In honor of the 10th anniversary of my 16th birthday (wow I'm old! and it's the 3rd) I've updated not one not two but 3 yes ladies and gents count em 3 stories one never before published and why? Cause I love my crack whores!)
Presenting … Lucas Danes?
By GilmoreGirl1979 (the Reigning Quote Queen)
Provider of Quality FAN FICTION
Rating: let's say PG-13 because well, I can't write smut… I break into girlie giggles … because it's so absurd… me… writing smut… it's funny, especially those who know me well….
R/R: yes please I love reviews, I wanna marry them (as previously stated, I have strange passions.)
friendly disclaimer: Chapter 1 once again, I don't own (DAMN IT!), No Harm No Sue.
-Sneaky Luke and Sneaky Lorelai with creeping music by Sam Philips sold separately. Dialogue BORROWED from 2.08 - The Ins and Outs of Inns (written by Daniel Palladino /directed by Michael Katleman some Dialogue and intentions have been altered by me, Gilmoregirl1979 (It's more Fun THAT WAY!).
Luvz: HAPPY HAPPY BIRTHDAY HAPPY HAPPY BIRTHDAY HAPPY HAPPY BIRTHDAY … TO ME! ANXIOUSLY AWAITING MY GIFTY POO… FROM YOU! HOPEFULLY IT'S NOT ACTUALLY POO …. THAT WOULD BE MEAN… ESPECIALLY TO YOUR ONE AND ONLY FAIRY!
Hello my little crack whores (and other shout outs):
Professor: thanks for the 411, you picking up what i'm laying down, give me some skin... sorry the jiv took over.
jeepgirl: always a pleasure
Rusty Bedsprings: I'm the whole package? Why rusty this is all so sudden… hehehehe
Baby Girl Geller-Green: which quote and can we discuss a payment plan(just kidding… I own nothing…)
Avajava: isn't that four words cause of the contraction?
Ruli: thank you for forgiving me… isn't not like I didn't want to write … it was like hey one day it's may.. the next … woaw it's july? WTF! In your honor…. -Sneaky Luke and Sneaky Lorelai with creeping music by Sam Philips sold separately. (does anyone know the music I'm talking about?) sillymaggie10:okay did you not see the difference in pub dates
uhm... Ummmmmmm OK!
Rumidha I take it you've read my others… thank you please review those when you get a chance…
Lauren Leigh : nipple? at least it was spelled right? LMAO
Muffin Is Injured:as audio adrenaline would say, I'm ALIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEE(insert awesome guitar break!) i'm very much alive...
everwoodgirl04: awww thanks, mel that's so nice!
LittleGGLover: this has sort of become my verision season 2. which we love!
beautifulbutterfly: ORDER UP!
and to everyone else thanks for the R/Rs but i wanted my whores to get their hits soooo with out further Eloquence...
OY, WITH THE INCESSENT A/Ns ALREADY:
-my fav bit from the last chapter has to be the jess walking in on L/L, the Jess and Luke moment… I think I really caught em…
A/N: I am by no means a Ressie or whatever R/J's call themselves … I am a die hard now and forever L/L JAVA JUNKIE DREAM TRAMP… uuhhh again whatever we are calling ourselves this week…
I have jess in here for the whole uncle/nephew ship and when LL get hitched they will need that best man.
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Chapter 16:
Run Away Little Boy (aka Dark Day)
(Okay not so original I know… )
Luke came in from weather proofing his woodworked master piece, "Okay, I'm pretty much done."
Lorelai looked up from her payroll spread across the kitchen table, "Thanks for doing this. I didn't want the rain to destroy our beautiful chuppah."
Luke stopped and raised an eyebrow, as he set the bucket on the table, "our… chuppah?" a slip which was very similar to his kids blunder the other day.
Realizing her gaffe, Lorelai stammered, "oh… I meant … your chuppah … cause you know you made it, … but you did give it to me so ... it is mine, too.. so I guess it is ours…technically."
Luke smiled, "well, 'our' chuppah has had it's first casualtiy…" holding up one of his carved figures.
Lorelai gasped, "Gilbert."
"What?"
"The goat. We named him Gilbert, he's headless," she said dramatically, "Can you fix him?"
"Yeah, I got some glue here."
"Good. I'll make some tea."
As Luke reunited Gilbert's head to his body, he asked Lorelai "So, everything okay?"
