Solaceon Contest: Rewrite to My Version

Me: Part 2.

Dawn: Yay.

Part 2

Marian said, "Now that the 1st round is over, it's time for the 2nd round. Here are the coordinators that made it." Pictures were appearing fast.

Back in the room, 7 coordinators were shown. Kenny already made it in 6th place. Dawn hoped and prayed it was her. Jessilina was so worried that she wouldn't make it.

The last picture finally showed. It was Jessilina. Dawn was shocked for she didn't make it, again! Her head was down without anyone seeing her eyes. (Of course there's the cute pisture of Dawn's head down with Kenny on the side looking at her. XDDDD) Kenny said trying to cheer her up, "Dawn. I..."

Before he could finish, she ran away. "Dawn," said Ambipom.

Kenny thought, I can't believe she didn't make it again. I should do something. Poor Dawn. Why am I thinking to myself... Dawn. He ran down to Marian. Marian was confused and said, "Why are you here? It's not even you're turn yet." "I know and I'm really sorry. But can you switch my place with Dawn?" asked Kenny tired from the running. (I think he would do anything for Dawn's happiness. Kawaii/Cute! XDDD) "Why?" said Marian confused. "I can't explain. Please!" Mr. Contesta said, "That is very loyal to a fellow coordinator. I think we should do it." Mr. Sukizo said, "Truely remarkable." Nurse Joy said, "Yes indeed. Very loyal." Marian finally gave in and said, "Ok. Please go warn her." Everyone in the crowd was shocked. Even Ash and Brock. (Take that Ikarishippers!! Penguinshippers UNITE!! Penguinshipping FOREVER AND EVER AND EVER!! Well at least til the end of time) "Thank you very much. I will warn her," said Kenny bowing down.

He ran to find Dawn. The match ups were already up and Dawn was battling first with Jessilina. He had to hurry. Kenny thought, Dawn. Where are you? It's your time to shine. Where are you?! Please be safe.

He shouted as he came to a hault in one of the rooms, "Dawn!! There you are. I was looking for you." He walked closer to her to see that her head was down on her arms. "Dawn?" Dawn turned around and looked up to see Kenny. Dawn wiped away her tears. "Oh. Hey Kenny. Just leave me alone," said Dawn turning around. "But..." said Kenny. Dawn shouted, "I said just leave me alone!! Will ya listen to me at least once?!" "Ok. Fine. If you want to miss your battle." She was confused. "What battle? Isn't it supposed to be your's?" "Nope. They changed it. So you better hurry or you'll miss it." "Ok." Kenny pushed Dawn all the way into the elevator.

Me: How was that for a rewrite? Not you Drew and Kyle.

May: It was so cute.

Misty: Such loyal friends.

-Drew whispers in Ash's ear-

Ash: I hated it.

Me: Drew. Stop poisoning people's minds.

Kyle: I should've thought of that. Oh and NO BRAIN LULU!

Luna: Why you gotta put me in this?!

Kyle: Dunno. Felt like it.

Me: Please enjoy Part 3 or Part III.