I have decided to continue this story.
We saw Bluepaw panting looking around wildly, as other cat's stared at her. Bluepaw's Hazel eye's rested on us and she jolted toward us, "Grasspaw, Onyxpaw! Tanglepaw was kidnapped.!" she yowled frantically.
"What? Do you know what happened to him?" Onyxpaw mewed.
"No! He just all of a sudden ran of! He didn't even say anything! I ran after him but then he crossed the boarder out of clan territory." she mewed.
"What? Why?" I mewed.
"I don't know!" She mewed.
"We should tell, Dawnstar." Onyxpaw mewed.
"No! I don't want to get him in trouble!" Bluepaw snapped.
"Bluepaw, he could get hurt out there." Onyxpaw said calmly.
"Can't the three of us just go and find him? Please?" she asked.
"We have to tell, Dawnstar." He mewed.
"Can we at least wait until tomorrow, incase he comes back?" she reasoned.
I looked at Onyxpaw, "Fine, but then we tell if he's not back." I mewed.
"Ok." she mewed.
"Now we should all get some rest because it's getting late." Onyxpaw advised.
"Alright we will, come on Grasspaw!" Bluepaw said, then nudged me toward, the apprentice den. Once we got to the apprentice den Bluepaw practically tackled me into the den, "Grasspaw," Bluepaw began, I sat up, "You'll come with me tonight to look for Tanglepaw won't you?" she said giving me a sad face.
"Well, uh," I began, "ok, yeah I'll go with you." I mewed.
Bluepaw smiled and let out a purr, "Oh thank you Grasspaw! Thank you! You're the best!" she said then licked me on the cheek, "Let's go to sleep now, we'll leave when everyone's asleep. " she mewed then when to her nest at the other side of the den.
I sighed and curled up in my nest whish was the closest to the entrance and fell asleep.
I looked around wildly, I was in an unfamiliar wood, and there was a horrible screeching sound coming from all around, I ran forward and suddenly something flashed out from in front of me, I recognized the smell. Crow. It had red eyes and green black feathers and was huge, and its beak was bent like a hawk's, it lashed out at me with it's unusually sharp talons and tore strait through my flesh, the crow flew off and I dropped to the ground as extreme pain flowed through my body, and I heard whispers run though my head, but I couldn't make out the words. Then suddenly I heard someone's voice through the whispers, "Grasspaw! Wake up!"
I gasped as my eyes flew open and I jumped up so fast I could have sworn I shifted in my pelt, "Grasspaw? Are you ok?" Bluepaw asked.
"Ye- yeah, I'm fine. Are you read?" I asked.
Bluepaw nodded, "Yeah let's go." she said and slipped out of the den.
"So, this is where Tanglepaw started running off?" I asked.
Bluepaw nodded, "Yeah, then he went… that way!" she said, and pointed with her tail, "lets go!" she yelled and ran off, I quickly ran after her. I ran as fast as I could to keep up with Bluepaw's swiftness, until finally she stopped, and the scent of un familiar ground hit me, "and that's where he disappeared to." Bluepaw mewed, looking out over the boarder to the unknown territories.
"We're not crossing into unknown territory are we?" I mewed, Bluepaw turned to me.
"No." she mewed, "let's go back." she said and turned I followed her.
"Hey, Grasspaw, wake up!" someone mewed in my ear, I opened my eyes to see Rippedpaw, "Some apprentice from Breezeclan showed up here, they look pretty badly beaten." she said then left the den, I quickly stood and followed after her.
As I stepped out of the apprentice den a rustling came from the bramble's that lined the clan entrance and three Breezeclan warrior's entered, "Well it's seem our scum has come to seek shelter in the soft hearted Stormclan, but I will warn you now Dawnstar, those two are murders." a cat I recognized as Mountainstone mewed glaring at the apprentices.
"We are not!" one of the apprentices hissed, a grey and black tom, said as he stood before the other apprentices, a tortoiseshell she cat and a blue grey tom.
"Silence traitor!" hissed a she cat known as Leafshadow.
"Enough! Foreign warriors are not welcome here! You three will leave." Dawnstar hissed, the three apprentices shrunk as he turned her gave to them, "you three may stay for now." she said more gently.
"We warned you Dawnstar! Your trust will be the end of you! Just like Mothstar!" hissed Leafshadow.
"Leave now! There is no way an apprentice could kill Mothstar." she hissed, the three Breezeclan warriors whipped around and left. Dawnstar turned to the apprentices, "what are your names?" she asked.
"I am Hawkpaw, these are Bridlepaw and Runningpaw." the grey and black tom told her. The tortoiseshell, Bridlepaw was unconscious and the grey blue tom, Runningpaw, looked to be in shock.
"The three of you should go to Featherfoot so she can treat you." Dawnstar instructed.
"Yes." Hawkpaw said then nudged Runningpaw to get him walking, Dawnstar picked up the small body of Bridlepaw and carried her toward the medicine cat den.
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