Ok, I so hate first chapter's, but let me now if you like it and think I should continue.

I sighed as I watched Bluepaw train, she sure was pretty, but she liked Tanglepaw, everyone liked Tanglepaw, he was the great fight, he was the great hunter, he was the one with the great personality, he was the most handsome, he was the smartest, he was the one obviously destined to become the next clan leader, he was the cat I couldn't stand to most! Everything seemed to revolve around Tanglepaw, I hated it. Compared to him, I'm nothing, "Grasspaw! Have you gone deaf! You vs. Tanglepaw, Now!" Tornriver snapped.

I looked over at Tanglepaw and groaned inwardly, here comes more humiliation, with a sigh I stood and padded over to where Tanglepaw was standing and stood across from him. Tanglepaw gave me an encouraging smile, which made me feel bad about hating him, he was so nice, he was cocky, or over confident, or stuck up, I don't even think he acknowledges skilled he is, that's what makes it so hard to go around hating his guts, just because he's better then me, "Alright, when I say go I want you both to give it your all, got it?" Silvershadow mewed, her green gaze resting proudly on her apprentice Tanglepaw for a second, the she mewed her command, "Go!" and the two of us began to circle each other.

Tanglepaw pounced first, and I, thinking quickly, jumped back so he'd miss, then as he landed I swung a sheathed paw him. Which he dodged and sprung swiftly at me, tackling me to the grass ground, he tried to pin me, but I batted at his belly with my hind legs, and he flew back a few tail lengths, I stood and pounced at him, we rolled around on the ground swatting at each other until we heard the call, "Alright that's enough, the two of you did very well." Silvershadow called.

Tanglepaw and I broke away from each other, "Wow! You're really good at fighting! Great battle!" Tanglepaw mewed enthusiastically, amber eye's brimmed with excitement.

I force myself to smile and say, "Thank you, you're really great too."

"Tanglepaw! You were great! You too Grasspaw!" Bluepaw mewed padding over to us, I stood looking at her dumb struck, usually Bluepaw didn't even acknowledge that I existed.

"Thanks, Bluepaw," Tanglepaw said, then he gave me a funny look, "Grasspaw? Are you ok?" he asked.

I inwardly shook myself out of it, "Yeah, I'm fine, th- thanks." I mewed.

"Alright, that's enough battle practice for today, you all are free for now." Silvershadow mewed then she, Tornriver, and Ravenwhisker turned and padded away.

"Hey, Tanglepaw, do you want to go hunting? Bluepaw asked, he pretty hazel eye's glowing as she looked at him.

"Sure, hey Grasspaw, do want to come to?" he asked, turning to me, disappointment flashed in Bluepaw's eyes, and she looked at me with a slight glare.

I shook my head, "No thank you." I said, not wanting to get on Bluepaw's bad side.

"Are you sure? Come on it'll be fun." he said.

"No it's ok, I uh- am really hungry, I'm going to go back to camp and get something to eat." I said and turned away before he could protest again.

"Hi, Grasspaw." Onyxpaw mewed, as I entered the medicine cat's den.

"Hey, Onyxpaw…" I mewed dully.

"What's up?" he asked, sensing the depression in my voice. Onyxpaw was my best friend and the only one who knew I liked Bluepaw, and completely hated Tanglepaw.

"Bluepaw went hunting with Tanglepaw, he offered me to come, and Bluepaw glared at me." I sighed, and sat down.

"Grasspaw, I don't understand why you like her so much, I mean sure she's pretty, but she doesn't know you exist." he sighed, sitting next to me.

"She does to! She said great jod to me at battle practice today." I insisted.

"Where you fighting Tanglepaw?" my glossy black pelted friend asked.

"Yes.."

"That's why, she was trying to make sure she looked good in front of Tanglepaw." he stated, his deep green eyes giving me a sympathetic look.

"Your probably right, but at least she knows my name, right?" I said.

"Wow, every cloud does have a silver lining." Onyxpaw meowed sarcastically.

"Gee, thanks for the encouragement." I said just as Sarcastically. Onyxpaw purred in agreement, then we heard a wail from the main clearing, we looked at each other and then sprinted toward the exit to the medicine cat's den.

We saw Bluepaw panting looking around wildly, as other cat's stared at her. Bluepaw's Hazel eye's rested on us and she jolted toward us, "Grasspaw, Onyxpaw! Tanglepaw was kidnapped.!" she yowled frantically.

Let me know what you think! I'd love to continue this story, but theres no point unless people like it.