Hey everyone sorry it took so long to update. I re-read my story and agree completely agree that I'm rushing a lot. My only fight is that I'm not used to writing during someone else's storyline. I plan on writing a sequel that you may like better. Now on with the story.
There's to be a gala tonight.I can't wait! There's been no other "sighting" of the Phantom, though I can't say I haven't gone looking.
Oh my God! It's the Phantom!He's back. And he looks mad
"Why so silent, good messieurs?
Did you think that I had left you for good?
Have you missed me, good messieurs?
I have written you an opera!
Here I bring the finished score -
"Don Juan Triumphant" !"
We all watch mesmerized as the Phantom approaches Christine.
"Your chains are still mine -
you belong to me!" He sings painfully.
I move forward in a trance until I'm only a few feet away from him.
"And you!" he barks as all eyes turn to me "Would do well to stay out of my business!"
Raoul runs forward and both fall through a trap door.
I could kill that stupid Phantom! My reputation is ruined! He couldn't have at least yelled at me in privet! Now every one whispers, and stares, and points when I walk by. I have to say though, his opera is quite well written, other than the risqué elements.
The nerve of that Raoul! He's going to trick the Phantom. Oh how I wish Erik were here.
Oh, no! That voice, it's not Piangi's! Not now, Monsieur Phantom, not now.
That beautiful voice! How I wish he'd teach me.
They're on the bridge now….Wait! They're supposed to be done singing now.
"Christine", the daft man broke character "That's all I ask of……"
Ha-ha! You thought I'd keep going. Please keep reviewing , my poppies!