Chapter 6: Who's the guy in the space suit?

Yea, I couldn't really bother to wait for any reviews so, I guess I'll write by myself anyway... I'm still waiting for reviews for a new character, which I need suggestions for, I kinda need reviews for a whole new character. But yea, as for the whole plan, I guess I'm on my own for that one, anyway... enjoy. Oh and Btw I think I'm going to keep typing in third person, it's easier.

"Welcome back everyone, to the second day of the Jubilife pokemon contest" Said the announcer to the crowd "Today, we will be continuing on the battle rounds in the semi-finals and the finals. The winner will win this fabulous Jubilife ribbon!" The announcer showed of the ribbon "remember, any co-ordinator that wins 5 contest ribbons from around the Sinnoh region qualifies to partake in the Sinnoh Grand festival!" she announced

Backstage

"Good luck Dawn, I'm sure you'll do fine" Said Ash

"Thanks, hope I win it" Dawn replied

"Dawn and Jacob, you're up" Said a Man in what appeared to be a spacesuit with a green coconut hair style

"Well" said Dawn nervously as she went up to the stage

"Welcome to the first battle of the day" Called the announcer "Our two hopefuls are Jacob Johnson and Dawn Ketchum both from pallet town, With 5 minutes on the clock begin!"

"Ok PIPLUP, take the stage!" Called Dawn as she released Piplup

"AHAHAHA, a piplup eh" Laughed Jacob "let's see how long it lasts against my Makuhita!"

"go piplup, peck!" dawn called out to piplup

"Makuhita stand strong" Jacob called out to the guts pokemon

Makuhita just stood as piplup pecked right in to makuhita

"Now Makuhita, PAY BACK!" Jacob said with a smirk

Makuhita began glowing red and looked to be getting angrier and angrier, when he was at his peak, it began charging toward piplup and punched it straight in the gut.

"No! Piplup" Dawn called out as her points drastically fell

"haha, you see, pay back is a move that attacks you back with double the power of your attack. Now makuhia, arm thrust!" said Jacob

The guts pokemon ran up and began punching the smaller penguin one non-stop till eventually piplup was unable to battle.

"Piplup is unable to battle, moving on to the next round is JACOB!" called the announcer

Backstage

"Sorry about the whole loss sis" Said ash comfortingly

"It's fine, I guess theres always more contests" said dawn sadly

"And the winner of the Jubilife ribbon is JACOB JOHNSON!" they heard the announcer yell

"Well at least I lost to the winner" Dawn continued sadly

"thank you, although I'm no here for the Ribbon. Assemble!" they all heard Jacob yell in a sinister tone before running on to stage to see that several people in spacesuits and green coconut haircuts dropping from a chopper above the stadium. "Grunts, there pokemon belong to us, NOW!" Jacob yelled to all of the Grunts

"Who are you people?" James called out at them

"who are, who are we? We are team galactic, soon to be the rulers of this universe, under our great leader and my colleagues Mars and Saturn we Team Galactic shall take everything that is worth taking, as for me, I am galactic commander Saturn!" The man replied

"Not if we can help it you won't. Go Turtwig and Sableye!" James said as he released his pokemon

"yea, Go chimchar, starly and dustox" Ash released his pokemon as well

"may as well, Go Beautifly, Piplup" Dawn released her pokemon too

"haha, twerps have 7 pokemon, galactic have 15. Give up before we hurt you" Saturn responded

"we don't care, sableye dark pulse, turtwig razor leaf go" James ordered the attack on the grunts

"Chimchar ember, dustox phybeam, starly gust" Ash ordered as well

"Piplup bubble, beautifly silver wind" Dawn joined in

"Grunts, release" Saturn ordered as all the grunts released zubat

"Aw crap" said Dawn loudly

"Well, we have three pokemon in the sky and four on ground... we're dead" James said

"Maybe not, Dustox and Starly, GUST!" Ash ordered

"May as well be useful, Beautifly gust as well" Called out Dawn

The harsh wind from the three flying types made it had hard for thee zubat to fly

"Grunts, attack" Saturn said calmly

The zubats all swarmed toward the three flying types even past the harsh winds

"Now medichamp, blizzard those zubat" Called a mysterious female voice

A floating pokemon unleashed a full force blizzard on the swarm of zubat pushing them down to the ground

"grr, grunts return, it's obvious we're out numbered. Escape while you can" Saturn said as he ran out to the exit

All the grunts quickly ran out toward their chopper attempting to get out on time

"Medichamp ice punch that chopper" ordered the girl

The phsycic pokemon attempted to knock down the chopper, however the chopper was out of reach and was unable to take it down due to the height of it's flight.

"starly wing attack" Ash attempted as well

Starly flew up and attempted to attack the helicopter, but just like medichamp, failed to hit it. Eventually it became clear that it was out of range and that they were going to get away.

"Damn, they got away" Said the girl upset "Sorry for your ruined contest today folks. Looks like team galactic got away"

"Hey! That's Candice!" Shouted a audience member "She's the snowpoint city Gym leader!"

"Yes, thank you for your recognition. Did anyone lose their pokemon or get injured?" Asked Candice

Nobody said anything

"Good, well if that's all then I'm off" said Candice about to leave

"Wait!" James called out to Candice

"Yes?" Candice asked

"Hi, I'm James and I'd like to challenge you to a gym battle" Said James

"Yea me too" Ash agreed

"haha, well I'm afraid that this is no place for a gym battle" Candice giggled "If you wanted a gym battle, you'll have to come up to my gym in snowpoint city"

"Wait, but that's all the way at the top of sinnoh, it's freezing there" Dawn exclaimed

"Well then if you want that badge that's where you go" Said Candice "As for now, I would recommend you challenge Roark. He's closest to here in Oreburgh"

"Wait, Roark!" James exclaimed shocked "He's the guy in the bush. He was spying on my training"

"Wait, so you've met the gym leader. Cool." Said ash impressed

"Well I must be off" said Candice as she made her exit

"Grr, He spied on me. He stopped my training because he didn't want a tough opponent" James said outraged

"Aw poor you. I don't even care that I lost my first contest compared to your story" Said dawn extremely sarcastically

"I thought you said you were ok with losing" Ash said

"No, I said there would be more contests. I never said I was ok with losing" Dawn replied

"Same thing" Said Ash back

"I beg to differ" Said dawn as she exited the hall as Ash and James followed

Back in the pokemon center

"I hope I never see those horrible team rocket people again" Said dawn outraged when she returned from dinner "they ruined my first pokemon contest"

"there there, get some sleep. Complain tomorrow." Said Ash sleepily

"Yeah. Well, Good Night" Said Dawn as she lay back and fell asleep

Dark Room

"Well Pluto, you have failed your mission today" Said a shady character in an armchair with Pluto on his knees before him

"I'm sorry sir, those pesky brats and that gym leader got in the way" Saturn replied fearfully

"Well, seeing as today was not a vital mission, I shall forgive you this time. But should you ever fail me again, there will be consequences" Said the man in the armchair

"Don't worry sir, I won't" Saturn replied thankfully

Well that's the most I could do without any inspiration. If it sucked then it's your fault so just sit there and feel ashamed in your shamefulness... Any way my new character option is still open, so give me your comments. Thank R&R.