Ok so yeah here's is the third chapter of my story
Ok so yeah here's is the third chapter of my story. I'm not sure if it's doing to well though. Most people read it but they don't leave any reviews. Maybe it's because it's only two chapters long so far and I haven't got around to updating it, but I promise I'll update more often if people would at least review what I write. If you think that my story is no good then please tell me what I could do to improve it. I am open to people's opinions.
Sweetness of Death Ch.3
Jynx entered the train station and waited for Kiashi and Karutomi to catch up to her. "Hurry up! I'm like starving here!"
Kiashi sped up her walking and stood next to her and rolled her eyes. "Don't worry it's not like we're going to miss the train or something."
The winged Shinigami then flew down the doors of the station and looked at Jynx as she stood there looking annoyed at Kiashi "HAHAHAHAHA! Kiashi, this girl is even more impatient than I am. Why don't we have some fun and mess around! You should have walked slowly on purpose just to piss her off."
Jynx suddenly turned and gave a death glare towards Karutomi, "YOU BASTARD! You're lucky I can't hurt you!"
"Now, now Jynx no need to loose your temper over something stupid like that. You can head home and I'll see you tomorrow in class. I need to attend to business before I head home, it might take awhile so it's not a good idea for you to come along."
Kiashi stuck her hand in her purse and took out a lollipop. At the moment she brought out the berry flavored lollipop Karutomi began to drool. Saliva flowed out of his mouth as he stared at the candy, "WOOT! You're giving me another sucker. Your so nice Kias-" his face turned paper white and his eyes widened with anger as he saw her hand it to Jynx. "YOU BITCH! YOU FUCKING BITCH THAT WAS MINE!"
Jynx grabbed the lollipop quickly from Kiashi and teased Karutomi, this only seemed to anger the creature even more than what already was. "Ha-ha!" She grimaced and twirled the candy in her hands.
"I could kill you right now if I wanted to! I wouldn't even hesitate! You Filthy human! I despise you!"
Kiashi began to grow tense. Her body began to spasm and shake. She wasn't in the mood for Jynx to be messing around, especially with him. Too many times she had prevented Karutomi from killing her, and if she kept it, she herself would loose it and go on a rampage. "Karutomi calm down I'll give you one later!"
She grasped onto Jinx's hand and squeezed it tightly, "What the fuck are you thinking!! If he kills you it's going to be your fault!" She throw her hand back and began to pace back and forth and then turned to look at Jynx again.
"Ok look…. I'm not in the mood for this right now. Just go home and I'll see you later k."
Jynx looked at Karutomi and then her eyes came back to Kiashi, she could see that she was pissed. She had seen Kiashi like this before and it would be best if she gave her some space.
"Alright then, I'll head home. I'll see you tomorrow."
Suddenly a loud voice could be heard over the intercom of the train station. People began to crowd around them as the train was arriving. "The Train will soon be approaching in the next minute, please stand behind the yellow line for your safety." The voice had gone silent and now the only things that could be heard now were the conversations of business men, school girls, and the loud shriek of the train.
Kiashi turned and quickly started walking towards the exit of the station and stopped at the fight of stairs. She gave one last glace back and waved to her friend, them she disappeared into the cold streets of Tokyo.
She took out her cell phone to look at the time. It was a quarter till seven P.M but she knew she had to get to her destination within the next hour, or else she wouldn't find him at home.
"Come on Karutomi it's about time you met L."
"Ah! So I finally get to meet the famous L. I assume that you are not going to reveal me to him, or do you plan otherwise?" a smile spread across the Shinigami's face as they walked through the crowded streets.
Back at the station Jynx boarded the train and seemed to be lost in deep thought. She seemed confused and aggravated about the short series of events that had just occurred. She realized that she could have provoked her own death. Her eyes became cold and they seemed to expand at the very thought of it, if it wasn't for Kiashi, Karutomi would have surely killed her over a damn lollipop. Kiashi didn't seem too happy about it either and probably would have let him do it if she kept it up. She knew that she wasn't mentally stable, so anything that pissed her off could break what little sanity she had left.
"Damn that Shinigami!" she thought to herself. "Oh well I guess I better stop teasing him if I want to continue to live." She let a trembling chuckle.
"On the other hand I can always have my fun right? I just have to be careful about what I say and do because Kiashi could kill me. Tsk, Tsk... What a nuisance." Jynx grinned and felt the train come to a stop. She waited for everybody to exit the train and soon after she stepped out through the doors. She continued to wonder why Kiashi had gotten so mad. It wasn't like she did anything bad; all she did was tease him. No, she had to be stressed or freaked out about something, but she could put her finger to it.
As she walked out into the street she finally figured out why she had wanted to be alone. "THAT WHORE! I bet she's going to go see L!" That would explain everything; it's true that Kiashi hasn't seen him in awhile, so why would she want her to go with her?
"Ugh! Stupid Bitch, she wants him all to herself!" Jynx began to laugh hysterically and unwrapped the lollipop and stuck it in her mouth. "Looks like it going to rain again."
The streets were lit with thousands of neon lights and you could smell the food as the night shops began to open their stands. Kiashi walked through the crowds with much haste. Tokyo was a city always filled with life and excitement.
"Wow Kiashi, I never knew there could be so many humans in one place, it's disgusting. I'm not really found of mortals. They always complain. How about we kill one?"
She seemed to ignore him. The only thing on her mind at the moment was to get to L. She had to see him, she could wait any longer. Karutomi flew in front of Kiashi as she walked waving his hands in front of her face and making funny noises to get her attention.
"Karutomi, if you want to so bad why don't you just kill one of them. Just make sure it's not anyone around me"
He took out his Deathnote and searched through the hundreds of faces. Life spans floated above the heads of all the mortals he past. His head turned from side to side, he seemed to have trouble picking out the pathetic human whom he would kill next.
Finally he smirked as he saw the poor fucker he was going to kill, a normal looking human by the looks of it. He was probably in his late forties. Now the fun part was how he was going to die.
Karutomi quickly took out his pen and began to scribble in his Deathnote. Kiashi stopped to look at the Shinigami as he wrote. She was surprised; she had never seen him like this before. He actually looked like he was thinking.
Ishiro Hetsugawa, he begins to walk down the street when he suddenly stops and goes mad. He starts to claw at his face and tears through his skin. He starts hallucinating, and sees himself covered in thousands of insects. He begins to yell and scream and runs to the nearest food stand which happens to be 10 feet in of him. He takes a knife from the stand and slits his own throat. He then dies slowly in a puddle of his own blood.
As soon as he stopped writing, Kiashi watched as the even took place. Bystanders stood horrified at the sight of this man tearing at his skin. People tried to get a hold of him but the man pushed them back. Suddenly she could hear them scream as he gauged out one of his eyes. Such horrid scream came from this man, and no one knew why.
Kiashi just stared as she saw the man run and pick up a knife from one of the food stands. People were panicking to call the police and other were yelling and running. The last thing she saw was the man sliting his own throat.