Title: My Immortal
By: FallenArchAngel47
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Igloo. Hide in an igloo in the South Pole… the penguins will protect you.
Dig a ditch to the center of the earth. …No one would dare follow you to the earth's molten core.
Oklahoma…peripherally the crop circles. It's too "mystical" to hide there… no one would suspect you.
Nose. George Washington's nose on mount Rushmore… people had to sculpt that, didn't they?
'Scuse me, but can you fit in a bar of soap?
Twinkie factory. Hey, all the free Twinkies you could eat and should there be a nuclear war you'll have something to eat.
Opium factory. Sure… you'll die from the fumes… but for the meantime enjoy the effect of the horrid drugs.
Wal-Mart. It is WAY too big for anyone to be found in a Wal-Mart. You'll be safe there.
New York! No one DARES to go into that state… specially the Bronx yo.
Iowa. Maybe that was the corn state… but… hey hide in an ear of corn if you can fit.
Texas. Should the president come looking for you… he won't nuke his own homeland. So at least you won't be nuked to death.
Dear Readers,
Please forgive me for this. I believe I made Mr. Crepsley OOC… I do that a lot, sorry.
Chapter 4
"Would you care to sit down?" Larten offered as he, himself sat down at the table. "Cut the small talk, let's get down to business." Bryanna said sitting in front of him. "No doubt you would like to, you were always such a straight-to-the-point individual." Larten spoke calmly. "I've come up with a way for you to pay for making my husband leave me." Bryanna said as a small growl emitted from her throat. "Making him?" Larten asked, his voice remained calm and stable but his face looked shocked.
"My dear Bryanna I would never make Erroneous leave you." He leaned back in his chair and took a sip of water. "I merely helped him realize the wicked person you really are." He whispered. She slammed her fist on the table. "Dammit Larten. You really think I'm wicked? Hm? If I were wicked, wouldn't you have killed me by now? Wouldn't I be dead by now?" she asked, and glared at him. There was a silence for a moment or so. "What is so evil about me anyway?" she whispered, her eyes, sad. "You had a knack for killing, what more can I say? You've killed innocent people since you were a child, countless in fact. You enjoy watching others wallow in their misery, you tear love apart, and you enjoy it all!" Larten half-shouted. She smiled innocently. "But I stopped when I had Erroneous, did I not?" she asked. "No. You did not." Larten corrected. "Uh. Yeah I did Larten." She argued. He cleared his throat.
"Bryanna Helene Adams, do not try and tell me what I know for a fact. You may think I did not see you killing people on the side, you may think I didn't see you torturing people on the side, and not to even mention cheating on poor Erroneous when you know damn well he would put his life on the line for you." Larten growled. Bryanna cleared her throat. "Changing the subject… I know how you can pay me back… and the world… since you're making Erroneous leave…and causing thousands of deaths in the process…I know how you can repay them and I." She continued.
"What makes you think I will agree to your terms?" He inquired, raising his eyebrow. "My say so." Bryanna said firmly. "What are you going to do if I do not listen to you? Surely just your word cannot make me agree." He chuckled at the thought. A wicked smile spread across Bryanna's face. "You know that water you just drank Larten, dear?" Bryanna asked. Larten paused. "What did you do to it?" he hissed. A smile spread across her face. "I just added some crushed herbs and other such things… to make an obedience potion. It should kick in, in about…now." She said and snickered. Mr. Crepsley went still; his eyes clouded and glazed over.
"Larten, listen to me." Bryanna said softly in a velvety soft voice. "Larten… you will love me. You will listen to me… and you will do as I wish you to do." He nodded once and she chuckled darkly. "Never thought I would learn to be an enchantress, did you Larten?" she said softly, as she got up and circled him. "Never would expect little Bryanna to be so powerful." She said softly. She stroked the small crop of orange hair on the top of his head. "You know… I never really did like Erroneous." She whispered softly. "I always had an eye for you… but you never bothered to notice… and this is the price you pay dear Larten." She said. She chuckled darkly again.
"First off… I want you to go about as you would every other day before this night, with the exception of your love for me. You will take me with you… as apposed to going on without me. You cannot live with out me." She whispered in his ear, nipping at it softly. "I cannot live without you…" he whispered. "Now…I'm going to leave…" she said. "No don't." he said. He looked hurt. "Too bad." She said, and with that she exited the room.
End Chapter 4
I FINALLY CAN UPDATE! YAH BIZNATCH WHAT NOW! Sorry. Umm… just happy about that… anyway, continuing, I know it was a bit OOC but please do not be angry with me… thanks for reading.