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as for those who said I need to spell check It will be a little time before I can do so same with grammer I will fix things before to long hopfully
Light and Dark Meet
I have just entered this new realm and already I see trouble. A battle between light and dark that cannot be won. Who determines the light and dark, but none other than a currupt goverment and a manipulitive old school teacher. How laughable,let's see how this battle can be stopped. A young man is the only means of destroying this mad man, but the only one truely capable of teaching him is that school teacher. Ah nuts, guess I have my work cut out for me.
I travel to the house of this young man named Harry Potter only to see him withering in agony. I enter his body as the spirit I am to fid a way to help him, only to find anothe rpresence besides the young man. A huminiod snake like being with glowing red eyes, torturing the green eyed young man.
Harry's point of veiw in the dream
I am tortured in my own mind as Riddle uses the crutacius curse on me.
"Potter, you will tell me the prophecy." shouts Voldemort
"He will do no such thing", a voice from the shadows says.
"whos there? Revele your self or be vannised from here!"
I see a man with cat like eyes and long silver hair walk out of the shadows. Who is he and how is he in my mind? I see him charge at Riddle with a long sword as Tom casts the killing curse at him. The green light of the curse hits only to not have any effect. Tom is bewildered by this and atempt this again just to be cut in the side by the silvered haired man. Tom starts to throw crucio and avada kedavra curses almost constantly just to see them have no effect at all. The man whon he fights against seems to be anoyed, just to cast a strange spell that seems to cause a black hole to appear where Riddle stands. Seemmingly crushing him, Riddle takes on last look at him than at me before he flees my mind. I look at the man in front of me with a questioning look in my eye, that seems to say who the hell are you.two words are spoken his name Sephiroth Creacent.