"You mean except for the fact that the only way I can see my boyfriend is if I invite him over to do chores? Yeah never better why?" as she pulled down the mugs from the cabinet.
"Well I just wanted to make sure you were … you know, okay with last night… the Inn, Mia, … Jess walking in on us."
Lorelai was wincing as she turned to face Luke again, "How did he take it?"
"He took it like … Jess" Luke shrugged.
"…But… what was his reaction… I mean… was he surprised, was he angry?"
"In case you haven't noticed our communication isn't the best," Luke offered dryly as he adjusted his grip on the goat.
"Well … Is he gonna say anything?"
"I don't know", Luke shook his head as the goat's head dried.
"Well … it sounds like we gotta get our story straight" and Lorelai considered, "You know Thanksgiving maybe the perfect opportunity to start letting the cat out of the bag. We always stop by for our first dinner, … we are thinking of pilgrims and Indians and things we are thankful for ... Like all the things you've done for me and Rory."
"Okay?" and Luke showed Lorelai the repaired Gilbert, "Check it out."
"Gilbert," Lorelai smiled, "You're not worse for the wear."
"I'll go reattach him. How'd this happen anyway?"
"Oh, well, ummm," And Lorelai scrunched up her face pretending to think, "something must've smacked into him with a hedger."
"This something didn't do it on purpose? Did they?" looking his suspect right in the eye.
Lorelai gave him puppy eyes, " it's the only thing I could think of to get you over here."
"I carved him by hand and you nearly destroy him," but Luke kissed her, happy she had wanted to see him. "I'll be back for some tea."
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Meanwhile, at the center of town, Rory was escorting Dean to pick up his pay check. "you may need protecting now that your pockets will be weighted down." She projected lighthearted, but she still felt bad for Luke. He was kind of like a father to her, and it bothered her that her "cousin" was so callous and ungrateful.
Rory was waiting outside the market when that same smug "cousin", Step cousin, had the nerve to walk right up to her. She tried to be indifferent to him, to not let the smart ass get to her.
"Should you be standing here all alone? I hear this is a pretty dangerous corner, " he said sarcastically in that dry voice of his.
"I'm fine," she offered flatly.
"Feeling succinct today?"
"Pretty much," hoping Dean wasn't being held up by another lecture from about compound interest.
"Hmm. Did I do something to offend?"
"Me?" or everyone you come in contact with?
"Yeah."
"No.
"Good." You're the only one worth talking to in this town.
"You might want to ask that same question to Luke though," she shot back pointedly.
I would but it seems he's busy with your mom. "Meaning?"
"You've got this whole town down on him.
"Really? How did I do that?
"You know how you did that. "
"I'm not really familiar with the blue book laws in this town, so you can be talking about a lot of things. Dropping a gum wrapper, strolling arm in arm with a member of the opposite sex on a Sunday."
Rory stomped her foot on the chalk out like to give him a clue
"Ah," now seeing what she was upset about, "What about it?"
"You did it. The whole town knows you did it. They even had a meeting about it."
Cocking his head to one side, Jess couldn't believe "You actually went to that bizarro town meeting? Those things are so 'To Kill a Mockingbird.'"
"Yes, I went. And Luke went. And when he got there, everyone ganged up on him. They all want you gone."
"Wow, bummer."
"And he's standing there yelling at everyone and defending you and paying Taylor back for his lettuce losses… "
" Wait, his what?"
"And now Luke's a pariah and it's all because of you! And what a shock, you don't care about any of this."
"I didn't say that."
"Go. I'm tired of talking to you."
"Fine," and Jess started to walk toward the book store to get away from her.
"You care nothing about Luke and his feelings!"
"Got a second wind, huh?" as he turned around to face Rory again.
"All he does is stick up for you and all you do is make his life harder. I guess that's what you have to do when you're trying to be Holden Caulfield but I think it stinks. Luke has done a lot for my mom and a lot for me, and I don't like to see him attacked." When she caught her breath she was sick of the sight of him, "Okay, second wind over."
Jess was surprised how much her words effected him, "I didn't know they were coming down so hard on him."
"Funny, I never pegged you as clueless, my mistake," she snapped.
"Okay. I get it. No, no, I do, I get it. So did you at least think it was funny?"
Rolling her eyes to hide her opinion, "That is so not the point."
