Okay, huge apology for the multiple changes in chapter five. I was in the process of writing the sixth chapter (which, as you probably guessed, was essentially a sex scene) when I realized that I have already exposed Edna enough. I have already stripped her of her sanity, dug into her mind, and stripped her physically and emotionally.
I deemed it inappropriate to continue this assault on her dignity, and have hence decided to end the story here. But don't fret, the plot bunnies are appearing out of the bushes and a few ideas may perhaps be occurring to me for a separate story, in which Kelly will be present.
Again, I am so sorry for my indecisiveness!
FM