New Note November 30, 2007, Okay, I couldn't update yesturday, because I had 2 testes and a ton of homework, And my play practice didn't end until 5:30, counting the time it took me to get home. Also when I put up the last 2 chapters my edidtor didn't edit it, cuz I really wanted to get them up, so don't blame her, Ias promise By tomorrow there will be a chapter up, sorry, oh and remmebered how I promised, to have a chapter, everyday or every other day. I can't d that it's alot of pressure, and I am not getting as good grades as I can, so I need to work on my school, suff, so I promise to update as much as I can don't give up on me!!! Because I WILL update, and sometimes if I am busy not as often but, I AM NOT dropping this story so hang in there!!!

-smartchic

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Chapter 5

Slowly turning my I przhead toward the bushes from where I heard the sound, I searched the forest. Eyes blind and couldn't't seem to adjust to the darkness. My breaths were loud and short, and I could feel my heart pounding faster and faster ever second. My hands fumbled around for the car door, slowly I opened it. I was greeted by the cool air, which stung at my face.

Carefully and quietly, my feet, went to the ground, making no noise as I landed . I felt the echoes of my walking, normally, they wouldn't bother me, but each step I took bringing me closer to the forest was loud at my ears, I don't know what crazy thing had possessed me to head toward the forest , but I was heading there, and wouldn't stop walking. I felt the ardeliene (is that how you spell it?) grab me with each step I took.

I saw a flash of red. Fire? No why would there be a fire? Letting out a shallow breath and Trembling from head to toe,( both from the coolness of the night, and the fear, scraping at my body.) My hand reached the bush and pulled it apart. That was when I felt it. I felt a power so huge. It was making me walk deeper into the forest, I wanted, I needed to stop walking, but my body would not do so. I was lulled deeper into the forest unable to prevent myself from walking. The tug my body felt was going stronger as I went deeper into the forest, as if someone beside me was pushing me. When I stopped, in front of me I saw a red headed gorgeous creature , with red crimson, eyes fully showing the hunger. For what? Her face turned deadly, my knee's buckled beneath me. Sending me to the ground. I was on the cold ground, once again unable to move, staring at her eyes, hoping that whatever she was going to do to me, she would do it quickly.

ALICE POV

I was thinking of Bella, Bella was interesting to me, something about this girl was different. Having overheard her story at lunch I was shocked. So many people were drawing the wrong conclusion about her. I felt a huge fury toward whoever did this to her, and that was the frustrating thing. Bella never mentioned his name, she never said if this man was caught, another thing that was puzzled me was the reaction Edward had to Bella wanting to, kill her. I don't know what had stopped him though; I had many visions of Bella dead and Edward staring at Bella trying to wake her up, but knowing she was gone. Jasper stared at me, all the emotions I was feeling were probably a lot for him I smiled at Jasper nervously.Then I heard the door open. Edward walked in, his eyes extra light. I felt my mind close dropping the images in front of me, my eyesight, looking and seeing something else, somewhere else…

A girl was stepping out of her car scared. She looked toward the forest. I watched as she walked to some bushes. Within the bushes I saw a pale face looking at this girl with hunger. My heart almost stopped, oh no, Bella. Bella's head looked up to where the face was but it quickly moved away, Bella only seemed to catch the red of the vampires hair. Bella walked to where vampire was previously hiding; I noticed that by Bella's steps she wasn't moving herself, someone was forcing her. My breathing stopped I watched in horror as the rest of my vision played it's self out. I saw Bella walk further into the forest, the force that was pushing her growing stronger, Bella's eyes were wide with naked fear, all at once Bella dropped to the cold earthy ground, the vampire approaching her…

That was when it ended. "Dammit!" I swore loudly, I looked around somehow all my family had appeared, everyone but Edward was staring at me worried, and wondering. "We have to save her!" Edward yelled, his tone icy, and sharp, the expression he wore, would send a human off a bridge. "Edward, go find her. Help her. Make sure she doesn't get hurt." I chocked out. Edward abruptly looked at each family member and headed off to search, his expression still fierce. I talked quickly filling my family in "Bella is going to get attacked, we need to save her, before-"I couldn't finish the sentence Bella was a sweet girl, I liked her, and her baby, she had gone through so much to keep it alive to have it go to waste. "How much trouble can this girl get in?" I heard Rosalie mumble quietly to herself. I yelled in frustration. "Come on! we have to go!" Desperation taking over

We all left, running, Rosalie and I in front, sniffing out her scent.

Bella's Pov.

I felt the presence of her as she, rushed up to me, in seconds. How did she get here so fast? There was an Evil smile on her face, white teeth gleaming. She was advancing toward me, mouth wide open, I braced myself "NO!" I heard a sharp angry voice yell. Suddenly the woman was gone. Who ever yelled had run into her, sending her flying into a tree on impact, which should have made her unconscious. But she showed little pain. I watched in fear. "Stay away!" I heard a loud growl come from my savior. The voice, I know it. Edward. I stayed frozen to the ground Breathing hard and shaking uncontrollably. Edward let out a roar, so nasty and menacing that for the first time I saw fear, in the woman's eyes.

