Heres the six chapter, and I decided to expand on some scenes in the song

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A Sandshrew was backed up against a tree, cornered by a Seviper who was hungry for a Sandshrew sandwich. But then…BOOM! "SEVIP!" The Seviper fell to the ground with the branch, leaving the Sandshrew very confused.

"HA! I love this baby!" cried Rai, stroking the ecto-blaster.

Edward sighed. "You couldn't just lift and walk, or crawl under, like a sane human being?"

Look out new world here we come
Brave, intrepid and then some
Pioneers of maximum

Rai sat on Patrick's shoulder, frowning at the map. "I just don't get it…but okay!" he smiled. He sat on Patrick shoulders and pointed forward, yelling "Charge! WHOA!"

Audacity whose resumes
Show that we are just the team

To live where others merely dream
Building up a head of steam

Edward looked up as he saw Patrick running into the greenery, Rai on his shoulder. "Hey!"

Right behind him, Patrick and Rai reemerged. raimundo consulted the map in confusion. "Okay, this is officially not right."

To live where others merely dream
Building up a head of steam

Edward sighed and went to the map. "Um, Rai, would this help?" he asked, as he turned the map right-side-up. Rai paused and laughed nervously. "Oh, yeah, thanks dude. CHARGE!"

Patrick charged forward, once again leaving Edward behind. "What-?" He slapped his forehead in frustration and noticed the Sandshrew eyeing him. "What are you lookin' at!"

"INCOMING!" cried Rai. It turned out that he and Patrick had run a full circle, and Patrick ran right at Edward, tossing him up onto his shoulder.

"WHOA!"

On the trail we blaze

Patrick Runs as Raimundo sees Edward about to trot off Patrick. Rai turns Edward frontward as they ride Pat and look at the map.

Changing legend into fact

We shall ride into history

At night, Rai sees another clue, a canyon that has an outside shape of a Lugia. Edward was not impressed and left out unknown that they were on a shadow of Lugia on the ground.

Turning myth into truth

We shall surely gaze

On the sweet unfolding

Rai was blasting away at the greenery in front of them, obviously very pleased to be handling a blaster. "Don't worry, Edward, as soon as this stuff is out of the way, we can-Edward?"

Edward was walking in the water, and was waist-deep by now. "See you on the other side," he called.

"Ed? Edward, I wouldn't do that!"

"AAAHHH!"

Later, Rai was sitting behind Edward, who had his shirt rolled up to expose his back. "Okay, a few more…" reassured Rai as he pulled off another wriggling leech.

"OW!"

"Well, I warned you…

Of an antique mystery

All will be revealed

On the trail we blaze

Rai sees a rock wall with a rock craving of a Carvanha. Edward was on the river again but decides to hop on rock if the leeches come back for him.

Unfortunately, a Carvanha comes and bites Edward on the rear end. "Ow! Ow! Ow! Ow! Ow!" Edward yells in pain as he runs. Rai, and Patrick watch him with an awkward look.

On the trail

On the trail we blaze

"Ooowww…" Edward sat on a rock, trying not to think about the massive pain in his rear, when Rai came over.

"Hey, I think I taught that Carvanha a lesson," he said, beaming. "Dinner is served!"

At that moment, the Sandshrew appeared out of nowhere and swallowed the dead fish in one bite.

Patrick smiled. "aw its cute like a jellyfish but without the sting…"

Edward glared. "It ate my food…"

Paradise is close at hand

Edward and Rai saw Patrick in a pool of water and hot steam. They took off their clothes and jump in to join with the boys.

Shangri-la

Edward and Rai relaxed as Mankey's come from the trees to watch the two.

The promised land

They swing happily. Suddenly, a Mankey drops and lands on Edward's pants which he saw. Rai then sees another Mankey with his shirt.

Seventh heaven on demand

The two Mankeys ran away as Edward and Rai chased them, naked. Patrick shuddered, seeing this, but laughed in amusement.

Quite unusual nowadays

Later on, Ed and Rai have their clothes back but were itchy from the fleas the mankey have. They scratched themselves as Rai follows the map.

Virgin vistas undefiled

Minds and bodies running wild

In the man behold a child

On the trail we blaze

Edward, Patrick, and Raimundo walk on a log and pass a large waterfall.

On the trail we blaze

The trail we blaze

It was now raining. Hard. Edward, Raimundo, and Patrick cover themselves with a giant leave. Edward gives Rai a glare.

Is road uncharted

Through terra incognita to a golden shrine

Edward, Rai, and Patrick come to a pond, rocks, and waterfall.

No place for the traveler

To be fainthearted

Edward looks at the map and sees that they look like a crying person, just like on the map.

We are part of a sumptuous grand design

Rai raises a brow and smiles, seeing Edward now having an adventure.

Changing legend into fact

We shall ride into history

The travelers walk and saw a cave that spurred butterflies out of its mouth, like the Tyranitar spurring fire on the map. They were close.

