Awesomewriter123: Nice Cliffhanger! Please add Ed into the fanfic and update!

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Chapter One: The Hallowed Ed

Eddy's eyes flicked open. The first thing he saw was his hand outstretched, and his pointing finger out, like he was pressing something. Eddy withdrew his hand, and looked at the table. The box was gone, and the table was charred black, and had several cut marks all over it. Eddy wondered why the table looked like this, until he looked away from it, and saw that the table wasn't the only thing that was wrecked. The walls, floor, and the ceiling had been charred and random debris and objects were strewn across the floor. Double-D. Where is Double-D? was the first thing that came to Eddy's mind. Edd's bed was trashed, and the mattress had springs jutting every which way out of it. He then turned toward the bedroom door, which was hanging by it's hinges. He stepped out of Edd's room, and into the hallway.

Eddy quickly made his way downstairs, surveying the wreck that was Edd's house. Edd's room wasn't the only thing that had been touched; it seemed that the whole house had been damaged. Eddy walked into the kitchen, looking for any sign of life. The fridge was on it's side, food was strewn across the floor, and it had a rotting stench. Tomato sauce was all over the walls, and the microwave had been cracked open. The cabinets had all fallen out of their frame, and bugs were everywhere inside, picking at the rotten food. Eddy had to turn away to stop him self from vomiting. He quickly walked to the front door, or more like the frame of the door, and looked outside. He gasped at what he saw.

The street was torn wide open, as if an earthquake had occurred. Some the houses were barely standing on their weak frames, while others had collapsed completely. Cars and trucks were everywhere, wrecked into street lights, houses, and each other. For some odd reason, however, there was no one, not even a soul, was there. There were no birds chirping, no deer crossing the street, no kids playing in the cul-de-sac. It was like a ghost town. A tear slid down Eddy's cheek. Where was everybody?, Eddy thought, unable to keep more tears from forming in his eyes. He walked over to the shade of what was once his house, and sat there, crying. Come on Eddy, you don't cry, you're a man! Eddy looked around, and saw that no one was watching. But I guess it's okay to be a sissy if no ones watchin', right? Eddy thought, trying to reassure himself that it's okay to cry. Eddy lowered his head, and just stared at the pool on the ground where his tears were collecting.

He sat there for who knows how long, until he heard a noise that sounded like a string being stretched out. Eddy looked up, and saw a person. An actual real, living, breathing organism. Eddy stood up, and made sure to stay in the shade of the house. Whoever it was, had a white cloak on, with a hood covering their face. They had leather shoes on, and had brown gloves covering their hands. The person had a bow, and the arrow was stretched back, ready to be launched.

"This is Hallowed Ground. You must leave, or I will have to eliminate you.", the person said solemnly. It was a male's voice, so Eddy presumed it was a guy.

Eddy just stood there, shaking. What should I say? Eddy thought.

"If you will not leave, than show yourself, so I can know what you look like before I take your life." he said, getting ready to attack.

Eddy decided he should show himself, unless he wanted to die. So he stepped out of the shade of the house. "You happy now?" Eddy asked nervously.

The person immediately lowered his bow, and said in a shocked voice "Eddy?"

"How do you know my name?" Eddy said.

The person then pulled down his hood, and looked up at Eddy. At first Eddy didn't recognize him, but he suddenly realized he looked like...

"Jimmy?"


Short chapter, I know, but they get longer. I ended here simply for suspense purposes.