Before I could blink she was gone, like she magically disappeared. Edward let out a frustrated growl. I got the feeling that he wanted to go after her. I was still on the ground scared that she might come back. And even worse for me, I was scared for Edward. That in it's self was stupid, but still I felt my self getting up ready to ask if he was hurt, he was next to my in a flash, helping me up. I remembered my self almost falling. My legs, forgetting to hold me up, but Edward caught me around my waist, and pulled me up, we were close to each other. My breath was caught in my throat.

Edward was still holding me up to his side when he asked. "Are you alright?" his worry hit me at full blast.

I wanted to stop thinking like this. I should be avoiding him, after what he did this afternoon, but in these circumstance, when I was so close, to him, his icy body so close to my shivering one . My mind didn't seem to work rationally, Edward was hoping for a response. I just nodded my head trying to say something,but I was unable to speak. I still felt my self shaking and he did too, he instantly let go of me, probably trying to keep me warm, he didn't know all I wanted at the moment was to be close to him.

I stood there unable to talk. I was trying to correct my breathing.

"Bella can you talk to me?" Edward pleaded. Concerned. "Yes" my voice barley came out as a whisper.

Edward heard me. I felt a gust of wind blow. Edward stiffened, and stepped further away from me.I felt the hurt from this afternoon return

"My family is coming and will take you home." Edward choked out. Very tense, his jaw clenched. I felt stupid again and I flushed. He.Did.Not.Care.For.Me. He got even more tense, taking a slow step toward me. It looked like he was fighting a war inside him. After minutes he stepped back, closing his eyes and rubbing his temples, Giving up on something

"BELLA! EDWARD?" I heard voices calling Edward opened his eyes and looked toward the direction from where the sound came from. I saw Rosalie and Alice appear, behind them 3 men, and a motherly looking woman appear, all of them gorgeous.

"We hurried up just now, I saw something Edward." Alice said sternly, glancing at me. "Bella?" Alice said as she approached. "Are you okay?" "Don't worry about me." I said quickly. Looking at the ground.

Alice introduced her family to me on the way, back to there car.and I noticed that Edward was helping me around all the things that would surely trip me.

Every time he touched me, my heart raced up, then I felt sad, he shouldn't't have this effect on me. He already proved he didn't like me. The car ride was quiet the events replaying in my head. I had many questions going through my mind. How did Edward know where to find me, I hadn't made a sound? Or had I? I don't remember. And the speed! How can anyone be so fast, and strong, My eyes drooped, how far had I driven today?. My head fell on Edwards, cold stony chest. "What 'bout my car?" I slurred sleepily, before everything went black.

I am actually letting people touch me now. Was the first thing I thing I thought when I woke up. Surprisingly I was in my bed tucked underneath the blankets. Did yesterday really happen? I thought. You might understand why, I didn't believe anything that had happened yesterday. There were lots of things to figure out.

How did this mystery women plan on killing me? All that I remembered was her opening her mouth and advancing toward my neck. Oh God. The only thing that I heard of, that targeted necks for killing, were vampires. I shuddered. There was no way that could be true. Could it? I sat in my bed more confused as ever, half believing, half not. My mind set to work .

Vampires drank people's blood, they couldn't go out during the day, garlic and crosses were bad for them. Prodding my mind, I tried to think of some other things I knew for sure. Vampires were supposed to be seductive, dark, able to draw you in, make you come without thinking. Gasping, I thought about the people able to do that. The Cullen's. And what about the force that had me possibly walking to my death. I paced my room. The Woman and the Cullen's all had a similar look, all deathly pale. And.All.Inhumanly.Gorgeous. I was not thinking rationally I thought, shaking my head in disbelief. But heart told me otherwise. I knew deep down, these were, rational thoughts.

There was for sure something not human about the Cullen's and defiantly that woman, but could that non-human thing be vampirism? I focused on characteristics, which were defiantly not human. I thought about Edward what was different about him? His eyes! They changed colors; maybe it was the same for the rest of the Cullen's, and the red eyes. Could that mean something? Grabbing my Toiletries I headed for the bathroom peeking at the clock

6:45 am. I had time before school started. (And this is sort of from the twilight book; it sounded right to put in) Three things I knew for sure. The Cullen's had a lot of explaining to do for me today, They were defiantly not human. And I was possibly falling in love with someone who might not be human at all, a person that maybe thirsted to drink my blood. I was in some deep shit.

I hoped you liked this chapter, it's slightly longer than my previous chapter, by a couple hundred words! Please review!

ask any questions if you are confused on some things.

-smartchic :)