Okay I really wasn't planning on adding to 'Fairytale' but I guess I will because I've had a couple of reviews asking me to... Thank you to anyone who reviewed the first chapter and is reading this one.

Disclaimer: Guess what? I still don't own Naruto, and I'm still not rich T.T

NOTE: Anything outside of parenthesis is the story they're writing, anything inside of them, is

what's going on between those two... don't expect much for now because I don't usually write this kind of thing.

Once upon a time, there was a shy young princess, who was waiting for her prince. She had dark hair and pale skin and not many friends... ("Hey I'm your friend!" Kiba interrupted.

"B-but Kiba-kun... you w-wanted to be at the e-end of the s-story... remember?" said Hinata softly... actually she says everything softly so I guess this was her normal tone of voice.

"Oh... well what's wrong with the princess being described as hot?"

Somehow Hinata managed not to fall over and faint when she heard Kiba say that... after the princess was still supposed to be her! However she did turn many shades of red. "U-um K-kiba-k-kun" she was stuttering a lot now, it was kind of embarrassing to hear Kiba say that...After all, they'd been going out for only about an hour! "P-people d-don't use the w-word 'hot' t-to describe a p-princess..."

"Oh... okay then..."

Hinata gratefully went back to writing. 'My face must be redder than a tomato!' she thought. 'I just hope Kiba doesn't mind how embarrassed I get... I really like him... more than I liked Naruto!')

However the princess did like the company of animals, so she was never to lonely. She had a cute little dog with black fur and white paws. ("Hinata you don't have a dog!" interrupted Kiba again.

"I-I know I don't b-but I d-didn't w-want Akamaru to f-feel l-left out..."

"Good idea! Hey... is it my turn to write yet?"

Hinata was a little upset, she'd only gotten four sentences, and the beginning had been her favorite part in her old version, but she handed the paper and pencil over to Kiba and read what he wrote over his shoulder.)

Princess Hinata's ("you-um Kiba-kun..." Hinata hated to interrupt, but she felt this was important. "Y-you can't use a-anyone's r-real n-name... it's s-supposed to b-be f-fiction..."

"But it's based off of real people isn't it?" said Kiba. "Never mind, I get your point." He erased 'Hinata' and wrote down a different name. Now it read 'Princess Yuka.')

-Often dreamed of her prince. The man she thought she loved had blonde hair, blue eyes, was an annoying b---- ("Kiba-kun! W-watch y-you're language, this is a c-children's s-story..." Hinata exclaimed from shock, because Kiba didn't really write 'b----' he wrote the entire word, which I can't do because I'm trying to keep this at the same rating.

Reluctantly Kiba erased it, mumbling "well it's true...")

And most people thought he was an annoying b- word. (U-uh... K-kiba-kun..."

"What, can't I write that either?" asked Kiba...

Blushing, as always..., Hinata shook her head 'no.' Kiba erased that line as well and handed it over to Hinata. "Here, you can write again.")

While most people thought he was just a pest, Princess Yuka admired him greatly, and felt she loved him with the bottom of her heart. ("That's so sappy! You don't really love Naruto, do you!?"

"N-no K-kiba-kun..." said Hinata. She had already went over this with him several times... in the end she just decided Kiba was the kind to get jealous a lot. So after explaining how the plot of their story went, which she had done several times BEFORE they started, Kiba finally remained quiet, hopefully understanding that this part was only for the plot.)

However, the boy, named Noburu, didn't notice her, and only cared for another girl, with pale skin, deep black eyes and blonde hair. Her name was Saika, meaning 'colorful flower.' and the name really fit her because she loved flowers of any kind. ("I thought this character was supposed to be Sakura?" said Kiba. "It kind of sounds more like that Ino girl."

"W-well I guess it d-doesn't r-really m-matter..." said Hinata, feeling a little put down.

She had no clue why she always felt so bad over such little things, and she wished she didn't.

Kiba must've noticed because he said, "Aw, don't worry Hinata, they both fill in the part well! Hey maybe it's both of them put together!"

Akamaru barked, probably in agreement, though Hinata couldn't really tell. But it didn't really matter because it felt better just to have some one notice her for once. She picked up the pencil again, a little more confidently.)

Sometimes, compared to Saika, Yuka felt really small and ugly, even though she was a princess. She tried to tell herself it didn't really matter, because her true love would love her, even if she became the ugliest girl in the whole kingdom. But that didn't really work out, she still felt bad. It even felt like her family hated her sometimes.

Okay I'm taking a break for now, I just can't think of anything else... tell me what you think of how I setup this chapter please, I'd like to know if it's to hard to read. Also I will (once again) love you forever if you can point out anything I need to improve on. I think I screwed up in a couple of places but I'm not sure... And of course I'll give you another cookie just for reviewing .