"Ah, you thought it was funny." Gotcha.
Dean finally came out of the market, "okay, I got it. Oh, uh, hey." Noticing Jess.
"Um Dean, I don't think you two have met. This is Jess. This is Dean."
"Boyfriend?"
"Of course," Rory scoffed, still pissed at his treatment of Luke, and not for a second believing he was sorry.
"Sorry, you didn't say." A little uncomfortable with Dean's height, but feigning polite, "How ya doing?"
"Good, good."
"Okay, see you around." And Rory pulled Dean away to be out of the reprobate's company.
"Seems to turn out that way, doesn't it?" only trying to think of a good reason to keep his mouth shut about his uncle's secret relationship, now that he knew Rory was taken.
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"This is gonna be so great!" Lorelai practically squealed with glee.
"Mom you are taking too much joy in this," hoping to calm her mother over Breakfast and a cup of coffee, an oxymoron, I know.
"But no Friday night dinner! Do you know what that means?"
Rory sighed, "Yes, it means no dinner with Grandma and you're still taking too much joy in it…"
"Yes, but I had a double whammy last week with Thanksgiving on Thursday, and a consecutive Friday night dinner and now I don't have to see mom and dad for two weeks. Oh, I can't wait to tell Luke, maybe we can have a real Friday night date," She whispered across her favorite table. "this may be the thing to cheer him up, have you noticed … since thanksgiving he's been…."
"Moody? Distant?"
It's not just me, "I can't even get him to come over for chores." Maybe he has his period?
"Yeah, well his choice of roommate isn't helping," Rory scowled at Jess.
"That was not a choice, but still a good honest date with his girl may bring him outta his … I don't know funk."
"Honest? As in you'll take him to the Black White and Read for a movie for all the town to see?" As politely as she could, figuring Luke was having a rough enough time with the hoodlum and his recent moods, Rory asked "Luke, where's my toast?"
"Sorry, it's gonna take awhile. My big toaster's still broken so I got stuck with just this dinky one."
Jess the pushed down the handle of the big toaster to demonstrate that it now worked. "How did that happen?" Luke said more irritated than thankful .
"You're gonna break that."
"It was broken before."
"Well, it must've got better."
"Inanimate objects don't usually get better." Almost looking for some sign that he had gotten through to Jess "Did you fix this?"
"Please," Jess scoffed grabbing his jacket to head out the door.
"Jess?"
" I have no idea what you're babbling about. I don't fix things. "
"But …?"Luke was confused, the day before he had a cussing battle with the "broken" toaster. As toasters can't speak … Luke obviously won.
"I got school."
While the adults exchanged a puzzled shrug, Jess made a point to look directly at Rory. Who offered a small smile in his direction.
It had taken Jess awhile to figure it out, but he finally fixed the toaster. A simple gesture to a man who seemed to really want to help him out, and after the Thanksgiving crowd, Luke's fuse seemed even shorter. It's hard not to notice something changed, when you share one room with your uncle. Jess didn't want to think he was the cause of this current mood because of the town mental cases coming down on Luke.
That town meeting bothered had bothered Jess. Not so much discovering his uncle's little romance, or keeping it a secret. Or the town's opinion of him. No, in the end, only one person's opinion mattered. And she had a boyfriend, and because of his callous treatment of Luke, his loner attitude, she now hated him. Or at the very least she was pissed enough to chew him out at the scene of his "crime", not caring how loud her volume was.
It almost didn't matter if he got on Rory's good side, she had a boyfriend, But people break up all the time … Right?
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"What?" Lorelai was sure she didn't him hear right.
After breakfast, Lorelai fell fast from cloud 9, and she was dumbfounded that her boyfriend didn't want to spend time with her.
Luke was suddenly sheepish and uncomfortable, "I … ummm can't go out on Friday."
"What are you grounded?"
He gave her a genuinely hurt look. A pained look she had never caused before.
"I'm sorry," she said sincerely, knowing his folks were gone, "but why can't you come out with your girlfriend?" She whispered lowly, "Wine her, dine her, treat her like a queen. This is a rare opportunity…we can go out on a Friday."
"What's so special about Friday?" wishing she'd just drop it and pick another night, any other night.
"It's date night." She whispered at the counter.
