VERY IMPORTANT!
Okay, if you have actually bothered reading this, I have some things that I really need a reviewers opinion on.
I have just read over this story and realised how childish I sound, and how disorted and rushed this story is. It made me cringe.
But I don't want to delete it. I said I would do a Prequel - but how can I, when this story makes everything clash with it?
But the idea itself - I love Dark Hermione fics, and I don't want to scrap this idea.
So, I'm proposing a Re-Write? It would basically be the vamped up version of this story, with small 'interludes' to get other characters' views on things.
And the best part is that it will have more Dramione, more evillness and it will include Hermione's first years at Hogwarts.
And it will make more sense. And it will be less OOC. Lavender would be replaced by a character that is more 'lovable', namely (this idea is credited to DuchessEliza) Luna. But she would come in a lot earlier, as would the replacement boy she falls for. And there will be longer - with more Ginny, Blaise, etc. And more Voldemort!
But, the problem is, that I have a lot of other fics going on, and I'm also moving schools.
So, I can't afford to re-write a whole story if nobody is actually going to read it.
SO, IF YOU WANT A RE-WRITE, PLEASE SAY SO NOW!
If you don't, and I don't get any responses, then I am perfectly happy leaving this story as it is. It doesn't bother me the slighest, because this fic is already finished.
If I get no response, then I will happily delete these last two chapters (The Author Notes) because I don't want anyone to get delusions of grandeur, and forget about this story.
I just thought I'd give you a chance to read the 'prequel' I've been promising, while bringing back the spark in this story. The spark that died towards the very, very rushed ending.
(I still can't believe I put Voldemort taking over Hogwarts and Hermione dying in the same chapter!)
Hopefully, I'll get some good encouragement? xx
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