Moonshade999 - I hope you do continue, because so far the story is pretty good and interesting :) Plus I'm pretty curious to read what happens next. - Yes I will be continuing the story, and I thank you for the review. As I wrote the story I didn't find it all that interesting, well until the two guys showed up :-)

Maui90 - Same as your last reviewer, I can't wait to know what happens next. I've read quite a few vampire stories both on and other sites but Amara's character just seems different and I can't wait to know what happens next. Well thank you, I did want Amara to be different I just wasn't sure how people were going to take to liking this kind of character.

Kags21- Please update soon. - Haha alright, doing so Kags.

Ms.Sanders - Omg! You have to finish it!! I wanna know what happens lol You have a really good beginning, I look forward to reading more. - First, thank you for being so enthusiastic about this story. No need to worry anymore kiddies, I'm continuing it.

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Dalton looked dubiously at the fallen girl, then back at his partner. "You sure this is the one?" he muttered. If she were truly the one they were looking for, she wouldn't have succumbed so easily to having her breath stolen.

The other man shrugged. "Might as well take her and make sure. If we're wrong, at least we won't go hungry."

It was hard to argue with that. Dalton carefully lifted her from the car and rested her head carefully against his shoulder. His companion rolled his eyes at him.

"Always the gentlemen. Didn't anyone ever tell you not to play with your food?" Tallen asked with a cocky smirk plastered on his face.

Dalton looked down at the sleeping girl and brushed her bangs from her face. "What can I say? I like savoring my meal." And what a feast for the senses this one was. Her smooth black hair tumbled across his arm and swung in gentle arcs below her. If she were Natia, she must have dyed her blonde hair, but those blue eyes were unmistakeable. A very pretty girl no doubt, in a way that was almost too generically pretty, but the dark circles under her eyes withheld perhaps a different story. The moonlight gave her a ghostly Sleeping Beauty glow and he indulged in a bit of romantic fancy before sighing and beginning to walk. It will be such a shame once she wakes up, goes all weepy and hysterical and ruin it all for him.

"I have a good feeling about this one," He called over his shoulder as they began the walk back to the hotel. It was true, he didn't know why but he could feel that this was the right one. Tallen scoffed at him, being so used to hearing that. "That's what you always say and you were wrong the last four times! Although I can't really complain-- "

"I know, but even so." He looked down at her. It was hard to say whether or not Natia was hiding inside this girl, but she was known to go for the pretty, sad ones. He would just have to wait until she awoke. Which suprisingly enough didn't take long, slowly he could feel her start to stir awake.

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Darkness. The sounds of echoing footsteps. Nothing made sense. Everything was dark, the slight breeze danced across her skin with each step the man took. Amara struggled to open her eyes, she knew she had to, but a part of her just wouldn't allow it. Though in the same perspective a small part in the back of her head screamed for her to open her eyes, screamed for her to take charge of the moment.

Furrowing her eyebrows, Amara slowly opened her eyes. She wasn't aware of the suroundings, just the fact that someone was currently carrying her. The memories hit her quickly. She suddenly remembered two men comming towards her, then grabbing her, then everything going black. What could all this mean? Who are these men? Her mind screamed numerous questions as she struggled to find her voice.

"Wh- whats going on?" Her voice broke on the first word as she tried to push the man away from her. All she wanted was to go home, to go back to her life. Even as much as her everyday life bothered her, it was better than what was happening now. She would much rather be baby sitting the neighbors bratty kids than be in the situation. Anyone would rather be some where else in this situation.

Suddenly the obvious clicked in her head. They were kidnapping her, but why? Why was she being taken? Maybe they wanted money. Maybe they would hold her hostage until her 'parent's paid whatever amount they wanted. Ha, she wanted to laugh, as if they would pay money to get her back. The only reason her parents would want her around would be to be their little personal slave.

Though that thought didn't seem like it was what was going on. They were probably just going to kill her. Amara shuddered at the thought. She looked up at the man that was carrying her, finally deciding what she would do.

With a sudden burst of courage she pushed with all her might against his shoulder, wiggling out of his grasp, she flipped onto her hands and knee's. Carefully she stood up. "What do you want with me?" Her voice was shaking as she slowly started to back away, her eyes shifting from one man to another.

Tallen smirked, this time he was the one to step forward. "Why bother trying to run, it didn't workl last time, it won't work this time.." He was walking towards her, his eyes never leaving Amara's shaking body. "Don't be scared..." The words were meant to be kind, but they had so much menice in them that it just made her back up more.

"No...leave me alone..." Amara shook her head as she turned, about to sprint off when a set of hands grabbed a hold of either shoulder, pulling her back against a hard body. She struggled, pushing hard on the man. "Let me go!" The world began to get dark once again. She tried to fight against it, and did a good job at it for a little minute. Her legs grew weak and that was all it took. She passed out, going limp and falling into Tallen.

With one swift motion, Tallen picked her up, he looked back at Dalton, "I'll carry her this time. She won't get out of my grasp."