Luke seemed to have had a short fuse on Thanksgiving. Lorelai figured it was the stress of cooking multiple dinners because half the town relied on the diner for their turkey fix for the year. He was used to cooking in bulk, but he had barely said two words to her. Maybe he was going beyond the call of duty to keep them quiet. When they said good bye on turkey day, Luke seemed very sad. And all week Lorelai tried to figure out what the problem was. Here she was with good news, and he showed no change.
"I just … can't."
"Luke?"
"Will you drop it!" he shouted louder than he intended.
Hurt by him snapping at her for no reason, she left.
Instantly regretting it, Luke only got out… "you forgot your coffee."
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"Mom this is your second big fight, and you haven't made it a month yet."
"Well it's a turbulent relationship" Lorelai pouted.
"Are you two… still together?"
"Of course, we are what kind of question is that?"
"Well you just storm out of Luke's without a word."
"Hello, did I not tell you what he said to me?"
"You told me an embellished version of what transpired yes."
"Embellished nothing," Lorelai scoffed, "I asked him out on a date and he said no."
"You could've just pick another night"
"But why? He never goes out?"
"Except with you, So that must mean what ever Friday is, it's really important."
"Or…" the wheels in Lorelai's head began to turn.
"Or…?" wondering where her mother was going this time.
"He's lost interest in me?"
"Do you hear yourself?" Rory was astonished at the leaps her mother was making. "he's been crazy about you for years."
"Well he's had me, the thrill is gone… just another Luke Danes conquest…."
"Mom… gross, and do … you… hear… yourself?"
"It doesn't matter, he can apologize if he wants but until then I'm going to Weston's."
"Suit yourself."
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Friday, Nov 30, 2001
All week Lorelai would pass by the diner and would see Luke there, but willed herself not to go in. According to her spy network, Sookie and Rory, all week Luke was still moody, probably more so without Lorelai.
On Friday, date night, he had completely disappeared. Lorelai finally broke down and went to Luke's for breakfast to discover he didn't open the diner. That is to say that the diner was still open for business, just Luke was not there to run the business, he had vanished.
Friday seemed to slowly drag on without Luke. Lorelai spent all day wondering where he was, what he was doing, what was the big secret. She went to the diner for lunch, and he wasn't there. She arranged for Rory to meet her there for dinner, and he was still gone. Breakfast no Luke, at lunch no Luke, at dinner no Luke,… what the Hell is going on?
Not finding Luke at the diner again was disturbing. She never really noticed this before, but now that they were together, she felt his absence. Lorelai was now pacing in the living room, Much like I did when he offered to present Rory, and nervously ate her cold left over fries. …. Where is he! Not at the diner, or the lake or the Hardware Store.
Luke was a creature of habit, he was either in the diner or in his apartment above the diner. This hermit behavior was one of the reasons he was so reliable, We always knew where he was. By 7:00 pm, Lorelai was very worried. What is it again … a person has to be missing for more than 24 hours before you call the police? Lukeat least called the last time he went missing, to help Bud and Maisy, but today nothing. Lorelai then began to wonder is he purposely hiding from me? 'cause it's date night?
Lorelai scooped up the phone, again, and dialed the familiar number of the diner … yet again.
"Luke's"
Lorelai was annoyed because it was still not Luke who answered the phone. "Ummm Ceasar hey, is Luke there?"
"Umm no he's still out, may I ask whose calling?"
"Oh well, has he been out all day? No special appearances or cameos?"
"Pretty much, May I ask whose calling?"
"Ummm it's Lorelai … again …"
"Are you sure you don't want me to give him a message? I mean if it's important …"
"Oh no, no message." And Lorelai hung up quickly and frowned at the phone. Okay, we aren't gonna be a secret for long if you keep doing that! She then struggled to remember what his apartment phone number was. Do I even have his apartment number? She had only ever needed to call the diner before.
Lorelai tried information, and was greeted with a familiar monotone, "Stars Hollow 411, How may I help you?"
"Hey Kirk, do you have Luke's phone number."
"Certainly, the number for Luke's diner is ..."
"No, no, not the diner, his apartment."
"Oh, … wow," Kirk's confidence faded, and he was completely thrown, " … no one's ever asked me that before …" Kirk's tone became nervous and cracked as if his job depended on him finding that one number.
"First time for everything." Lorelai rolled her eyes, loosing patience quickly. She could hear Kirk typing away, "It appears it's unlisted."
"Big surprise, well thanks any way."