Turning myth into truth

We shall surely gaze

On the sweet unfolding

It was foggy. The boys come closer and heard a crack and more of them.

Of an antique mystery

All will be revealed

Suddenly, the Three fell off a cliff and tumbled down.

On the trail we blaze

Sandshrew saw them falling and joins as well. They fall roughly on the ground, but were alright, Edward sees the map flying down and landing on his face.

Ed looks at the map and sees the final key. On it, it shows a rock and the words, "El Dorado." Edward turns to see a giant rock like tablet, like in the map. Edward turns to the other side of rock to see if the city of gold was there. There wasn't. He turns to the other side. Still, wasn't there.

"Hmm," Edward wondered and touches the rock with tiny pieces falling. He comes to the knocked out Rai. "Raimundo." Edward said to him, "Rai, wake up."

Rai wakes up with Patrick waking up also. "We're there?" Rai asked.

"Oh, yeah." Edward said, "We found it."

"We found it?" Rai realized and had a smile on his face and gets up, "Oh! Fantastic! Where is it? How far?"

Edward smiled ironically. "It's right here."

"Where?"

"Here."

"Behind this rock?" asked Rai, looking behind the large carved boulder in front of them.

"No, this is it." Edward crossed his arms.

Rai blinked in confusion. "What? But that can't be-GIVE ME THAT?" he snatched the map away from Edward's hands and looked from the map to he rock. "But, but, but-"he sputtered.

"Apparently," said Edward, circling around Rai. "El Dorado is native for…Great…Big…" He finally lost his temper and shouted the last word. "ROCK!"

Rock…rock…rock… Patrick cocked his head to listen to the echo. "Why can't I make an echo?" Echo…echo…echo… "Oh, there's one! MAN, THAT'S COOL!"

ed glared at pat momentarily. "Be quiet. But tell you what," said Edward to his friend as he hoisted himself onto one of Patrick's shoulders. "I'm feeling gracious today, so you can have my share!"

"Edward," said Rai, still unable to believe, "You don't think that Chase got here first and-"

"And what?" asked Edward sarcastically. "Taken the really big rocks? No! That scoundrel!"

The map was shaking in Rai's hands. "Come on, Edward. We should think about this! I mean, we really should-"

"Get…on…the starfish," hissed Edward, emphasizing each word. Rai's lower lip quivered before he sighed, defeated, and started to climb onto Patrick's other shoulder.

"And don't give me the face!" Edward cleared his throat to regain his composure and pointed towards a section of forest. "Um, it looks like there's a path right over there."

None of the three noticed that a figure was charging towards them.

A girl in Water tribe clothing, Brown skin and hair tied in a braid was bolting her way through the mist towards the large rock, trying to catch her breath. She clutched something wrapped in cloth against her chest, turned a corner and…

BAP!

The girl fell to the ground, dropping the object to the ground. Patrick rubbed his stomach where the girl hit him. "Ouch," he muttered. Then he opened his eyes and saw the girl. "OH MY GOD, IT'S A DEMONESS!"

"It's not a demoness," muttered Edward.

"YES IT IS!" yelled Rai.

"NO, I'M NOT!" yelled the girl.

The three heard a charging sound and turns around. They saw natives coming their way.

"Hyah!" Edward cried, trying to make Patrick to move.

"Move Patrick!" Rai cried, "More!"

It was too late. The natives come and saw Edward, Ash, and Rai on Patruck's back. They gasp.

"I suppose your going to tell me there demons to?" Edward ask Rai and Patrick who just gave him a sour look

"Um…" The girl looked around and spotted the object in cloth. She lifted it up and threw it at the three. "Here, take it!"

Edward caught the object. "Hey!" He grinned sheepishly at the crowd below and threw it back. "I don't want it!"

She threw it back. "Take it!"

"Don't want it!"

"Yeah, it's probably cursed," chimed in Rai.

Edward threw it back one more time before facing ht e crowd again. "Um, heh-heh, I've-"

The object hit him in the side of the head, making him stop mid-sentence. He glared at the girl momentarily before trying again, forcing his voice to sound respectful.

"Um, hi. Is this your rock?" he asked, pointing. "We're sorry, we were just looking. We're uh…tourists! Tourists, that's right…May we go now-"

One of the crowd members thrusted a spear in his face, shutting him up immediately. Edward gulped. "Uh, look at that…spears…"

The leader of the crowd jerked his head and the others surrounded the four, aiming their spears at them. Edward gulped and tapped Patrick. "Looks like we have to follow them or something…"

The leader looks at him and nods at the native warriors. They surround Edward, Raimundo, and Patrick. They move out and the natives lead Patruck with the others to follow them with two natives, Temari and JP, holding the girl captive.

They turn to the other side and passed the rock. The sun hit where somehow its light shone on the rock, showing gold on it. Sandshrew comes and sees it. He spots the others and decides to follow them also.

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