Title: My Immortal

By: FallenArchAngel47

Dear Readers,

No killing got OOC please… :hides:

Fallen.

Chapter 5

"Now… Bryanna was never a…well… a very nice person to begin with…" Proxi began. "She stole from people, liked to play tricks on human's minds, killed innocent people, wiped entire cities off the map." She continued. "She tore lovers apart, took from the poor, stole from the rich, and even sent children who ended up on our doorstep off to her realm where they would be sent to the…well…I'll leave it at this: It's not a pretty place there." There was a long pause for a moment. "You see, Bryanna is the daughter of Discordia. Discordia…as you can plainly tell in her name… is the goddess of Discord and Chaos. Now you understand just a bit, why she is… well… not very nice." Proxi paused for a moment, thinking.

"Well… fast forward a few centuries… she came across a man named Erroneous, and for some reason… he fell madly in love with her. Now, unlike the many other men that fell in love with her, whom she used and tossed over her shoulder like an old newspaper, she stayed with him. He would do anything for her… well… in public she went about it as if he were a prized pet… or minion. Behind closed doors… she really did love him, but she would never tell the world that. If people knew that, then they would know her Achilles heel, they'd know her weak spot and she didn't want anyone to know." Proxi closed her eyes. "Well… needless to say people started getting suspicious and so she treated him like horribly, but no matter what she did to him, he always loved her, he always obeyed her." She trailed off.

"Well…one day Mr. Crepsley-" "Wait, how did you get into this all?" Darren asked. "…I was a survivor of one of the towns destroyed by her… she took me in as a minion…" she said softly. There was a silence. "Go on… sorry…" Darren quickly apologized. "Where was I, Young Darren Shan?" "Mr. Crepsley." "Oh yes, that is right. Mr. Crepsley came across us, while traveling one day… and…well…" she paused, and then shook her head. "The moment… that Bryanna saw him… she told him to stay in the city with us. He did… and she gave him anything and everything that he wanted. Even things he did not want." Her voice was very soft and very quiet. "You see…from my perspective… I believe she in fact fell in love with Mr. Crepsley upon seeing him, forgetting Erroneous, who would do anything for her."

She was silent for a few moments. "Well… one night Mr. Crepsley sat up, and was talking with Erroneous about Bryanna, Mr. Crepsley told her of all of Bryanna's attempts to… "bed" him, and anything possible. Erroneous was heartbroken when he heard of the news. It hit him hard, and they spoke of what they would do… Erroneous decided he would go his own separate way, as would Mr. Crepsley. In fact, that is what they both did… but Bryanna would not forgive either of them for what they did… She had Erroneous executed for being a traitor, and…I suppose she's come here tonight for her revenge on Mr. Crepsley." "That's all that happened? I mean it was her own fault!" Darren exclaimed. "Ah, but you see that is not exactly all. After Mr. Crepsley and Erroneous' departure, the city began to crumble due to her depression from both departures. She was heart broken over both, and did not tend to her empire. It lead to riots, revolutions, and eventually the fall of the empire. We were struck homeless and alone. That day… she vowed she would take her revenge on Mr. Crepsley no matter what the cost…" she said softly.

There was an eerie silence after. "It's getting late… I hope Mr. Crepsley is alright…" Proxi spoke, standing up. "I hope they are okay." She continued. She went to go toward the door, and then paused. She shook her head. "No… Bryanna will be furious…" she sat back down and was silent. Just at that moment Bryanna walked in, she smiled as if she hadn't a care in the world, and went toward her room. "What'd you do with Mr. Crepsley?" Darren asked, glaring at her. Now, he really did not care for Mr. Crepsley, but without him he would not have made it this far, nor would he make it any further. "Oh nothing, we just had a very long talk… you may go see him for proof if you wish…" Bryanna said. Darren walked out quickly, and went into his motel room.

"A bit quick tempered, I say." Bryanna said. She looked at the door. "…What did you do…Mistress?" Proxi asked softly. "Nothing much, just brewed up a bit of my enchanting, and well… I have my replacement for Erroneous." Bryanna said. She smiled wickedly. "…Oh…" Proxi said softly. She looked down toward the ground. "Now if you don't mind… I'll be sleeping." Bryanna said. "Do not disturb me, no visitors, and no messages." With that she walked into her room. Aimee looked over at Proxi. "Mom… are you alright?" She asked. "I am perfectly fine young one…" Proxi whispered. "Now… are… you hungry?" She asked softly. Her face was emotionless, but her eyes told it all. The streaks in her hair were a deep dark blue, as were her eyes. "In what sense?" Aimee asked. "Either or." Proxi responded quietly. "I suppose I am a bit hungry…" Aimee said. "Come then… let us feed…" Proxi said walking out the door.

End chapter 5

….Hi. NO FLAMES PLEASE.