(sighs heavely)
Okay, so my dear friend seenoevil... person pointed out that the story should go around Chris since its supposed to be a Charmed fanfic and that is shows no signs of Chris Halliwell being in fact more than just another mortal person and that the story goes more around OCs as he/she called them. So just for a show of hands does anybody else want the story to change for the Charmer?
If not Ill just keep going the mortal way and I would appreciate no more complains if you didnt speak here.
So review AYE if you think I should change it
And review GEORGE if its fine or you dont care.
hope that settles the matter and thanks to all the good reviewers.