Hey, thank you to all who are reviewing this fic. I love everyone who has reviewed so far, very much. Also I think today I will start writing a sequel for the story. Yes I know that my chapters are short, but remember this used to be a very long 9 page oneshot. Also some of you may hate me by the end leaving a HUGE cliffie. Sorry, but I love them.

Enjoy!

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Bella's POV

He came back down looking very pleased.

" You were right you do have some fine stuff up there. I'll make a bundle on them," He mused to himself.

" Please, why can't you let me go?" I didn't see it coming, but next thing I knew his gun was at my face. He had hit my across my right check. It was hurting very bad and beginning to sting.

" Don't you EVER beg to me again." I whimpered slightly and nodded my head. Oh god, I thought as the smell of my blood hit my nostrils. I think I'm gonna be nauseas. I started swaying. Blotches were covering my vision. Then my head hit the couch.


" AHHH!" I screamed bloody murder as my face felt as if it had frozen.

" You passed out." He said plainly as it were the most common thing to do to wake me by throwing water on my face. When he mentioned me, he pointed to me with the gun. Great, so I'm still here, he still has the gun, and Edward hasn't arrived. This was starting to get to dangerous. If Edward didn't show soon, I knew nothing good could come of it.

" So, what happened to your engagement ring?" he asked accusingly. I stiffened. I knew it, this was going to get real bad.

" I ummm,"

He said slower and a heck of a lot angrier, " Where. Is. The. Ring."

I sat there silent, hoping that any second Edward would come running through the door and tell me everything was alright and he would never leave again. Nothing. Tick. No one. Tick. Solitude. Tick. The seconds were passing and no one was coming, no one was here to save me. That's when it sunk in. I wasn't leaving this house alive. Please Edward, you love me, save me.

He thrust his hand down to my side, picking up my hand. Earlier I hadn't realized how cold and grimy, the man's hand felt. He raised my left hand, lifting me to my feet, into the air so that we could inspect to see where it was. He glared at me through my fingers. He thrusted my arm back down to my side and started pacing.

" WHERE IS IT?" he screamed. I again just stood there silently.

He stopped pacing and came over to get right into my face. " WHERE IS IT BITCH?"

I spoke for once. " I…it's a….in…" well more stammered.

" Dammit, what did you do with it." he spoke in such a low deadly tone.

" I um…" I was debating in my mind what to do. I could tell him, where I hid it or I could play the game of risk and wait.

That's when the vile man lifted the gun, level with my heart.

" Okay, I'll ask you one more time, Where. DID. YOU. PUT THE RING?"

Well, now was not the time to wait. This pained me so but I told him where it was, " I put it in the kitchen above the window sill."

He looked enraged, but headed towards the kitchen. I sat back down on the couch, waiting for him to come back and give me my punishment for moving. Though I wonder if he'll listen to bargaining. The man came back livid into the room, something was wrong. Just at his death glare towards me, I flinched away in utter terror.

" YOU LIED TO ME!"

" no" I whispered. What did he mean, I told him the utmost truth.

" You told me it was on top of the window sill, but I DIDN'T FIND IT!" he was totally out of control.

" SO WHERE IS IT?"

The tears were starting to fall down my checks, " I…I…don't know. I put it above the window sill."

" LIE! I was just in there. IT WASN'T."

The tears were coming in streams now, " Please, I didn't lie. It was in there I promise you."

" Dammit, stop LYING TO ME! If you tell me now, maybe I'll spare you." I gasped.

" I don't know where it is." I confessed. I was telling the truth, when he had gone upstairs I went into the kitchen and placed it up above the window.

" Pity," he snarled. As he raised the gun inline with my chest. He cocked the trigger on the gun.

" NO WAIT!" I stood from the couch in a beckoning to stop him, "Please don't do this, I'll help you look for it. If we wait, my fiancé can pay you want ever you want. Please god, don't do this to me, I'll…."

" Sorry," He then did the most unexpected thing that I never thought would happen to me.

He pulled the trigger.

I was shot in the chest 4 times. I gasped, I never thought that Edward wouldn't save me. Even if I had been scared, I knew that some how Edward would come and save me from this nightmare. I lost the feeling in my legs and fell down, back onto the couch. It was a hard throbbing in my chest. Also like I was being seared on the inside. It hurt about as much as it did when Edward left. I didn't know that so much pain could be caused physically.

It was ending, I could see the blotches again covering my world, though this time I knew I would never awaken. They say that your life flashes in front of your eyes right before you die. What I saw was Edward. Edward and I on my first day of Forks High. The first Biology class when I thought I had made him mad some how. After he saved me in Port Angeles. When he toke me to our meadow and told me he loved me. When we went to prom and danced together. When he proposed and agreed to spend eternity with me. All the nights he spent with me. Everything that Edward and I had ever done passed by through my mind in a mere second.

Then it went black.

Edward, I will always love you. Lastly nothing.

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The end. Bella's dead.

Jk jk, who knows anything could happen in the next chapter, so review like crazy. Also I might update the last part later today because I'm sick at home with nothing to do. So what do you guys think of now for a sequel?

Peace out with love

xxDeath's Daughterxx ,..,