"So any word on burger boy?" Rory came back in the living room with a soda.
"He's a man I'll have you know,…" Lorelai was distracted still trying to figure where he would go when not in the diner.
"Dirty!"
"And he is still … missing?"
"Missing? Luke doesn't go missing?" just as confused as her mother.
"24 hours with no word to loved ones, I call that missing!"
"okay okay calm down… how about you just swing by the diner, just in case he's back?"
"Good idea…. I'll see you later." But Lorelai was still sorting through worst case scenarios in her head.
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Sure, it had been easy to see Luke with the ball preparations as an excuse, or making him come to the Inn or the house for repairs, but now she couldn't even find him. Hell even before they were a couple, he was always just around, in the same spot, without fail. But now she wanted to see him, To talk to him, to make up, to find out what was wrong, hold him, Kiss him. Down Girl! And he was no where to be found.
Lorelai came in the diner and saw Ceasar and Ben, for the fourth time that day, working hard in the diner man's absence. She decided to slip behind the curtain and check out upstairs. First thing, Girlfriend needs his number.
She knocked on the door doubtful he would be home, the obnoxious music was her first clue.
And mono syllable boy answered. "yeah?"
Lorelai still felt awkward around Jess since he walked in on her and Luke,"Is Luke home?"
"Nope," Jess offered flatly.
"Well, do you know where he went?"
"Nope."
"Did he say when he'd be back?"
"Nope."
BIG FAT HELP! "So how are you Jess?" she was frustrated, but figured she should make an effort to get to know Luke's nephew, especially now.
"Fine."
WOW, a new word! "So, How's school?"
"Fine."
"Okay well, I'll let you go. Just tell Luke I stopped by, … please?"
"Will do."
Wow, two words … a real break through. We've got to work on their communication, and she hoped a real murder wasn't the reason Luke was missing And she headed back downstairs. She got a Coffee to go, just the thing for her nerves, and tried yet again not to worry about where Luke had gotten himself off too. Then it hit her, and she hopped into her Jeep.
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"Why Lorelai? this is a surprise!" Maisy exclaimed.
"Hello Maisy" Lorelai smiled, the warm woman always made her feel welcome, Emily should take lessons
"To what do I owe this little visit?"
"Ummmm, has Luke been here today?"
"Oh no, he wouldn't come in today?"
Lorelai sunk again, "Oh, well it was worth a shot. I've seemed to have lost him."
"Well, I find that hard to believe, he's crazy about you."
Lorelai had to blush a little, and add solemnly, "Well that is nice to know, I'm pretty crazy about him too. Well I'll just try calling him again." Maybe he's home now…
"Oh no, he won't answer," Maisy said knowingly.
"Why not?"
"Don't you know what today is?"
"Ummmm No?" I'm guessing it's not date night.
"Sit down, dear," then Maisy called over her shoulder, "Buddy! Two coffees over here please." And Maisy ushered Lorelai to a table near the back.
Buddy brought the coffee to the pair, "Oh, Lorelai how nice to see you!"
"Buddy, please! we're having a little girl talk here." Maisy said in her no nonsense, sweet scolding tone that was the older couples way of saying they loved each other but "don't bother me".
"Say goodbye before you leave, Lorelai," and Buddy was off again.
Lorelai smiled after Buddy, and turned her attention back to Maisy who looked very serious. Lorelai took a sip of the coffee, it wasn't as good as Luke's, but any Coffee was better than none. It's only my 6th cup today.
Then Maisy began to explain, "Lorelai, today is the 30th of November, and on the 30th of November, no one can find or talk to Luke. He is … not himself."
Lorelai began to wonder if she was dating some sort of annual Werewolf or incredible Hulk, Only on the 30th of November?
"You see, It was 12 years ago today … that Luke's father past."
And sudden understanding washed over Lorelai, "oh Maisy, … I didn't know…"
"Yes well, his father is a sensitive issue, you may have noticed. Buddy tried to talk him into remodeling the diner, or taking down that hardware sign. " Maisy smiled at Lorelai " I understand, you strong armed him into repainting the diner recently."
Actually, it wasn't that hard at all, he had agreed pretty quickly. To be with me, I guess… "Well, I ended up painting it without him knowing," she gave a small smile, thinking of bribing the bread guy to let her in.
