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A/N1: thanks you very very very very much to people who do review and show me what They think of the story. I'm a bit down this times becauseI can get more then 3 reviews per Chapters and I want to tell you if you read my chapters and that you found them shitty you reviews and say so ... so I know if my work is good or bad and if it is worth I continue to write ...

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Danny decided to process the inside of the motel room again, searching for any prints or blood spatter they hadn't found yet, maybe the SOB who did this had missed something. Lindsay and Danny were asking themselves how a man could do this to a woman, and the only thing Danny wanted to do was to put the sick bastard as far away from daylight as possible.

Lindsay processed the entry of the room, she put dust prints on the doorframe knowing that she wouldn't find anything, she dusted the lighter, she went so to the escape stairs and searched for some blood, they hadn't looked at before. She found a small drop of blood on a stair, she took a swab of it, cautiously put the evidence into her box and then searched for hairs or prints, but she was interrupted by the sound of a fired shot.

She left her kit on the stairs and hurried down to the lobby taking out her gun and preparing to shoot, she entered the room where Danny was processing. With her gun aimed she cleared the entry of the room, and saw Danny's legs, she went further into the room and saw Mr. Bahill with his gun aiming at Danny's head, Danny was already shot in his stomach, his shirt was tainted with blood, his eyes were closed.

Lindsay looked at Danny, his injured body lying on the floor, and then looked up at Bahill with her gun still aimed at him. He screamed at her "put your gun down or your 'partner' is a dead man."

Lindsay had no choice, for Danny's life she had to do as she was told, so she put her gun on the floor. And then she went over to Danny and kneeled down at his side, she took his hand and searched for his pulse. He had one, a weak one, but he still was alive.

Bahill grabbed her arm, hurting her, he took her up and then threw her against the wall, then he put the gun at his belt in his back, and took advantage of the fact that Lindsay was disoriented to press himself against her.

"So how is it Detective Monroe" he said with his cruel voice taking her two hands and blocking them with one hand putting them behind her back. Her wrists were hurting like hell. Her own weight pressing against it she gasped in pain.

"You have to learn how to obey to men, your 'partner' didn't show you how to please men, how to obey them." he said while his other hand wandered all over her body, under her shirt.

Lindsay was trying to get away form his grip. She hit him and bit him when he began to cup her face, she jerked her body and hit him between his legs, he reacted by hitting her hard with his fist. When he saw her still fighting him he took his gun, and she stopped to move when she felt the stinging pain in her legs, she felt the fire of the shot and the coolness of her blood dripping out of her legs.

Lindsay scream at the pain in her legs, she couldn't stand up anymore the burning sensation in her legs was way too strong, she let herself down the wall escaping the grip of Bahill, she thought about Danny all the things she should have do before , she closed her eyes, shutting her off of the sounds around her she was lost between pain and sorrow she shouldn't have hide her past to Danny he was her boyfriend and he deserved to know. She breath slowly and then another gunshot make itself heard.


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