exam" (I think I can translate it like this) But we can take german exam so we don't have to take the english one. We can choose. But almost everyone can speak english more or less. But I am really godd at it in my age. Did you watch the olimpic games? There was a lot of hungarian dopping-case. --

SORRY!! PLEASE DON'T KILL ME!!!!!!! Uhh... If you kill me I won't finish my fanfic!! warning glare

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Mmiray: I AM REALLY SORRY!!!!!!! PLEASE FORGIVE ME!!!!!! TT

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See what happens when you update? Good things. Wonderful things. Marvelous things.

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Remember: Updating is good. Updating is your friend. So do it. :) XD :P

Mmiray: munching on the cookies Thank you and sorry

OO .... Baka laughs lol

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Mmiray: SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Doggie-love: I forgive you. I just hope you update soon. Thnx.

Mmiray: Thank you! Now here I am for you for you till the next summer break

Akiraton: i was so happy to c 17 but it was an author's note...--...well plz update son!! thx 4 the pix again! mine was blury and urs were clear! arigatou!

Mmiray: You are welcome I send this pic to every reader who write me a mail

Sorry!!

AngeloflLight: its ok but when you do update i will be expecting a long chappy (j/k). once again dont worry about it but update as soon as you can. when ever that may be

Mmiray: Thank you very much! (hugs AngeloflLight and kiss him/her on the cheek) Yeah, it's a nine page long chapter in word with 12 sized letters. Is it long enough?

Eternalhappiness: aw!
yur story is really really good.
but when you come can you please
please update very soon-

Mmiray: Sorry.. TT TT TT

KenshinLover45: E! This story kicks ass! Update soon!

Mmiray: (sigh) --

Tidna: thats ok

Mmiray: Thanx.

Crazy-inu-chick: aww i hope u get all ur problems settled. and i just wanna wish u a good day for what ever day u decide to read this review

Mmiray: Thank you ver very very much! Just to read this reviews made me feel like a lot better. (hug)

Wateva: awsome story. I'm not goin to start buggin u 2 write but it would be nice if u did. It's a great story and should be continued. Just one thing...please don't make kagome get drunk. i hate it when ppl do that. inuyasha can get drunk just not kagome. it happens in too many fics.

Mmiray: As you wish

Nii: NO!yet another cliffy
NU!

Mmiray: (grins like an idiot)

Makeyourselfduo: your forgiven.
as long as you update imeadeitly afterwards! starts to cackle maniacally
Rori

Mmiray: (runs for her life) Asd the school dtarted I did it!!! Into my excercise book and I had to type it too

Battousai-frk ) : i'm lovin' it so far. continue writing. it's not good. it's great

Mmiray: Thank you and sorry! ;;

citiegrl ) : i'm loving it so far continue writing

Mmiray: SORRY SORRY SORRY TT

Keiko : oh this is so kawaii and romantic

Mmiray: Arigatou

battousai-frk ) : ah update or else i'll hunt you down. i'm loving the story and i want to know what happens next. which guy is it? you evil cliffhanger writer! update lots. please please please and quick!

Mmiray: (gulp) I AM SO SORRY!!! GOMEN NE!!!!! TT

Mmiray: I will bite you (wary)

battousai-frk ) : update or else i'l kill you

Mmiray: Come on, just try it! (evil grin and long, sharp nails) ((It just came my mind, my friend always calles me Miraneko-chan cuz Mira is my other nickname and every friend of mine say sooner or later that I am a cat))

battousai-frk ) : update or i'll kill you and

Mmiray: (challenging grin) and? :)

CRAZYPERSON: Please update fast, I really like this story

Mmiray: Thank you and sorry ;;

inukagfan13 ) : write more soon please!

Mmiray: SORRY SORRY SORRY TT

Silvia165 : this reminds me of till death do us part but still different in some odd way anyway update a.s.a.p

Mmiray: the only thing what's the same in them is that they have to marry for the shake of the company. Nothing else. It's my story from the start to the end (smug)

angelic-kuti: update already!

Mmiray: When you wrote the review I started to write this chapter

Aoi senshi: wahh plz continue ! its great!!

Mmiray: As you wish

StarLightKagome: Awe T.T you're making us wait MORE?!?! ( I hope everythign works out so you can update!

Mmiray: Everything worked out and I am very happy in my own little pink world (no, I hate those UV-pink stuffs )

Lana: you have to write more please

Mmiray: Ok

Sessisammainmine: please right soon! all my favorite people have stoped writing, and im now desperate!

Mmiray: Be happy!! (If you can be happy because of this chappie ;;)

I think my next reviews will be 'Yay, you've updated' and 'Kagome is dancing wildly with Naraku and Inuyasha kissing Kikyou's neck?! YOU HAVE NO SHAME!! YOU MADE ME SICK!!! YOU SHOULD DIE AND BURN INTO ASHES!!" (grin)

Now, finally I am ready!!!!!!! YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Happy