"Well Luke wouldn't budge with Buddy. Luke's a bit … stubborn, like his father was. Katherine, Luke's mother, would call it steadfastness. She always had a way to look at the positive side of things. You could almost see how losing her made Luke and Will both such … skeptics, pessimists."
Maisy continued " on this day every year, Luke just withdraws … you know, well, more than usual. Usually he just sits in his apartment, going through his father's things, never answering the phone. But with that hoodlum living there now, Lord knows where he's gotten too. His temper is shorter, and he figures rather than hurt people he cares about he just removes himself from the situations. Personally, I hope you find him. I don't think it's healthy for him to brood like this alone. After all, it wasn't his fault his father died, Will was sick, he had been for along time. I guess Luke always figured his dad was too stubborn to die."
When Lorelai was able to speak again …"Thank you for telling me."
"You're welcome, dear. you know, you're the first of his girls he's brought here. And I have to say, Buddy and I like you, we have a good feeling about the two of you. So treat him right, give him his space today, but don't take any of his crap."
Sage advise from the blunt Maisy. "I won't, and thank you" and Lorelai was about to head home, when she got a another hunch she couldn't shake.
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Lorelai's gut turned out to be right. She found Luke at the cemetery, she walked up beside him weeding the graves of his parents.
Startled by her presence, "What are you doing here?" he barked. Luke was understandably cranky. She didn't take it personally, knowing he didn't mean it, now knowing why he wasn't himself lately. Lorelai did have about a million responses, all funny, none appropriate for the moment. "I could ask you the same thing, … I've been looking for you," she said gently.
Well you found me! "Why?"
"Cause… I care about you, and I was worried… it's not often you go missing without a word to any one." She knelt down beside him.
Luke took a deep breath still pulling at the offensive weeds.
Chancing to rub a hand on his back, "Why didn't you tell me", her voice was gentle sensing a darkness, a sadness she had never seen in him before.
"Didn't think we were speaking, … so…" Luke only shrugged.
Lorelai didn't know what to say next. After all, she spent years wishing her parents weren't around, and here was a man who lost his mother so young, and a father he was actually connected with, just when hew as becoming a man. She focused on the head stones her boyfriend was carefully pruning.
Katherine Danes
William Danes
It was obvious he wasn't ready to talk, and she wasn't quite sure how to make him feel better. so she said the first thing that popped in her head.
"Hi … I'm Lorelai," and she introduced herself to his parents. "I don't know if Luke has mentioned me. I'm his girlfriend. Actually we've been friends for a long time. And apparently, we each had our own little crushes on each other… but you know, … we didn't want to ruin our beautiful friendship. But then my daughter, did I tell you about my daughter? Her name is Rory, she's 17, please don't do the math on that… that's another story entirely. …Well Luke here has been so great to both of us… I bet you two have the big Luke picture screen up 24/7, am I right? I myself find it hard to take my eyes off him…"
"Lorelai."
"… cause he's an amazing guy…"
"You can stop now."
"Hey I'm not talking to you, I'm talking to Mom and Dad," She teased.
Luke took her hand, "Thanks".
"I was worried." They just sat in the grass, but Lorelai had to ask. "do you think Jess might want to … come out here? I don't know, pay his respects? Does he even know what today is?"
Luke didn't say anything, so she offered "you wanna come home with me … we can just talk, I'm still you're friend Luke, … the sex is just a bonus," She smiled.
"A bonus huh?"
"An incredible bonus."
"Hey, not in front of my folks, … we want mom and dad to think you're a lady.."
"You're right, I apologize", happy he was finally playing along.
"so, how did you find out?"
"Maisy"
"Ahhhh"
"Come home with me, … spend the night with me."
Luke took a another breath. He didn't want to have to be alone anymore. "Okay."
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A/N: okay so I had the last half of this written first about …. 2 months ago, and then I had to go back I and connect ch 15 to ch 16 soooooo tell me what you think….
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"That was all God given talent..." why thank you Luke!
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R/R: PLEASE, I like to better myself. To quote The Princess Bride,
"...Remember this is for posterity, ... so be honest."
Please be specific with R/R; name one (or as many as you can think of or want to mention..…) at least specific thing you liked
Please! It makes me feel good...inside (Dirty!)
Hence the Rant option below.
Insert Rant here V
A/N: if not completely satisfied with this chapter, please return unused portion for a full refund …
