All The Colours of The Rainbow

by Lianas

It's funny that when you're falling down in a never ending depressing spiral that even your very best & only friend can't seem to help you out from, that a beautiful stranger can pull you right back up to the surface… & then drop you down again. BxE AU

4. Chapter 4

An: I hate to do this but...I'm redoing this story.

To put it bluntly:

1) I think that the chapters are too short, and are going too fast.

2) There is not much insight on Bella's past or all the torment and grief she went through with Kelly.

3) The characters are so OOC that it surprises me, and I think that I'm not really explaining much about the characters and it's more focused on the drama and dialogue happening.

4) I don't think that I can actually write about college when I know absolutely nothing about colleges. I'm 15. Not 20. I don't even know what goes on there or anything. So I'm going to change it to high school.

There will be another authoress' note when I have started the remake. Thankyou .